1997年在职研究生作文 Part L Writing (30 minutes, 15 points) Directions: In this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition of no less than 100 words on The problem s i have in my English study. Your composition should be based on the following outline given in Chinese Outline:①遇到哪些困难 ②产生原因 ③如何克服 The problems i have in my English study During my study of English, I meet with some problems. 主旨句) These problems are as follows.(过渡句) First of all, when I read or listen English, I always encoun ter words and expressions.(解释句 ) So vocabulary is a troublesome problen.(要点 )Secondly, with a fairly large vocabulary. i am still not able to write a vivid and fluent composition. H = Thirdly, and also the most annoying thing is after so many years studying, I could not communicate with people in English.(要点三) There are many reasons for these problems.(段落主题 a For one thing, i have no study plan to enlarge voca bulary and rearrange what have learned before. H
1997 年在职研究生作文 Part Щ Writing (30 minutes,15 points) Directions: In this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition of no less than 100 words on The problem s I have in my English study. Your composition should be based on the following outline given in Chinese. Outline: ①遇到哪些困难 ②产生原因 ③如何克服 The problems I have in my English study During my study of English , I meet with some problems.( 主旨句)These problems are as follows. (过渡句) First of all, when I read or listen English, I always encoun ter words and expressions.(解释句 一) So vocabulary is a troublesome problem.(要点 一) Secondly, with a fairly large vocabulary. I am still not able to write a vivid and fluent composition.(要点 二) Thirdly, and also the most annoying thing is after so many years studying, I could not communicate with people in English.(要点三) There are many reasons for these problems.(段落主题 句) For one thing , I have no study plan to enlarge voca bulary and rearrange what have learned before.(要点
For another, in the process i have not summarized a complete set of methods which will instruct me in the futu re study(要点 = Beyond these obvious reasons, however lies a deeper c ause, when i study English i have not created an enviro nment to practise and use it.(要点三) For the reasons given above, i feel that in order to overc ome them above all, I should make a study schedule, for example, when I would finish Concept English when I woul d go over the former contents etc.(解释一,对应上段要点 The schedule keep an English diary more efficient and goal- specified.(作用 At the same time, I should keep an English diary and try best to find opportunities to practise English. (A The purpose of diary is not only to practise thinking a nd writing in English but also provide us an opportunity t o summarize study methods when you are free.(作用二对应 要点二和要点 = only in this way could i cultivate the habit of thinking in English and using English.(小结句) 写作解析:第一段:首句直接点题,提出在英语学习过程中遇到一些问题,然后 简练过渡,引起下文。本段的写作也可以同第二段结合在一起,如采取这样的句
一) For another, in the process, I have not summarized a complete set of methods which will instruct me in the futu re study.(要点 二) Beyond these obvious reasons, however lies a deeper c ause, when I study English , I have not created an enviro nment to practise and use it.(要点三) For the reasons given above, I feel that in order to overc ome them, above all, I should make a study schedule, for example, when I would finish Concept English, when I woul d go over the former contents etc.(解释一，对应上段要点 一) The schedule keep an English diary more efficient and goal-specified.(作用 一) At the same time, I should keep an English diary and try best to find opportunities to practise English.(解释 二) The purpose of diary is not only to practise thinking a nd writing in English ,but also provide us an opportunity t o summarize study methods when you are free .(作用二对应 要点二和要点 三) only in this way could I cultivate the habit of thinking in English and using English.(小结句) 写作解析：第一段：首句直接点题，提出在英语学习过程中遇到一些问题，然后 简练过渡，引起下文。本段的写作也可以同第二段结合在一起，如采取这样的句
型结构 i have been studying English for many years and yet t here are three which have always been holding back my p rogress. One is that another is that the third is that 这种写法的好处是充分利用英语的现在完成进行时的语法功能, 加强语气,然后列举问题,条理清晰,是考生应该思考借鉴的方法。 第二段:呼应提纲第一项要求,仍然以陈述句列举出产生困难的原因。在叙述原 因时,有很多成熟和固定的句型、结构可以选择使用。 第三段:本段针对上面产生的原因逐一困难产生的原因,其内容层次有浅入深, 由表面原因学习无计划性到不掌握学习方法'直至`忽略了语言学习的规律: 具有一个语言学习环境"。写作中,作者也是采用固定句型,整体读来,层次分 明、有条不紊 第四段:以 For the reasons given above, i feel that in order to over come them。。。。″轻松过渡到阐述解决方法上来。本段写作要注意对应 上文,即上面提出的原因,下面就需要给出办法。 此类文章难度不大,考生只要根据提纲,将问题、原因、解决方法陈述清楚即可。 因为属于说明文范畴,大量的因定句型,词组,衔接结构可以选择使用: 解释原因、分析影响的常用句型和例句说明: 1)There are many (different/several/various)reasons for this matter(changedecrease/growth). For one thing For anoth In addition .... Furthermore 例句
