Part Three Writing (60 points) I.Revise each of the following sentences according to the requirement given in the brackets.(30 points) ● Three points for each sentence. 15.We will review the building plans before construction begins. 16.An accountant was hired by the company. 17.As it is stated in your policy,only accidents within the United States can be covered. 18.The policy affected all vendors,suppliers,and consultants. 19.These breaks stop a 2-ton car,travelling 60 mph,within 240 feet. 20.At your request,we are sending you the brochures. 21.We assume that you wish to be transferred. 22.Your order will be delivered by UPS in time for your sales promotion January 15. 23.Once we find out how much it costs,we can begin the project. 24.Your letter describes a headset you returned. II.Revise the following e-mail message.And the formatting of the message is to be scored.(30 points) 25. O Five points for the format of the e-mail message (TO;FROM;SUBJECT;); O Four points for gaining attention at the beginning; O Five points for building interest; Five points for reducing resistance and motivating action; O Three points for ending positively; O Eight points for the fluency and accuracy of the language.(including one point for three spelling mistakes,one point for two grammar mistakes). 1445Part Three Writing (60 points) 1. Revise each of the following sentences according to the requirement given in the brackets. (30 points) • Three points for each sentence. 15. We will review the building plans before construction begins. 16. An accountant was hired by the company. 17. As it is stated in your policy , only accidents within the United States can be covered. 18. The policy aHected all vendors, suppliers, and consultants. 19. These breaks stop a 2-ton car, travelling 60 mph , within 240 feet. 20. At your request , we are sending you the brochures. 21. We assume that you wish to be transferred. 22. Your order will be delivered by UPS in tíme for your sales promotion January 15. 23. Once we find out how much it costs, we can begin the project. 24. Y our letter describes a headset you returned. n . Revise the following e-mail message. And the formatting of the message is to be scored. C 30 points) 25. • Five points for the format of the e-mail message CTO; FROM; SUBJECT;); • Four points for gaining attention at the beginning; • Five poínts for buíldíng interest; • Fíve poínts for reducíng resistance and motívatíng action; • Three points for endíng positively; • Eight points for the fluency and accuracy of the language. (including one point for three spelling mistakes, one poínt for two grammar místakes). 1445