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Academic Writing ——Summarizing &Paraphrasing 外国语学院——王莉莎
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驱动— 呈现交际场景 The arguments in the article are reasonable,but you have different ideas to this topic.You intent to write a summary-response article to give your comment towards Privacy and Computer;and Scenario: submit it to the Huffpost You are strongly interested in how to newspaper of UK. protect your personal information during surfing and shopping in the internet.You HUFFPOST LIFESTYLE occasionally read an article online, entitled Privacy and Computer. Is Taking a Lunch Break for Wimps?The BS Behind the Thinking
Scenario: The arguments in the article are reasonable, but you have different ideas to this topic. You intent to write a summary-response article to give your comment towards Privacy and Computer, and submit it to the Huffpost You are strongly interested in how to newspaper of UK. protect your personal information during surfing and shopping in the internet. You occasionally read an article online, entitled Privacy and Computer. 驱动——呈现交际场景
Mini tasks Tasks 语言目标 交际目标 育人目标 1. 能够准确识别作者的主旨 2.能够恰当使用总结中常用短语引出作者主要观 能够准确精炼的总结作 培养学生看待观点的客 How to write a summary 点 者主要观点 观性 3. 能够掌提总结的写作结构 1. 了解什么是释义策略(Paraphrasing)及优质释 义互文的特点。 2. 掌握释义策略的具体方法。 能够用释义策略将他人 了解释义策略为什么是 3. 能够用同义词转换、词性转换、代词代替名词、 观点转述到学术写作中，避免剽窃的必要写作技 How to paraphrase 并达到中度或彻底修改 巧，使学生树立学术道 同义短语转换策略较为准确的转述原文中对应 释义互文标准且符合文 德规范意识。 的内容 献引用学术规范。 4. 能够使用改变句法策略较为准确转述原文中对 应的内容 1. 能够使用评论中的常用短语指出作者的观点错 能够有逻辑地分析评论 How to write a response 误、论述不充分等问题 与作者一致的观点，并 培养学生对他人观点不 对于不同于作者的观点 盲从，评判性思维方式 2. 能够掌握正式语体表达自己观点的方式。 或论述进行评判性评价 4
4 Mini tasks 01 02 03 04 ole proprietorship Partnership management Corporation Tasks 语言目标 交际目标 育人目标 How to write a summary 1. 能够准确识别作者的主旨 2. 能够恰当使用总结中常用短语引出作者主要观 点 3. 能够掌握总结的写作结构 能够准确精炼的总结作 者主要观点 培养学生看待观点的客 观性 How to paraphrase 1. 了解什么是释义策略（Paraphrasing）及优质释 义互文的特点。 2. 掌握释义策略的具体方法。 3. 能够用同义词转换、词性转换、代词代替名词、 同义短语转换策略较为准确的转述原文中对应 的内容 4. 能够使用改变句法策略较为准确转述原文中对 应的内容 能够用释义策略将他人 观点转述到学术写作中， 并达到中度或彻底修改 释义互文标准且符合文 献引用学术规范。 了解释义策略为什么是 避免剽窃的必要写作技 巧，使学生树立学术道 德规范意识。 How to write a response 1. 能够使用评论中的常用短语指出作者的观点错 误、论述不充分等问题 2. 能够掌握正式语体表达自己观点的方式。 能够有逻辑地分析评论 与作者一致的观点，并 对于不同于作者的观点 或论述进行评判性评价 培养学生对他人观点不 盲从，评判性思维方式
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驱动一尝试产出任务： Direction:read the article Privacy and Computer,write a summary and submit it online. 6
6 驱动—尝试产出任务： 01 02 03 04 ole proprietorship Partnership management Direction: read the article Privacy and Computer, write a summary and submit it online. ration _ _ _ _ _ _ _
Summarizing What is the summary? .A summary is a concise paraphrase of all the main ideas in an essay. Before writing a summary: Read the article to be summarized and be sure you understand it. Outline the article.Note the major points and key words to use in your summary. -Write a first draft of the summary WITHOUT looking at the article Always use paraphrase when writing a summary.If you do copy a phrase from the original,be sure it is a very important phrase that is necessary and cannot be paraphrased.In this case,put"quotation marks"around the phrase. -Target your first draft for approximately1/3 the length of the original. 7
7 Summarizing 01 02 03 04 ole proprietorship Partnership management What is the summary? •A summary is a concise paraphrase of all the main ideas in an essay. Before writing a summary: – Read the article to be summarized and be sure you understand it. – Outline the article. Note the major points and key words to use in your summary. – Write a first draft of the summary WITHOUT looking at the article. – Always use paraphrase when writing a summary. If you do copy a phrase from the original, be sure it is a very important phrase that is necessary and cannot be paraphrased. In this case, put “quotation marks” around the phrase. – Target your first draft for approximately1/3 the length of the original. ration
Summarizing When writing a summary: >Start your summary with a clear identification ofthe type of the work,title,author,and main point in the present tense at the beginning of the paragraph. >Cover all the writer's main ideas. The main ideas are referred to in the same order as in the original text. >The summary is objective without your own ideas,opinion,or interpretations.(Be careful with your word choice!) >Use APA style correctly. purpose
8 Summarizing 01 02 03 04 ole proprietorship Partnership management When writing a summary: ➢ Start your summary with a clear identification of the type of the work, title, author, and main point in the present tense at the beginning of the paragraph. ➢ Cover all the writer’s main ideas. ➢ The main ideas are referred to in the same order as in the original text. ➢ The summary is objective without your own ideas, opinion, or interpretations. (Be careful with your word choice!) ➢ Use APA style correctly. ration
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