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but the father subjected himself to the shame and stress without bitterness and com Part II(Para.6-7) The son now realizes that his father treated others with a good heart Part III(Para.8-11) The father's attempt to experience things directly and indirectly Part IV(Para. 12-13) The father has gone many years, but the son feels regret for his reluctance and relies much more on his father for his balance of mind 2. Structure Analysis: A paragraph of a general point supported by examples The story includes some paragraphs in which the writer starts with a general point and then presents a number of examples to support his point. Look at one of the paragraphs Para. 11 I now know he participated in some things through me his only son. When I slayed ball(poorly), he "played"too. When I joined the Navy, he joined"too. And when I came home on leave, he saw to it that i visited his off ice. Introducing me, he was really saying ,"This is my son but it is a lso me and i cou ld have done this, too, if things had been different Those words were never said aloud I now know he participated in some things through me, his only son Example 3 And when i came home on eave, he saw to it that i Example 1 ucing me, he was really saying This hen I played ball(poorly), When i joined the Navy he is my son, but it is also me he played too joined too d i could have de different those words were never said aloud Para. 3 Now fill in the same kind of chart for Paragraph 8, identif ying the general point a nd the examples to support it. Para. 8 Unable to engage in many activities my father still tried to participate in some yay. When a local baseball team found itse lf without a manager, he kept it going. He was a know ledgeable baseball fan and of ten took me to ebbets field to see the Brooklyn Dodgers play. He liked to go to dances and parties w here he could have a A general point Example One Example Two 3 Parallelism(平行结构)but the father subjected himself to the shame and stress without bitterness and complaint. Part II(Para.6-7) The son now realizes that his father treated others with a good heart. Part III(Para.8-11) The father’s attempt to experience things directly and indirectly Part IV(Para.12-13) The father has gone many years, but the son feels regret for his reluctance and relies much more on his father for his balance of mind. 2. Structure Analysis: A paragraph of a general point supported by examples The story includes some paragraphs in which the writer starts with a general point and then presents a number of examples to support his point. Look at one of the paragraphs. Para. 11 I now know he participated in some things through me, his only son. When I played ball (poorly), he "played" too. When I joined the Navy, he "joined" too. And when I came home on leave, he saw to it that I visited his office. Introducing me, he was really saying, "This is my son, but it is also me, and I could have done this, too, if things had been dif ferent." Those words were never said aloud. A general point: I now know he participated in some things through me, his only son. Example 1: When I played ball (poorly), he played too. Example 2: When I joined the Navy, he joined too. Example 3: And when I came home on leave, he saw to it that I visited his of fice. Introducing me, he was really saying, This is my son, but it is also me, and I could have done this, too, if things had been dif ferent. Those words were never said aloud. Para.3 Now fill in the same kind of chart for Paragraph 8, identifying the general point and the examples to support it. Para. 8 Unable to engage in many activities, my father still tried to participate in some way. When a local baseball team found itself without a manager, he kept it going. He was a knowledgeable baseball fan and of ten took me to Ebbets Field to see the Brooklyn Dodgers play. He liked to go to dances and parties, where he could have a good time just sitting and watching. 3. Parallelism(平行结构): A general point: Example One: Example Two:
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