型结构 “ I have been studying English for many years, and yet t here are three which have always been holding back my p rogress. One is that ……… another is that …… the third is that ………”这种写法的好处是充分利用英语的现在完成进行时的语法功能， 加强语气，然后列举问题，条理清晰，是考生应该思考借鉴的方法。 第二段：呼应提纲第一项要求，仍然以陈述句列举出产生困难的原因。在叙述原 因时，有很多成熟和固定的句型、结构可以选择使用。 第三段：本段针对上面产生的原因逐一困难产生的原因，其内容层次有浅入深， 由表面原因“学习无计划性”到“不掌握学习方法”直至“忽略了语言学习的规律： 具有一个语言学习环境”。写作中，作者也是采用固定句型，整体读来，层次分 明、有条不紊。 第四段：以 “For the reasons given above, I feel that in order to over come them。。。。” 轻松过渡到阐述解决方法上来。本段写作要注意对应 上文，即上面提出的原因，下面就需要给出办法。 此类文章难度不大，考生只要根据提纲，将问题、原因、解决方法陈述清楚即可。 因为属于说明文范畴，大量的因定句型，词组，衔接结构可以选择使用： 解释原因、分析影响的常用句型和例句说明： 1) There are many(different/several/various) reasons for this matter(change/decrease/growth). For one thing ……..For anoth er ………In addition………..Furthermore…………… 例句：
There are several reasons for his decision of studying of st udying law. For one thing he is very interested in social affairs and it seems the best way to enable him to engag e in these activities. For another, his father is a lawyer,w ho has always encouraged him to do something similar. In addition, he is sure that he can get a job after graduati on 2)A number of factors contribute to (lead to /result in/ a ccount for)…… and what's more 例句: A number of factors contribute to changing moral values-sel f-indulgence, the lack of social consciousness and the deg eneration of the society itself 3 We may consider (regard/think of /take the change (phe nomenon/decrease/ development/the suddenly rise )as a sign ( symbo/ evidence/ landmark)of……… but the truth is that 例句: We may take the change as a symbol of social developme nt, but the truth is that it will only lead to social corrup tion
There are several reasons for his decision of studying of st udying law . For one thing, he is very interested in social affairs and it seems the best way to enable him to engag e in these activities. For another, his father is a lawyer, w ho has always encouraged him to do something similar. In addition , he is sure that he can get a job after graduati on. 2)A number of factors contribute to (lead to /result in / a ccount for )……..and what’s more ……… 例句： A number of factors contribute to changing moral values-sel f-indulgence , the lack of social consciousness and the deg eneration of the society itself. 3) We may consider (regard/think of /take)the change (phe nomenon/ decrease/ development/the suddenly rise)as a sign (symbol/evidence/landmark)of ………but the truth is that ……. 例句： We may take the change as a symbol of social developme nt , but the truth is that it will only lead to social corrup tion
4)The explanation for the matter( decrease/rise / change/ ph enomenon)of .. involves many (different/complicated/puzzlin gfactors(reasons/ aspects 例句 The explanation for the phenomenon of the rising teenage suicide rate involves many complicated factors. Some attribu te the rise to an overemphasis on early success others po int to mounting peer pressure, and still others to confusion over changing social values 5)The reasons for ...are many but for the most part center on (concentrate on /focus on) 例句: The reasons for the phenomenon of the rising teenage suici de rate involves many complicated factors. some attribute t he rise to an overemphasis on early success, others point to mounting peer pressure, and still others to confusion ov er changing social values 6There are several causes for this significant growth first second finally 7We have reason to believe that 8This can be expressed as follows
4) The explanation for the matter(decrease/rise /change/ ph enomenon) of …….involves many (different/complicated/puzzlin g)factors(reasons/aspects) 例句： The explanation for the phenomenon of the rising teenage suicide rate involves many complicated factors. Some attribu te the rise to an overemphasis on early success, others po int to mounting peer pressure, and still others to confusion over changing social values. 5) The reasons for ……….are many, but for the most part center on (concentrate on /focus on)…….. 例句： The reasons for the phenomenon of the rising teenage suici de rate involves many complicated factors. Some attribute t he rise to an overemphasis on early success, others point to mounting peer pressure, and still others to confusion ov er changing social values. 6)There are several causes for this significant growth in ………, first……….second…………finally………… 7)We have reason to believe that …………. 8)This can be expressed as follows:
