(Paragraph B and C are given on the test paper. Paragraph B However,modern conveniences come at a price.You have to give out information about yourself whenever you use these amazing devices,easy access to personal information has become a serious and growing problem.It is reported that as e-commerce grows,marketers and busybodies can access more consumer data than ever before.It is scary to think that the personal private data to get some services can easily be given to somebody we don't know and without our permission.It is even scarier to know our personal information can be used against us. Paragraph C In spite of all the frightening concerns,you can still receive many benefits from the convenient services that are provided online.You just need to be very careful.You should know what information to give,how much information to give,and when and to whom to give it.After that,you can save time and effort and enjoy using such conveniences as credit cards,online shopping,or prepaid telephone cards. Part 3 Writing an essay [50 points] Question 10 Marking Guidelines(供参考) 内容切题，完整：条理清楚，文章结构严谨；语法正确，语言通顺恰当，句式用 46-50分 词富有变化，有“闪光点”；基本无语言错误。 内容切题，完整；条理清楚，文章结构严谨；语法正确，语言通顺恰当；有少量 41一45分 语法错误。 内容基本切题，完整：条理基本清楚，文章结构基本严谨；语法基本正确，语 31一40分 言基本通顺恰当；有少量语言错误。 21一30分 内容基本切题，完整；条理不够清楚；较多语言错误，许多词使用不当。 内容偏题，不完整；思路混乱，语句不完整：只有少数句子可以理解，词汇拼 11-20分 写错误较多。 0一10分 内容偏题，不完整；思路混乱，语句不完整；句子无法理解。 1424(Paragraph B and C are given on the test paper. ) Paragraph B However, modern conveniences come at a price. You have to give out information about yourself whenever you use these amazing devices, easy access to personal information has become a serious and growing problem. lt is reported that as e-commerce grows, marketers and busybodies can access more consumer data than ever before. It is scary to think that the personal private data to get some services can easily be given to somebody we don' t know and without our permission. It is even scarier to know our personal information can be used agamst us. Paragraph C ln spite of al1 the frightening concerns, you can still receive many benefits from the convenient servÎces that are provided online. You just need to be very careful. You should know what information to give , how much information to give , and when and to whom to give it. After that, you can save time and effort and enjoy using such conveniences as credit cards, online shopping , or prepaid telephone cards. Part 3 Writing an essay [50 points] Question 10 Marking GuidelinesC 供参考) 46-50 内容切题，完整;条理清楚，文章结构严谨;语法正确，语言通顺恰当，句式用 词富有变化，有"闪光点'气基本无语言错误。 41-45 内容切题，完整;条理清楚，文章结构严谨;语法正确，语言通顺恰当;有少量 31-40 内容基本切题，完整 条理基本清楚，文章结构基本严谨;语法基本正确， 言基本通顺恰当;有少量语言错误。 21 30 内容基本切题，完整;条理不够清楚;较多语言错误，许多词使用不当。 11--20 内容偏题，不完整;思路混乱，语句不完整;只有少数句子可以理解，词汇拼 写错误较多。 。一 10 内容偏题，不完整 思路混乱，语句不完整;句子无法理解。 1424