contrary! differs sharply 3 In recent few years, the phenomenon/ issue/ problem of owning a private car has been brought to public attention/ in the limelight. People' s views on/opinions of owing a private car vary widely 写成3段的首段写法 With the development of moden society/ science and technology, /With the improvement of people' s living standard more and more people can own private cars cars are entering ordinary families the growing number of people/ people in ever increasing numbers can have access to private cars.(此句是引言) 支持段的主题句: ome people claim that/ As is pointed out that/ It is generally believed that/ it is widely accepted that there are some dvantages of owning a private car. There is no doubt that private cars benefit people hugely 支持段的分论点: O il First, private cars provide people with the most convenient form of transportation 2 Afid Second, it is comfortable for people to travel in, especially in changeable weather/raining days/sand storm B *M Third, only a private car can show a person's social status/ achievement/ success/ prosperity in his or her caree 否定段的主题句:① However( Nonetheless/ Nevertheless//Bu, there are some disadvantages of owing a private car Every coin has two sides 2 While enjoying the convenience that private cars bring us, we should not ignore the problem they creat introduce/make 3 Despite/ In spite of/ For all the advantages, they brings their own disadvantages/problems/negative effects 4 Like anything else, private cars also have their own weakness/limits However, private cars are not without shortcomings/faults e Yet other speak of the problems private cars have brought. They complain that O However, private cars may also bring with it problems our society had not previously faced 8 Despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by private cars, the changes they bring could very well lead to potentially adverse consequences 否定段的分论点: ①占有空间 on the one hand, private cars take up/ occupy too much space ②交通事故 On the other hand, a driver should be careful/ cautious while driving, otherwise, car accidents are mo likely to happen ③污染环境 What's more/ln addition, private cars give off/discharge/ release co which pollute the environment/air 注意:所谓上义词是指抽象、概括和笼统的,就是比较 superordinate的词:而下义词就是具体的东西,即 subordinate的东西。 第四段(总结段)的写法 O Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think that the advantages outweigh/ are greater than the disadvantages. As for the above problem, I'm sure they will be settled by the scientists in the future/ It is only a matter of time for the problems to be solved 2 Unquestionably, the challenge of private cars means we all should consider how we can control them, so that they will not control us B Whether the private cars are a blessing or a curse is a difficult question to answer, yet the desire for the comfort and dependence a private car can bring will not be elminated 4 Anyway/ Anyhow/ In any case, whether the effect is good or bad, one thing is certain private cars have changed and will continue to change the way of our transportation, our leisure and our life 选择题型变体逻辑结构( My View on Sth 选择性观点的变体的文章写作逻辑结构: Paragraph:(1)引出将要评论的事物或者是观点:(2)简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法 Paragraph Il:(1)提出作者观点(本文主题句) (2)举例加以论证 Paragraph‖:(1)总结全文(再次强调作者观点) 范文17 My View on Fate There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of fate. Some people believe that everyone is born to a certain that he can not change, while some other people think that every man is the master of his own life 注:1. consensus相同意见contrary./ differs sharply. ③ In recent few years, the phenomenon/ issue/ problem of owning a private car has been brought to public attention/ in the limelight. People's views on/ opinions of owing a private car vary widely. 写成3段的首段写法： With the development of modern society/ science and technology, / With the improvement of people's living standard, more and more people can own private cars. cars are entering ordinary families. the growing number of people/ people in ever increasing numbers can have access to private cars.(此句是引言) 支持段的主题句： Some people claim that/ As is pointed out that/ It is generally believed that/ It is widely accepted that, there are some advantages of owning a private car. There is no doubt that private cars benefit people hugely. 支持段的分论点： ① 方便 First, private cars provide people with the most convenient form of transportation. ② 舒适 Second, it is comfortable for people to travel in, especially in changeable weather/ raining days/ sand storm . ③ 炫耀 Third, only a private car can show a person's social status/ achievement/ success/ prosperity in his or her career. 否定段的主题句：① However (Nonetheless/ Nevertheless/ But), there are some disadvantages of owing a private car/ Every coin has two sides. ② While enjoying the convenience that private cars bring us, we should not ignore the problem they create/ produce/ introduce/ make. ③ Despite/ In spite of/ For all the advantages, they brings their own disadvantages/ problems/ negative effects ④ Like anything else, private cars also have their own weakness/ limits. ⑤ However, private cars are not without shortcomings/ faults. ⑥ Yet other speak of the problems private cars have brought. They complain that...... ⑦ However, private cars may also bring with it problems our society had not previously faced. ⑧ Despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by private cars, the changes they bring could very well lead to potentially adverse consequences. 否定段的分论点： ① 占有空间 On the one hand, private cars take up/ occupy too much space. ② 交通事故 On the other hand, a driver should be careful/ cautious while driving, otherwise, car accidents are more likely to happen. ③ 污染环境 What's more/In addition, private cars give off/ discharge/ release CO which pollute the environment/ air. 注意：所谓上义词是指抽象、概括和笼统的，就是比较superordinate的词；而下义词就是具体的东西，即subordinate的东西。 第四段（总结段）的写法： ① Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think that the advantages outweigh/ are greater than the disadvantages. As for the above problem, I'm sure they will be settled by the scientists in the future/ It is only a matter of time for the problems to be solved. ② Unquestionably, the challenge of private cars means we all should consider how we can control them, so that they will not control us. ③ Whether the private cars are a blessing or a curse is a difficult question to answer, yet the desire for the comfort and independence a private car can bring will not be elminated. ④ Anyway/ Anyhow/ In any case, whether the effect is good or bad, one thing is certain: private cars have changed and will continue to change the way of our transportation, our leisure and our life. 选择题型变体逻辑结构（My View on Sth.） 选择性观点的变体的文章写作逻辑结构： Paragraph I:（1）引出将要评论的事物或者是观点； （2）简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。 Paragraph II:（1）提出作者观点（本文主题句）； （2）举例加以论证。 Paragraph III:（1）总结全文（再次强调作者观点） 范文17. My View on Fate There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of fate. Some people believe that everyone is born to a certain that he can not change, while some other people think that every man is the master of his own life. 注：1. consensus 相同意见