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如何写好一个段落(I) 段落的特征 一个好的段落应该具有以下三个特征: 1)完整性(completeness);2)统一性(unity);3)连贯性(coherence)。 1)完整性 段落的完整性指的是段落得以充分展开。作者写好主题句后,就应该用细节进行 推展,细节越充足越好。例如,你认为Riding motorcycles is dangerous'”,你就应 该用你所知道的事实证明这一观点是正确的。你可以使用数字(statistics),列 举例子(example),进行描绘(descriptions)等等。 示范段落1 Ever since the time of the Greeks,drama has played an important role in man's lives. The Greek tragedies and come dies were a central part of the citizens'lives in ancient Greece.During the Middle Ages,Bible stories were acted out in churches,and wandering companies of players performed in the streets.In modern times,drama is brought directly into people's homes through the magic of television. 示范段落分析 主题句:Ever since the time of the Greeks,drama has played an important role in man's lives 细节:l.ancient Greece 2.the Middle Ages 3.modern times 作者根据各个不同历史时期提供细节,举例说明戏剧的重要性。 2)统一性 一个好的段落应该具有统一性。统一性就是一个中心思想统领整个段落。每个细 节都应支持主题句,不应有无关的细节。为了支持主题,要尽可能多地提供细节, 但又要避免滥用细节。 读下面段落,然后找出毛病。 1Innovations,whether practical or aesthetic,are often resisted by the general population.2When the early experiments in the field of aviation began their work, there were many who said,"If God had wanted man to fly,he would have given him wings.(3The Wright brothers made the first powered flights in a heavier-than-air craft in 1903 at Kitty Hawk,North Carolina.(4Even today there are many who如何写好一个段落(Ⅰ) 段落的特征 一个好的段落应该具有以下三个特征: 1)完整性(completeness); 2)统一性(unity); 3)连贯性(coherence)。 1)完整性 段落的完整性指的是段落得以充分展开。作者写好主题句后,就应该用细节进行 推展,细节越充足越好。例如,你认为“Riding motorcycles is dangerous”,你就应 该用你所知道的事实证明这一观点是正确的。你可以使用数字(statistics),列 举例子(example),进行描绘(descriptions)等等。 示范段落 1 Ever since the time of the Greeks, drama has played an important role in man's lives. The Greek tragedies and come dies were a central part of the citizens' lives in ancient Greece. During the Middle Ages, Bible stories were acted out in churches, and wandering companies of players performed in the streets. In modern times, drama is brought directly into people's homes through the magic of television. 示范段落分析 主题句: Ever since the time of the Greeks, drama has played an important role in man's lives. 细节:1. ancient Greece 2. the Middle Ages 3. modern times 作者根据各个不同历史时期提供细节,举例说明戏剧的重要性。 2)统一性 一个好的段落应该具有统一性。统一性就是一个中心思想统领整个段落。每个细 节都应支持主题句,不应有无关的细节。为了支持主题,要尽可能多地提供细节, 但又要避免滥用细节。 读下面段落,然后找出毛病。 ① Innovations, whether practical or aesthetic, are often resisted by the general population.② When the early experiments in the field of aviation began their work, there were many who said, “If God had wanted man to fly, he would have given him wings. ③The Wright brothers made the first powered flights in a heavier-than-air craft in 1903 at Kitty Hawk, North Carolina. ④Even today there are many who
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