Part 3:Writing an Argument (40 points) Question 12: Marking Guidelines 36一40 Excellent Reasonably free from errors,substantial length,well-constructed, relevant ideas,all the main arguments presented with adequate examples,good use of complex sentence forms,appropriate choice of words and structures. 32-35 Very good A few errors,but not too intrusive to reader's understanding, reasonable length,relevant ideas,main arguments covered,but possibly some examples or information missing,few errors in complex sentence forms,few errors in control of structure and words. 25-31 Good Reader can follow the argument,but a little interference from errors of structure and choice of words,few errors in subject/verb agreement,most of main arguments presented,a little irrelevant information or lack of relevant examples,control of simple sentence structure,but errors in complex sentences. 24 Pass Ideas can be followed without too much difficulty on the part of the reader,argument lacks some coherence,a few errors of structure and choice of words are intrusive,control only of simple sentence forms,errors in subject/verb agreement. 16-23 Weak Difficult to follow ideas,argument weakly presented,some errors even in simple sentence formation,errors in structure and vocabulary are many and are somewhat intrusive. 0-15 Very poor Errors in structure and vocabulary prevent much understanding of the message,serious errors in sentence formation,arguments not well presented. An example: Mass media such as books,plays and films exert considerable impact upon people's life in the modern society.Many people are arguing whether books,plays and films should be censored before the release.In my view,strict censorship should be established to eliminate the potential misuse of these media. 211Part 3:Writing an Argument (40 points) Question 12:卜 Marking Guidelines 36一 40 Excellent Reasonably free from errors，substantial length，well-constructed， relevant ideas，all the main arguments presented with adequate examples，good use of complex sentence forms, appropriate choice of words and structures. 32一 35 Very good A few errors，but not too intrusive to reader’s understanding, reasonable length, relevant ideas，main arguments covered，but possibly some examples or information missing, few errors in complex sentence forms, few errors in control of structure and words. 25一 31 Good Reader can follow the argument, but a little interference from errors of structure and choice of words，few errors in subject/verb agreement，most of main arguments presented，a little irrelevant information or lack of relevant examples， control of simple sentence structure, but errors in complex sentences. 24 Pass Ideas can be followed without too much difficulty on the part of the reader, argument lacks some coherence, a few errors of structure and choice of words are intrusive，control only of simple sentence forms，errors in subject/verb agreement. 16一 23 W eak Difficult to follow ideas，argument weakly presented，some errors even in simple sentence formation, errors in structure and vocabulary are many and are somewhat intrusive. 0一 l} Very poor Errors in structure and vocabulary prevent much ut记erstanding of the message，serious errors in sentence formation，arguments not well presented. An example: Mass media such as books，plays and films exert considerable impact upon people's life in the modern society. Many people are arguing whether books，plays and films should be censored before the release. In my view, strict censorship should be established to eliminate the potential misuse of these media. 211