版围是 Common Writing Mistakes(5) Problems with our "relatives" 0 I lost my job,which really angered me. (Revised)When I lost my job,I was angry. (Revised)Losing my job made my angry. o I had to leave,which was disturbing. (Revised)Because I had to leave,I was disturbed. (Revised)Having to leave disturbed me. 9Common Writing Mistakes (5) ◼ Problems with our “relatives”  I lost my job, which really angered me.  (Revised) When I lost my job, I was angry.  (Revised) Losing my job made my angry.  I had to leave, which was disturbing.  (Revised) Because I had to leave, I was disturbed.  (Revised) Having to leave disturbed me. 9