9)Perhaps the primary reason for is 10)It is chiefly responsible for 1998年在职研究生英语考题: partiii Writing (30 minutes, 15points) Directions: In this part you are allowed 30 minutes to wri te a composition f no less than 100 words under the title ofWhy We Work Your composition should be based on the following outline given in English outlin 1)Some people live to work 2)other people work to liv 3)Your opinion Why we work Throughout history, work and life always appear as contradi ctory things(主旨句,指出work和ife存在冲突,且冲突由来已久,伏笔 文中会针对两种想法展开叙
9)Perhaps the primary reason for is ……….. 10)It is chiefly responsible for 1998 年在职研究生英语考题： partIII Writing(30 minutes, 15points) Directions: In this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to wri te a composition f no less than 100 words under the title of “Why We Work”. Your composition should be based on the following outline given in English . Outline: 1)Some people live to work 2)Other people work to live 3)Your opinion Why we work Throughout history, work and life always appear as contradi ctory things(主旨句，指出 work 和 life 存在冲突，且冲突由来已久，伏笔 文中会针对两种想法展开叙
rEpeople holding different attitudes sacrifice themselves to o ne or the other.(过渡句) Some people live to work.(本段主题句,照应提纲第一 In their opinions, work is an essential element in life. No matter how hard it is, they devote all energy and tim e into it. During their working life, they discover pleasure realize dream and enjoy hardness and success..Even(加强语 they meet difficulties they consider them as meaning a nd flavor in life Whie,(转 tr there are also some people who work to live. they ar e forced by their circumstances or by their view to work f or living. They regard work as a kind of means to support family and themselves. Therefore,(段落小结 f these people cannot balance their working time and salar y these people cant explore their capacity and enthusiasm even these people cant explain why they work when they get rich(排比句式加强语气) From my point of view, I prefer to work to live.(点明自忆的 观 aBeing an optimistic person, I hope that life is good eno ugh for everyone to find happiness in work. Once you appro aches work for enjoyment you create the possibility of find ing hope in life. Serving the others and the society will definitely make you successful both in life and in spirit
述)people holding different attitudes sacrifice themselves to o ne or the other.(过渡句) Some people live to work.(本段主题句，照应提纲第一 条)In their opinions , work is an essential element in life. No matter how hard it is , they devote all energy and tim e into it . During their working life, they discover pleasure, realize dream and enjoy hardness and success. Even(加强语 气)they meet difficulties , they consider them as meaning a nd flavor in life. While,(转 折) there are also some people who work to live. They ar e forced by their circumstances or by their view to work f or living. They regard work as a kind of means to support family and themselves. Therefore,(段落小结 句)these people cannot balance their working time and salar y; these people can’t explore their capacity and enthusiasm; even these people can’t explain why they work when they get rich(排比句式加强语气) From my point of view, I prefer to work to live.(点明自忆的 观 点)Being an optimistic person, I hope that life is good eno ugh for everyone to find happiness in work.Once you appro aches work for enjoyment, you create the possibility of find ing hope in life . Serving the others and the society will definitely make you successful both in life and in spirit
写作解析: 第一段:作者通过自古以来就存在的生活与工作的冲突,点明不同观点的群体将 两者对立处理的情况。这种写法的好处是让读者感受到所讨论问题有价值,并不 自觉的考虑到自己是怎样处理上述问题的。 第二段和第三段:针对提纲一、二开始叙述不同观点的人处理问题的方法。这两 种观点的着眼点都集中在怎样看待工作”上,即持" live to work"观点的人, 将工作看成生活的方式,采取" be forced by"的态度,截然相反的观点对比 强烈。第二段中,作者用 During……Even"句型举例:第三段中,作者用 Therefore∴… these people cant… these people cant…….ev en these people cant"排比举例,都凌漓尽致的将两类观点的特点突出出 来 第四段:作者通过" Being an optimistic person"、 " happiness"、"hope"、" definitely"和" successfu"等充满激情、活力的词, 明确了为社会、人民付出才能使个人的生活和工作更加和谐、统一的观点。整段 写作句型多变,用词恰当,说服力大增 1999年在职研究生英语试题 Part Ill Writing (30 minutes, 15 points) Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to w rite a composition of no less than 120 words on The quali ties of the Cross-century Talents. You should write accordin g to the three-point outline given below. Please write it cle arly on the ANSWER SHEET (2) Outline 跨世纪人才应具备哪些素质
