and practice the Faleng Gong for recovery. Such a doctrine resulted in the death of many people (举例说明其危害性). Faleng cult worked against society(层次句2-“反社会”) It urged its practitioner to demonstrate protests against the non-believers who criticized its abnormal behaviors and some news agencies that exposed its illegal activities. Its purpose was to make chaos in our society and undermine the stability of our normal social and family life(举例说明其 危害性). Faleng Cult also worked against human beings层次句3-“反人类”) Many followers turned out to be so indifferent to normal daily life after practicing Faleng Gong that many families were brought to the edge of bread -up. Many tragedies proved that Faleng Cult was really an evil organization(举例说明其危害性) Faleng Cult' s motives are very vicIous(指出其邪恶本质) therefore, it should be rooted our country(点题,得出结论)。 范文评析: Is money All Powerful? In modern society, may people are money-oriented, they believe "money talks"and they try their best to run after money(事实陈述法作引言句).Whil(转折,表达自己的看法)inmy opinion, money is not all powerful in some aspects I have sufficient reasons to explain my statement that money is not all powerful(段落主题句 用同谓结构重申自己观点,同时又承上启下). With money, we can only buy some material things., but not the spiritual ones(层次句1) For example(举例说明金钱的局限性) we can buy a big house, but we may fail to have a family; We may buy any medicine with money, but we may not have a good health Running after money so eagerly ay lead to violations of the law and breaks of discipline(层次句2,说明追逐金钱的危害性) Many criminals admit that they committed crimes just for the purpose of making more money. When in prison, it is too late for them to blame From the above analyses, we can see that money is not so powerful. Therefore, we should possess a correct attitude towards money and try not to be the slave of money(得出结论,提出建 范文评析: Why College Students Have Difficulty Finding Jobs A recent survey shows that about 30% college students can't find a suitable job after their graduation from college. And the number seems to be increasing(用数据法开头,通过具休数据 提出问题) The causation of this phenomenon lies in three aspects段落主题句,分析其原因,并用三 个方面加以限定).Fs(原因之一) our society can' t provide sufficient labor force division Second(原因之二), the academic subjects of the college students fail to meet the needs of a certain job. What they have learned in college falls far behind the practical working requirements Third(原因之三), college students are too particular about their future job. Many graduates only want to have a job with high salary. They refuse to work in the area of harsh living an working conditions(具体说明) The above-mentioned analy ses tell us that the causes are various. But if college students dont take personal interests into consideration too much and if they change their employment concept, they can still have chance to find a job(用条件句提出解决问题的建议) 范文评 It is reported that in the past ten years China has experienced an alarming increase in teenage smoking; about28% teenagers are puffing at cigarettes(用数据法引出青少年吸烟人数增多这 社会现象)and practice the Faleng Gong for recovery. Such a doctrine resulted in the death of many people （举例说明其危害性）. Faleng cult worked against society(层次句 2-“反社会”). It urged its practitioner to demonstrate protests against the non-believers who criticized its abnormal behaviors and some news agencies that exposed its illegal activities. Its purpose was to make chaos in our society and undermine the stability of our normal social and family life(举例说明其 危害性). Faleng Cult also worked against human beings(层次句 3-“反人类”). Many followers turned out to be so indifferent to normal daily life after practicing Faleng Gong that many families were brought to the edge of bread-up. Many tragedies proved that Faleng Cult was really an evil organization(举例说明其危害性). Faleng Cult’s motives are very vicious(指出其邪恶本质), therefore, it should be rooted out in our country(点题，得出结论)。 范文评析：Is Money All Powerful? In modern society, may people are money-oriented, they believe “money talks” and they try their best to run after money (事实陈述法作引言句). While(转折，表达自己的看法)in my opinion, money is not all powerful in some aspects. I have sufficient reasons to explain my statement that money is not all powerful(段落主题句 用同谓结构重申自己观点，同时又承上启下). With money, we can only buy some material things, but not the spiritual ones(层次句 1). For example(举例说明金钱的局限性), we can buy a big house, but we may fail to have a family; We may buy any medicine with money, but we may not have a good health. Running after money so eagerly ay lead to violations of the law and breaks of discipline(层次句 2，说明追逐金钱的危害性). Many criminals admit that they committed crimes just for the purpose of making more money. When in prison, it is too late for them to blame themselves. From the above analyses, we can see that money is not so powerful. Therefore, we should possess a correct attitude towards money and try not to be the slave of money(得出结论，提出建 议)。 范文评析：Why College Students Have Difficulty Finding Jobs A recent survey shows that about 30% college students can’t find a suitable job after their graduation from college. And the number seems to be increasing(用数据法开头，通过具休数据 提出问题). The causation of this phenomenon lies in three aspects(段落主题句，分析其原因，并用三 个方面加以限定). First(原因之一), our society can’t provide sufficient labor force division. Second(原因之二), the academic subjects of the college students fail to meet the needs of a certain job. What they have learned in college falls far behind the practical working requirements. Third(原因之三), college students are too particular about their future job. Many graduates only want to have a job with high salary. They refuse to work in the area of harsh living an working conditions(具体说明). The above-mentioned analyses tell us that the causes are various. But if college students don’t take personal interests into consideration too much and if they change their employment concept, they can still have chance to find a job(用条件句提出解决问题的建议)。 范文评析：Teenage Smoking Soars It is reported that in the past ten years China has experienced an alarming increase in teenage smoking: about 28% teenagers are puffing at cigarettes.（用数据法引出青少年吸烟人数增多这 一社会现象）