sentences that emphasize benefits.4)To motivate action:After gaining attention,building interest,and reducing resistance,you'll want to inspire the receiver to act.Knowing exactly what action you favor before you start to write enables you to point your arguments toward this important final paragraph. Part Three Writing (60 points) I.Revise each of the following sentences according to the requirement given in the brackets.(30 points) Three points for each sentence. 15.You can be reimbursed for all travel expenses. 16.These breaks stop a 2-ton car,travelling 60 mph,within 240 feet. 17.The policy affected all vendors,suppliers,and consultants. 18.From the manager,I learn you plan to break our agreement. 19.At your suggestion I'm investigating your billing immediately. 20.Once we find out how much it costs,we can begin the project. 21.An applicant for the position of firefighter must submit a medical report signed by his or her physician. 22.Because of his unexpected visit,we were totally unprepared to make a presentation of profit and loss figures. 23.An accountant was hired by the company. 24.Your letter describes a headset you returned. II.Revise the following e-mail message.And the formatting of the message is to be scored.(30 points) 25. O Five points for the format of the e-mail message (TO;FROM;SUBJECT;); ● Four points for gaining attention at the beginning; O Five points for building interest; Five points for reducing resistance and motivating action; O Three points for ending positively; Eight points for the fluency and accuracy of the language.(including one point for three spelling mistakes,one point for two grammar mistakes). 1647sentences that emphasize benefits. 4) To motivate action: After gaining attention , building interest , and reducing resistance , you' 11 want to inspire the receiver to act. Knowing exactly what action you favor before you start to write enables you to point your arguments toward this important final paragraph. Part Three Writing (60 points) I. Revise 回cb of tbe following sentences according to tbe requirement given in tbe brackets. (30 points) • Three points for eacb sentence. 15. You can be reimbursed for all travel expenses. 16. These breaks stop a 2-ton car, travelling 60 mph , within 240 feet. 17. The policy affected all vendors, suppliers, and consultants. 18. From the manager, I learn you plan to break our agreement. 19. At your suggestion I'm investigating your billing immediately. 20. Once we find out how much it costs, we can begin the project. 21. An applicant for the position of firefighter must submit a medical report signed by his or her physician. 22. Because of his unexpected visit , we were totally unprepared to make a presentation of profit and loss figures. 23. An accountant was hired by the company. 24. Your letter describes a headset you returned. II . Revise tbe following e-mail 臼sage. And tbe formatting of tbe message is to be scored. (30 points) 25. • Five points for the format of the e-mail message (TO; FROM; SUBJECT;); • Four points for gaining attention at the beginning; • Five points for building interest; • Five points for reducing resistance and motivating action; • Three points for ending positively; • Eight points for the fluency and accuracy of the language. (including one point for three spelling mistakes, one point for two grammar mistakes). 1647