5. Lack of Consistency In writing, consistency is as important as unity. abrupt changes in point of view and tone should be avoided Point of view is the lace from which or the way in which something is viewed or considered it is the writer's standpoint. point of view can also refer to the attitude a writer has toward a subject. Tone, which is related to point of view, is the manner of speaking that shows a certain attitude a particular tone such as informal or dramatic, is achieved by word choice and phrasing 5.1 Point of vi No: The old woman shuffled into the room, her eyes glued to the floor. Her clothes had been carefully chosen; they were her very best. Someone coughed nervously, and a chair scraped the floor I think it was mr. Zhao 's chair Yes: The old woman shuffled into the room, her eyes glued to the floor. Her clothes had been carefully chosen, they were her very best. Someone coughed nervously, and a chair, probably Mr Zhao's scraped the floor8 5. Lack of Consistency In writing, consistency is as important as unity. Abrupt changes in point of view and tone should be avoided. Point of view is the place from which or the way in which something is viewed or considered; it is the writer’s standpoint. Point of view can also refer to the attitude a writer has toward a subject. Tone, which is related to point of view, is the manner of speaking that shows a certain attitude. A particular tone, such as informal, or dramatic, is achieved by word choice and phrasing. 5.1 Point of View No: The old woman shuffled into the room, her eyes glued to the floor. Her clothes had been carefully chosen;they were her very best. Someone coughed nervously., and a chair scraped the floor. I think it was Mr. Zhao’s chair. Yes: The old woman shuffled into the room, her eyes glued to the floor. Her clothes had been carefully chosen, they were her very best. Someone coughed nervously, and a chair, probably Mr. Zhao’s scraped the floor