湖南人文科技学院课程教案 Exercise:To improve the following story Born in Fujian Province in 1875,Oiu Jin is one of the most revered and respected Chinese female heroines..She was a leader and a pathbreaking(开创t性觔pioneer of equal rights for women.In addition to giving her support to women's learning and education..she opposed the brutal,barbaric(s残忍的)，and cruel tradition of foot binding.Trained in classical literature.she ended up becoming a talented poe and political writer and the first woman to join and be a member of Sun Yatsen's Kuomintang.She was tortured by Qing officials in the year of 1907.In this day and age she is enshrined(t神圣前beside West lake in the city of Hangzhou. 2.Using language vividly If you want to move people with your speeches,use vivid,animated language.Two of the most important ways to do this are imagery and rhythm. (1)Imagery a.concrete words Concrete words call up mental impressions of sights,sounds,touch,smell,and taste. b.Simile:an explicit comparison between things that are essentially different ye have something in common.It always contains the word"like”or"“as” Chinese VS.English Simile 胆小如鼠chicken-hearted,.pigeon-hearted 力壮如牛as strong as a horse 雨后春笋spring up like mushroom 多如牛毛plentiful as blackberries 画蛇添足paint the lily(as fair as a lily) 形影不离like peas and carrots c.Metaphor:an implicit comparison between things that are essentially different yet have something in common..It does not contain the word"like”or“as” Art is the torch of a nation's spirit.-Li Changchun With globalization,the same sea washes all of humankind.We are all in the same boat.There are no safe lands.-Kofi Annan Ex:Using metaphor to talk about the Chinese dream 湖南人文科技学院课程教案 Exercise: To improve the following story Born in Fujian Province in 1875, Qiu Jin is one of the most revered and respected Chinese female heroines. She was a leader and a pathbreaking(开创性的) pioneer of equal rights for women. In addition to giving her support to women’s learning and education, she opposed the brutal, barbaric（残忍的）, and cruel tradition of foot binding. Trained in classical literature, she ended up becoming a talented poet and political writer and the first woman to join and be a member of Sun Yatsen’s Kuomintang. She was tortured by Qing officials in the year of 1907. In this day and age she is enshrined(神圣的) beside West lake in the city of Hangzhou. 2. Using language vividly If you want to move people with your speeches, use vivid, animated language. Two of the most important ways to do this are imagery and rhythm. (1) Imagery a. concrete words Concrete words call up mental impressions of sights, sounds, touch, smell, and taste. b. Simile: an explicit comparison between things that are essentially different yet have something in common. It always contains the word “like” or “as”. Chinese VS. English Simile 胆小如鼠 chicken-hearted, pigeon-hearted 力壮如牛 as strong as a horse 雨后春笋 spring up like mushroom 多如牛毛 plentiful as blackberries 画蛇添足 paint the lily (as fair as a lily) 形影不离 like peas and carrots c. Metaphor: an implicit comparison between things that are essentially different yet have something in common. It does not contain the word “like” or “as”. Art is the torch of a nation’s spirit. —Li Changchun With globalization, the same sea washes all of humankind. We are all in the same boat. There are no safe lands. —Kofi Annan Ex: Using metaphor to talk about the Chinese dream