all nationalities respond to the call to help the In my opinion, the best way to show love is victims of natural disasters every year. to help people who are more unfortunate than Although their incomes are still low by we are We should always be ready to give a international standards, people all over the helping hand to those who are in trouble,no country do not hesitate to donate whatever matter whether they are family members or they can --be it money or goods--to help complete strangers. In this way, we can help their needy fellow citizens. Moreover, they do to make the world a better place, for, as the this with no thought of gain for themselves. picture shows the darker the shadows of [举例论证段] sorrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love shines.[归纳结论段 (说明:这第二篇范文是一个学生满分作文修改而成,经典!) 范文二: Love is of utmost importance to us humans. just a small sum of money from you may Everybody not only needs love, but also support her to finish school and change her life should give others love. As can be seen from In these circumstances you have given love the picture,"love is a lamp which is brighter in which is like a lamp in a dark place where light is darker places." This is indeed true. People in most needed.[举例论证段] darker places need more light than other people Maybe even a dim light can give them much To sum up, we should offer our help to all the hope for a better life. Maybe just a thread of light needed. We expect to get love from others and will call forth their strength and courage to help we also give love to others. So when you see them step out of their difficulties.[现象现状说明| someone in difficulty or in distress and in need 段] of help, don't hesitate to give your love to him (her ). I believe that the relationship I can think of no better illustration of this between people will be harmonious and idea than the following example(s). For that our society will be a better place for us instance when someone is starving to death,| to live in.[纳结论段 just a little food and water from you may save his(her) life. Again, when a little girl in a poor rural area drops out of school because of poverty 2000年(2005年大纲样题) I. Direction: Study the following two pictures care fully and write and essay to 1)describe the pictures, 2)deduce(fEE) the purpose of the drawer of the pictures, and 3) suggest counter- measures(对策) As is shown in the pictures, with the resources rampancy of commercial fishing, the numberowingto of fishes dramatically (sharply) decreased over-fishing In one pictures, there were various kinds o the num ber of fish and only one fishing-boat in 1900. On the fisheshas contrary,in1995 there was only one fish, with obviously many fishing- boats.[图表描述段] dropped. If A brief History of we let this World Commercial Fishing The purpose of this picture is to show us situation go that due(great enough)attention has to(continue)as it is, we do not know where fish be paid to the decrease(decline)of ocean will be in the future By that time ,our5 all nationalities respond to the call to help the victims of natural disasters every year. Although their incomes are still low by international standards, people all over the country do not hesitate to donate whatever they can——be it money or goods——to help their needy fellow citizens. Moreover, they do this with no thought of gain for themselves. [举例论证段] In my opinion, the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are. We should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers. In this way, we can help to make the world a better place, for, as the picture shows, the darker the shadows of sorrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love shines. [归纳结论段 (说明：这第二篇范文是一个学生满分作文修改而成，经典！) 范文二： Love is of utmost importance to us humans. Everybody not only needs love, but also should give others love. As can be seen from the picture, "love is a lamp which is brighter in darker places. " This is indeed true. People in darker places need more light than other people. Maybe even a dim light can give them much hope for a better life. Maybe just a thread of light will call forth their strength and courage to help them step out of their difficulties. [现象现状说明 段] I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the following example(s).For instance when someone is starving to death, just a little food and water from you may save his(her) life. Again, when a little girl in a poor rural area drops out of school because of poverty, just a small sum of money from you may support her to finish school and change her life. In these circumstances you have given love which is like a lamp in a dark place where light is most needed. [举例论证段] To sum up, we should offer our help to all the needed. We expect to get love from others and we also give love to others. So when you see someone in difficulty or in distress and in need of help, don't hesitate to give your love to him (her). I believe that the relationship between people will be harmonious and that our society will be a better place for us to live in. [归纳结论段] 2000 年(2005 年大纲样题) Ⅰ. Direction: Study the following two pictures carefully and write and essay to 1) describe the pictures, 2) deduce（推理）the purpose of the drawer of the pictures, and 3) suggest counter-measures（对策）. As is shown in the pictures, with the rampancy of commercial fishing, the number of fishes dramatically(sharply) decreased. In one pictures, there were various kinds of fish and only one fishing-boat in 1900. On the contrary, in1995 there was only one fish, with many fishing-boats. [图表描述段] The purpose of this picture is to show us that due (great enough) attention has to be paid to the decrease (decline) of ocean resources. Owing to over-fishing the number of fishes has obviously dropped. If we let this situation go (continue) as it is, we do not know where fish will be in the future .By that time ,our A brief History of World Commercial Fishing