Reader can follow the argument,but a little interference from errors of structure and choice of words,few errors in subject/ 25-31 Good verb agreement,most of main arguments presented,a little irrelevant information or lack of relevant examples,control of simple sentence structure,but errors in complex sentences. Ideas can be followed without too much difficulty on the part 24 Pass of the reader,argument lacks some coherence,a few errors of structure and choice of words are intrusive,control only of simple sentence forms,errors in subject/verb agreement. Difficult to follow ideas,argument weakly presented,some 16-23 Veak errors even in simple sentence formation,errors in structure and vocabulary are many and are somewhat intrusive. Errors in structure and vocabulary prevent much 0-15 Very Poor understanding of the message,serious errors in sentence formation,arguments not well presented. Here is a sample essay: We Should Complain About Bad Service The service sector is a very important economic activity in China.Services include hotels,restaurants,schools,stores,etc.When we pay for a service,they should satisfy our needs.When we do not receive what we expect,we should complain about it. When bad service is given and no one complains,the enterprise will keep giving the same bad service.We will let them know what they are doing wrong and we will give them the chance to improve.Consequently,they will take actions to satisfy not only you who complained,but also the rest of the clients who did not dare or bother to complain and had the same need as you. Another benefit of complaining is that the bad concept that people had about certain enterprises with bad service will change.The enterprise's reputation will improve and they will start offering service with quality thanks to previous complaints. If we are paying for a service,we do not need to endure bad moods or receive something we were not looking for.We must complain.This way,we will give people the opportunity to change and have the chance to get better service in the future. 说明：当总分出现0.5分时，在总分上加1分取整。 20925- 31 Good Reader can follow the argument，but a little interference from errors of structure and choice of words，few errors in subject/ verb agreement, most of main arguments presented, a little irrelevant information or lack of relevant examples，control of simple sentence structure, but errors in complex sentences. 24 Pass Ideas can be followed without too much difficulty on the part of the reader, argument lacks some coherence，a few errors of structure and choice of words are intrusive, control only of simple sentence forms, errors in subject/verb agreement. 16- 23 Veak Difficult to follow ideas, argument weakly presented, some errors even in simple sentence formation, errors in structure and vocabulary are many and are somewhat intrusive. 0- 15 Very Poor Errors in structure and vocabulary prevent much understanding of the message, serious errors in sentence formation, arguments not well presented. Here is a sample essay: We Should Complain About Bad Service The service sector is a very important economic activity in China. Services include hotels，restaurants，schools, stores, etc. When we pay for a service, they should satisfy our needs. When we do not receive what we expect，we should complain about it. Whenbad service is given and no one complains, the enterprise will keep giving the same bad service. We will let them know what they are doing wrong and we will give them the chance to improve. Consequently, they will take actions to satisfy not only you who complained, but also the rest of the clients who did not dare or bother to complain and had the same need as you. Another benefit of complaining is that the bad concept that people had about certain enterprises with bad service will change. The enterprise's reputation will improve and they will start offering service with quality thanks to previous complaints. If we are paying for a service，we do not need to endure bad moods or receive something we were not looking for. We must complain. This way, we will give people the opportunity to change and have the chance to get better service in the future. 说明:当总分出现 0.5分时，在总分上加 1分取整。 209