D Posted201203-1309:01:32 The idea is did not quite come out, Incomplete. Simon gather There seems to be a point to this story, even if it is just a literary sketch. But I doubt it was a piece Katherine intended to publish It's probaby something she wrote as practice that und after she had to the light and heat, shouting, laughing, squealing, as though they were being pushed by something, far below, and by the sun, far ahead of them - drawn up into the full, bright, dazzling The"what" is what I'm trying to figure out. D Posted2007-10-1814:59:52 I totally agree with the previous readers comment. What is the point of this stony? What is the story D Posted2007~09-1919:07107 Before the wolves start to feast, here' s an update to my previous comment: I confused Katherine Mansfield with a contemporary writer also on this site. I know Katherine Mansfield is long gone, Too bad we will never know what her intentions were when she wrote this story Posted2007-091918:4838 Wow, I was surprised that Katherine Mansfield is the author of this story. I usually love her work, but not this piece endless description with no plot, no storyline whatsoever. It seems more like the type of practice assignment you'd get in a creative writing class This isn't just an unfinished or incomplete piece. It's barely even started Out of curiosity, Katherine, what were you trying convey here? I think this would work better as a poem than ashort storyWhat? Plot? Protagonists? Point??