are settling in their new country,thus changing the complexion of the workforce.Successful interaction requires awareness,tolerance and accommodation. Part Three Writing (60 points) I.Revise each of the following sentences according to the requirement given in the brackets. (30 points) Three points for each sentence. 15.We assume that you wish to be transferred. 16.Your order will be delivered by UPS in time for your sales promotion January 15. 17.At your request,we are sending you the brochures. 18.These brakes stop a 2-ton car,travelling 60 mph,within 240 feet. 19.Many benefits can result from a good customer-oriented program. 20.The policy affected all vendors,suppliers,and consultants. 21.Once we find out how much it costs,we can begin the project. 22.As it is stated in your policy,only accidents within the United States can be covered. 23.At your suggestion,I'm investigating your billing immediately. 24.An applicant for the position of firefighter must submit a medical report signed by his or her physician. II.Revise the following e-mail message.And the formatting of the message is to be scored.(30 points) 25. O Five points for the format of the e-mail message (TO;FROM;SUBJECT;); Four points for gaining attention at the beginning; Five points for building interest; Five points for reducing resistance and motivating action; Three points for ending positively; O Eight points for the fluency and accuracy of the language.(including one point for three spelling mistakes,one point for two grammar mistakes). 1439are settling in their new country , thus changing the complexion of the workforce. Successful interaction requires awareness, tolerance and accommodation. Part Three Writing (60 points) 1 . Revise each of the following sentences according to the requirement given in the brackets. (30 points) • Three points for each sentence. 15. We assume that you wish to be transferred. 16. Your order will be delivered by UPS in time for your sales promotion January 15. 17. At your request , we are sending you the brochures. 18. These brakes stop a 2-ton car, travelIing 60 mph , within 240 feet. 19. Many benefits can resuIt from a good customer-oriented program. 20. The policy aHected all vendors, suppliers, and consultants. 21. Once we find out how much it costs, we can begin the project. 22. As it is stated in your policy , only accidents within the United States can be covered. 23. At your suggestion , I'm investigating your biIling immediately. 24. An applicant for the position of firefighter must submit a medical report signed by his or her physician. n. Revise the following e-mail message. And the formatting of the message is to be scoroo. (30 points) 25. • Five points for the format of the e-mail message (TO; FROM; SUBJECT;); • Four points for gaining attention at the beginning; • Five points for building interest; • Five points for reducing resistance and motivating action; • Three points for ending positively; • Eight points for the fluency and accuracy of the language. (incIuding one point for three spelling mistakes, one point for two grammar mistakes). 1439