Part Three Writing (60 points) I.Revise each of the following sentences according to the requirement given in the brackets.Please write your revised version in the Answer Sheet.(30 points) 15.We will reimburse you for all travel expenses.(to emphasize "you"view). 16.These breaks stop a car within a short distance.(to use concrete expressions) 17.The policy affected all vendors,suppliers,and those involved with consulting.(to develop parallelism) 18.In a dialogue with the manager,I learned that you plan to terminate our agreement. (to improve vigor and directness) 19.As per your verbal instruction,steps will be undertaken immediately to investigate your billing problem.(to make it conversational) 20.Once we ascertain how much it costs,we can initiate the project.(to use familiar words) 21.Any applicant for the position of fireman must submit a medical report signed by his physician.(to avoid gender stereotype) 22.Because of the fact that his visit was an unexpected surprise,we were totally unprepared to make a presentation of profit and loss figures.(to make it concise) 23.An Indian accountant was hired by the company.(to avoid ethnic bias) 24.Your letter claims that you returned a defective headset.to adopt a positive expression) II.Revise the following E-mail message.And the formatting of the message is to be scored.(30 points) 25. To:All Management This memo is addressed to all members of management to advise you that once a year we like to remind management of our policy in relation to the matter of business attire.In this policy there is a recommendation that all employees should wear clothing that promotes a businesslike atmosphere and meets requirements of safety. 1642Part Three Writing (60 points) I . Revise each of the following sentences according to the requirement given in the brackets. Please write yo町revised version in the Answer Sh四t. (30 points) 15. We will reimburse you for all travel expenses. (to emphasize "you" view). 16. These breaks stop a car within a short distance. (to use concrete expressions) 17. The policy affected all vendors, suppliers, and those involved with consulting. (to develop parallelism) 18. In a dialogue with the manager, I learned that you plan to terminate our agreement. (to improve vigor and directness) 19. As per your verbal instruction , steps will be undertaken immediately to investigate your billing problem. (to make it conversational) 20. Once we ascertain how much it costs, we can initiate the project. (to use familiar words) 21. Any applicant for the position of fireman must submit a medical report signed by his physician. (to avoid gender stereotype) 22. Because of the fact that his visit was an unexpected surprise , we were totally unprepared to make a presentation of profit and loss figures. (to make it concise) 23. An Indian accountant was hired by the company. (to avoid ethnic bias) 24. Your letter claims that you returned a defective headset. (to adopt a positive expression) II . Revise the following E-mail 姐ge. And the formatting of the sag is to be scored. (30 points) 25. To: All Management This memo is addressed to all members of management to advise you that once a year we like to remind management of our policy in relation to the matter of business attire. In this policy there is a recommendation that all employees should wear clothing that promotes a businesslike atmosphere and meets requirements of safety. 1642