Text Organization . Author's point of view with her personal experience (From one specific example to the general thesis) A specific example of the author,s poor piano-playing Paras,1-2 A general statement: The author is not ashamed of her incompetence in her hobbies; instead she enjoys doing them badly. Para. 3 The general thesis: Enjoying hobbies is no longer a mark of class. In the competitive world today we have to be“ experts” even in our hobbies Para. 4I. Author’s point of view with her personal experience (From one specific example to the general thesis) A specific example of the author’s poor piano-playing. A general statement: The author is not ashamed of her incompetence in her hobbies; instead she enjoys doing them badly. The general thesis: Enjoying hobbies is no longer a mark of class. In the competitive world today we have to be “experts” even in our hobbies. Paras. 1~2 Para. 3 Para. 4 Text Organization