home in the downtown lote Tthe space order connectives are italicized Class Activity: Describe your dormitory or your own room in space order 2 Strategies(写作手法)难点 Focus: Diagram and topic sentence Connectives Space Order Connectives(空间顺序关联词)重点 To construct an effective space-order paragraph, you should first draw a diagram with the details filled in it. Then determine your point of view by asking you such questions as"Where am I located? or" From where am I going to describe the scene? After that determine your purpose for, with your purpose in mind, you are ready to compose a topic sentence with a controlling idea In the following example, the writer is supposed to an American veteran who has returned to childhood home. His purpose is to show that the scene has not changed from the slow pace of his childhood. Before he began to write he drew his diagram of the scene with details filled in Corn field Calves ay barr Stock Calves Rolling Hills of Pasture covered with milch cows Topic sentence Standing on the large back porch of our old farm house, I enjoyed the same lazy summer cene that i had recalled so often while i was in vietnam Fable. I ]Standing on the large back porch of our old farm house, I enjoyed the same lary summer scene that i had recalled so often while i was in vietnam JIn fiont of me was the large hay barn surrouded by calves lying on the ground and switching their tails every now and then to wave away the slow-moving flies 2 To my left I saw the tall stalks of the dark green corn motionless in the noonday 3] They appeared to be resting as the earlier light breeze had completely 2]To my near right was the big dairy barn, quiet now as though it were pausing before the afternoon milking began 3] Even the bees and the butterflies that were checking out the red and pink roses in fimnt of the diary seemed to be moving slowly in response to the noon heat 2] Behind the diary barn and farther to my right lay the still water of the stock por 3 Reflecting the bright sunlight was its only pretense at activity 2 Beyond the pond and the hay barn I saw the genltely rolling hills of the lush greenhome in the downtown . Note: Tthe space order connectives are italicized . Class Activity: Describe your dormitory or your own room in space order . 2.Strategies （写作手法） 难 点 Focus: Diagram and topic sentence Connectives: Space Order Connectives （空间顺序关联词） 重 点 To construct an effective space-order paragraph , you should first draw a diagram with the details filled in it .Then determine your point of view by asking you such questions as “ Where am I located ? ” or “ From where am I going to describe the scene ? ” After that determine your purpose for , with your purpose in mind , you are ready to compose a topic sentence with a controlling idea . In the following example , the writer is supposed to an American veteran who has returned to his childhood home . His purpose is to show that the scene has not changed from the slow pace of his childhood . Before he began to write , he drew his diagram of the scene with details filled in : Topic sentence: Standing on the large back porch of our old farm house , I enjoyed the same lazy summer scene that I had recalled so often while I was in Vietnam . Example: 1]Standing on the large back porch of our old farm house , I enjoyed the same lazy summer scene that I had recalled so often while I was in Vietnam . 2]In front of me was the large hay barn surrouded by calves lying on the ground and switching their tails every now and then to wave away the slow-moving flies . 2]To my left I saw the tall stalks of the dark green corn motionless in the noonday sun . 3] They appeared to be resting as the earlier light breeze had completely disapeared . 2]To my near right was the big dairy barn , quiet now as though it were pausing before the afternoon milking began . 3] Even the bees and the butterflies that were checking out the red and pink roses in front of the diary seemed to be moving slowly in response to the noon heat . 2] Behind the diary barn and farther to my right lay the still water of the stock pond . 3] Reflecting the bright sunlight was its only pretense at activity . 2]Beyond the pond and the hay barn I saw the genltely rolling hills of the lush green House Roses Dairy barn Corn field Calves Hay barn Stock Calves pond Rolling Hills of Pasture covered with milch cows