Formality ° Example5: Then, there is another problem: different parties interests often correspond with the financial performance of the company. Then' is used here to list items(First, . Second Then,…,) This is often done in presentations but in writing it sounds too informal The sentence can be improved as follows Another problem is that different parties'interestsFormality • Example 5: • Then, there is another problem: different parties’ interests often correspond with the financial performance of the company. • ‘Then’ is used here to list items (‘First, ... Second, ... Then, ...’). • This is often done in presentations, but in writing it sounds too informal. • The sentence can be improved as follows: • Another problem is that different parties’ interests