NO: It will be our aim to ensure proper health care for each and every one of the people in China Yes: Our aim will be to ensure proper health care for all Chinese NO: Zhang asked his friend gao, who was a good, old friend, if he would join him and go along with him to see the foreign film made in U. S YES: Zhang asked his good, old friend Gao if he would join him in seeing the american film EXERCISES Through revision, improve the following sentences He graduated college. In no time he found a job. Soon fter he rented an apartment. He was very happy 2. The book that she lent me was lengthy. It was boring. I wouldnt recommend it to anyone. There was nothing about the book that I enjoyed It was raining. We expected to go on a picnic. Now our plans are ruined. We have nothing to do8 NO: It will be our aim to ensure proper health care for each and every one of the people in China Yes: Our aim will be to ensure proper health care for all Chinese NO: Zhang asked his friend Gao, who was a good , old friend, if he would join him and go along with him to see the foreign film made in U.S. YES:Zhang asked his good, old friend Gao if he would join him in seeing the American Film. EXERCISES: Through revision, improve the following sentences: 1. He graduated college. In no time he found a job. Soon after he rented an apartment. He was very happy. 2. The book that she lent me was lengthy. It was boring. I wouldn’t recommend it to anyone. There was nothing about the book that I enjoyed. 3. It was raining. We expected to go on a picnic. Now our plans are ruined. We have nothing to do