2.第一句话可以套用,如范文18: There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of wealth 3.whle轻微转折和对比,强转折用词but, however 4. master主人 As far as I am concemed, I agree with the latter opinion. There is a saying, " Everyone is the architect of his own future. " Which one' s fate is decided in his own hands In fact. no one is destined to a certain fate in his or her life We must depend on ourselves to changes our lives and make us successful and happr er strength and ability they have 注:1.第一句 as far as与 I agree重复,把后半句改为 the latter opinion seems more reasonable. 2. architect建筑师, archor弓箭手 3. In fact前后是转折关系,之前从正面阐述,之后从反面阐述 范文17 My view on Fate(续 Let's take Helen Keller, an extraordinary American woman, for example. When she was only 19 months old, she became blind and deaf. Instead of accepting her misfortune helplessly, she showed great courage and unconquerable spinit in fighting against her destined fate and was awarded the Presidents Medal of Freedom in 1964 because of the achievements she had made for helping the blind, the deaf and the speechless. This story tells us that a wise man is always creating his own fate rather than waiting for good luck. 主:1.本段开始举例 2. Lets take…… for example中间是插入语,表示强调,举例不宜太长 In conclusion, I believe that everyone is bom equal and is the builder of his own fate We can have good fortune only if we take pains and work hard. We should bear the following saying in mind, "Every man is the master of his own fate 主: bear sth. in mind:把……牢记在心 范文13. The Way to Success A-E: Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success. a man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit. He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be. Dr Sun Yat-sen was such a man. Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with fimness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty. Diligence means steadiness in one' s work and study Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep attentive to studies. Marx often worked 15 hours a day. Life is short and we have many things to do. Wthout diligence no one can II、社会热点话题写作逻辑结构 Paragraph1:(1)概括性的引出要评论的事物或观点( general) (2)具体描述这个事物或者观点(或者是我对这个现象/事物的基本看法 specific) Paragraph2:(1)作者对该现象货问题的基本看法,即文章的论点句 支持性的细节分论点(至少两点) (3)本段总结(可以省略)。 Paragraph3:(1)总结全文,定下结论(通常为我的对策或看法)。 四级作文试题2000年1月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance my College Education. You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below 1.上大学的费用( tuition and fees)可以通过多多种途径解决 2.哪种途径适合我(说明理由) How I Finance My College Education How I Finance My College Education 第一段:首先,应该是用一种描述性的语言引出讨论的重点 Nowadays/At present/ Currently/ These days/ Today, tuitions and fees for college students are imore expensive l much higher than ever before. How to finance my college education has become a matter of concern 第二段:有多种的方法,例如:1向父母;2银行贷款3打工挣钱 第二段主题句: There are many ways to support my college education financially/ Ways to support my university study financially vary greatlv/are various 第二段分写: In the first place, I can get/ gain/obtain all the money from my parents In the second place, I can apply for/ ask for a bank loan, especially set up/ established for college students/ undergraduates What's more, I can find a part time job to eam enough money2. 第一句话可以套用，如范文18：There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of wealth. 3. while 轻微转折和对比，强转折用词but, however 4. master 主人 As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion. There is a saying, “Everyone is the architect of his own future.” Which means one’s fate is decided in his own hands. In fact, no one is destined to a certain fate in his or her life. Those who claim that they were born to fail or be unlucky just can’t realize how much inner strength and ability they have. We must depend on ourselves to changes our lives and make us successful and happy. 注：1. 第一句as far as与I agree重复，把后半句改为the latter opinion seems more reasonable。 2. architect 建筑师，archor 弓箭手 3. In fact 前后是转折关系，之前从正面阐述，之后从反面阐述 范文17. My View on Fate （续） Let’s take Helen Keller, an extraordinary American woman, for example. When she was only 19 months old, she became blind and deaf. Instead of accepting her misfortune helplessly, she showed great courage and unconquerable spirit in fighting against her destined fate and was awarded the President’s Medal of Freedom in 1964 because of the achievements she had made for helping the blind, the deaf and the speechless. This story tells us that a wise man is always creating his own fate rather than waiting for good luck. 注：1. 本段开始举例 2. Let's take……for example 中间是插入语，表示强调，举例不宜太长。 In conclusion, I believe that everyone is born equal and is the builder of his own fate We can have good fortune only if we take pains and work hard. We should bear the following saying in mind, “Every man is the master of his own fate.” 注：bear sth. in mind：把……牢记在心 范文13. The Way to Success 第二段：Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success. A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit. He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be. Dr. Sun Yat-sen was such a man. Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty. Diligence means steadiness in one’s work and study. Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep attentive to studies. Marx often worked 15 hours a day. Life is short and we have many things to do. Without diligence no one can achieve anything. II、社会热点话题写作逻辑结构 Paragraph 1: (1) 概括性的引出要评论的事物或观点（general）； (2) 具体描述这个事物或者观点（或者是我对这个现象/ 事物的基本看法specific）。 Paragraph 2: (1) 作者对该现象货问题的基本看法，即文章的论点句； (2) 支持性的细节分论点（至少两点）； (3) 本段总结（可以省略）。 Paragraph 3: (1) 总结全文，定下结论（通常为我的对策或看法）。 四级作文试题2000年1月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance my College Education. You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 上大学的费用（tuition and fees）可以通过多多种途径解决。 2. 哪种途径适合我（说明理由）。 How I Finance My College Education How I Finance My College Education 第一段：首先，应该是用一种描述性的语言引出讨论的重点： Nowadays/ At present/ Currently/ These days/ Today, tuitions and fees for college students are 【more expensive】 much higher than ever before. How to finance my college education has become a matter of concern. 第二段：有多种的方法，例如：1.向父母; 2.银行贷款 3.打工挣钱 第二段主题句：There are many ways to support my college education financially./ Ways to support my university study financially vary greatly/ are various. 第二段分写： In the first place, I can get/ gain/ obtain all the money from my parents. In the second place, I can apply for/ ask for a bank loan, especially set up/ established for college students/ undergraduates. What’s more, I can find a part time job to earn enough money