hen health is gone, it will never come.(进一步解释上句内 容) Health is more precious and valuable than wealth.(段落 主题 ay)Firstly, with a good health you can fully enjoy life wit h your family. You won't worry about diseases and extra b urden on more efficient and fruitful. Lastly with a good he alth, you will easily have a large circle of friends, because people always trust healthy men All in all, health brings y ou happiness, opportunities and satisfaction.(排比句式和固定结 构的使用加强文章的说服力) Therefore, I strongly recommend that people should value t heir health and take actions to keep fit. 写作解析: 第一段:本段采用简练的句型结构引出问题,点明不同观点,并表明自己的态度。 这种写法即经济又明白,有很多成熟句型可以套用。 第二段:在本段写作中,首先提出人们渴望财富,因为财富可以带来快乐和自由, 然后进一步解释这种财富和自由是建立在物质基础上的,最后小节财富成为这些 人心目中最为重要的东西。写作时可以突出财富带给人们的便利,也可以描述很 多人为财富而不惜牺牲健康等等。 第三段:笔锋一转,着力说明健康重于财富之处 第四段:小结全文给出建议,再次突出保持身体健康的重要性 2001年在职英语式题: Part Ill Writing (30 minutes, 15 points)when health is gone, it will never come. (进一步解释上句内 容) Health is more precious and valuable than wealth. (段落 主题 句) Firstly, with a good health, you can fully enjoy life wit h your family. You won’t worry about diseases and extra b urden on more efficient and fruitful. Lastly, with a good he alth, you will easily have a large circle of friends, because people always trust healthy men. All in all, health brings y ou happiness, opportunities and satisfaction. (排比句式和固定结 构的使用加强文章的说服力) Therefore, I strongly recommend that people should value t heir health and take actions to keep fit. 写作解析： 第一段：本段采用简练的句型结构引出问题，点明不同观点，并表明自己的态度。 这种写法即经济又明白，有很多成熟句型可以套用。 第二段：在本段写作中，首先提出人们渴望财富，因为财富可以带来快乐和自由， 然后进一步解释这种财富和自由是建立在物质基础上的，最后小节财富成为这些 人心目中最为重要的东西。写作时可以突出财富带给人们的便利，也可以描述很 多人为财富而不惜牺牲健康等等。 第三段：笔锋一转，着力说明健康重于财富之处。 第四段：小结全文给出建议，再次突出保持身体健康的重要性。 2001 年在职英语式题： Part Ⅲ Writing (30 minutes,15 points)