写作解析： 第一段：作者通过自古以来就存在的生活与工作的冲突，点明不同观点的群体将 两者对立处理的情况。这种写法的好处是让读者感受到所讨论问题有价值，并不 自觉的考虑到自己是怎样处理上述问题的。 第二段和第三段：针对提纲一、二开始叙述不同观点的人处理问题的方法。这两 种观点的着眼点都集中在“怎样看待工作”上，即持“live to work”观点的人， 将工作看成生活的方式，采取“be forced by”的态度，截然相反的观点对比 强烈。第二段中，作者用“During……Even”句型举例：第三段中，作者用 “Therefore ……these people can’t ……these people can’t…… ev en these people can’t”排比举例，都凌漓尽致的将两类观点的特点突出出 来。 第四段：作者通过“Being an optimistic person”、 “happiness”、 “hope”、“definitely”和“successful”等充满激情、活力的词， 明确了为社会、人民付出才能使个人的生活和工作更加和谐、统一的观点。整段 写作句型多变，用词恰当，说服力大增。 1999 年在职研究生英语试题 Part Ⅲ Writing (30 minutes,15 points) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to w rite a composition of no less than 120 words on The quali ties of the Cross-century Talents. You should write accordin g to the three-point outline given below. Please write it cle arly on the ANSWER SHEET.(2) Outline: 跨世纪人才应具备哪些素质
为什么需要具备这些素质 怎样才能成为跨世纪人才 Qualities of the Cross-Century Talents With the rapid development of economics and society and increasing number of people come to realize that the most important factor in competition is the cross-century talents qualities.(主旨句,突出问题的重要性) Since(承接上 xthe cross-century talents play such a crucial role in ne xt century, what are the qualities?(引起读者兴趣,同时对应提纲 第一条内 f)From my point of view, they should be good health, n oble character and wide knowledge.(本段主题句,简要说明”是什 么“的问题) Health is the foundation of struggling and success. as the famous proverb goes,"Good health is above wealth H )Second, cultivating and owning good and noble characters is of gre at importance only those with noble character, strong per severance, a sense of responsibility and regular working and living habits can surely dedicate themselves to the people (要点二)
为什么需要具备这些素质 怎样才能成为跨世纪人才 Qualities of the Cross-Century Talents With the rapid development of economics and society, and increasing number of people come to realize that the most important factor in competition is the cross-century talents’ qualities.(主旨句，突出问题的重要性) Since (承接上 文) the cross-century talents play such a crucial role in ne xt century, what are the qualities? (引起读者兴趣，同时对应提纲 第一条内 容) From my point of view, they should be good health, n oble character and wide knowledge. (本段主题句，简要说明“是什 么”的问题) Health is the foundation of struggling and success. As the famous proverb goes, “Good health is above wealth ”.(要点 一) Second， cultivating and owning good and noble characters is of gre at importance . Only those with noble character, strong per severance, a sense of responsibility and regular working and living habits can surely dedicate themselves to the people. （要点二）
Third, the cross-century talents should also have profound most updated knowledge and a open mind.(要点三 To gain the above qualities(点明第四段主题,即解决问 one should always bear in mind that the cross-centur y talents are the pillars of our nation. they should value t heir health; they should mainta in a broad vision to their d uties, they should keep a fresh mind to absorb knowledge (排比句式加强语气) 写作解析: 第一段:本段作为整篇的主旨突出了跨世纪人才的重要性,其作用是为提纲的三 点内容定了个基调。在类似题目的写作中,考生可以充分利用这种方法,即找出 问题的关键、重要性、严肃性、影响性、观点差异性等贾亦叙述或评论,篇幅限 于一、两句,起到引领全文、画龙点睛之用。 第二段和第三段:解决了提纲第二条的要求,本段是测试考生写作段落的功底 因此写作时要注意变换句式(疑问句、陈述句和倒装句配合),适当举例 ( as the famous proverb goes…),结构分明 (as the famous proverb goes.. Second 第四段:本段采用排比句式强调了怎样才能成为跨世纪人才的问题,四个 should”和三个动词"vaue, maintain,keep回应上篇内容,用语经济,结 构严谨,值得考生琢磨和模仿。 2000年在职英语试题 Part Ill Writing (30 minutes, 15 points Directions: In this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to wri
Third, the cross-century talents should also have profound, most updated knowledge and a open mind. (要点三) To gain the above qualities(点明第四段主题，即解决问 题)， one should always bear in mind that the cross-centur y talents are the pillars of our nation. They should value t heir health; they should maintain a broad vision to their d uties; they should keep a fresh mind to absorb knowledge. (排比句式加强语气) 写作解析： 第一段：本段作为整篇的主旨突出了跨世纪人才的重要性，其作用是为提纲的三 点内容定了个基调。在类似题目的写作中，考生可以充分利用这种方法，即找出 问题的关键、重要性、严肃性、影响性、观点差异性等贾亦叙述或评论，篇幅限 于一、两句，起到引领全文、画龙点睛之用。 第二段和第三段：解决了提纲第二条的要求，本段是测试考生写作段落的功底， 因此写作时要注意变换句式（疑问句、陈述句和倒装句配合），适当举例 （As the famous proverb goes……）,结构分明 （As the famous proverb goes…… Second ……. Third……）. 第四段：本段采用排比句式强调了怎样才能成为跨世纪人才的问题，四个 “should”和三个动词“value, maintain, keep”回应上篇内容，用语经济，结 构严谨，值得考生琢磨和模仿。 2000 年在职英语试题： Part Ⅲ Writing (30 minutes, 15 points ) Directions: In this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to wri
