Peer-Review and Revision Does the abstract include essentials of background, problem,method,result,conclusion? Are there three moves (background,problem/gap, purpose/thesis/filing the gap)in the introduction? Are there too many subtitles? Does the paper have a logical outline,which meet 8 the requirements of parallelism,coordination, subordination and division?Peer-Review and Revision Are there three moves (background, problem/gap, purpose/thesis/filing the gap) in the introduction? Are there too many subtitles? Does the paper have a logical outline, which meet the requirements of parallelism, coordination, subordination and division? 8 7 6 5 Does the abstract include essentials of background, problem, method, result, conclusion?