全程设计 Section IV Writing
Section Ⅳ Writing
导期 写作·触类旁通 典题示例 读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使 之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。 Two men,both seriously ill,occupied the same hospital room.One man was allowed to sit up in his bed for an hour each afternoon to help empty the liquid from his lungs.His bed was next to the room's only window.The other man had to spend all his time on his back
导航 典题示例 读 后 续 写 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使 之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。 Two men,both seriously ill,occupied the same hospital room.One man was allowed to sit up in his bed for an hour each afternoon to help empty the liquid from his lungs.His bed was next to the room’s only window.The other man had to spend all his time on his back. 写作·触类旁通
The men talked for hours on end.They spoke of their wives and families,their homes,their jobs,their involvement in the military service,where they had been on vacation.Every afternoon when the man in the bed by the window could sit up,he would pass the time by describing to his roommate all the things he could see outside the window.The man in the other bed began to live for those one-hour periods where his world would be broadened by all the activity and colour of the world outside
导航 The men talked for hours on end.They spoke of their wives and families,their homes,their jobs,their involvement in the military service,where they had been on vacation.Every afternoon when the man in the bed by the window could sit up,he would pass the time by describing to his roommate all the things he could see outside the window.The man in the other bed began to live for those one-hour periods where his world would be broadened by all the activity and colour of the world outside
导 The window overlooked a park with a lovely lake.Ducks played on the water while children sailed their model boats.Young lovers walked arm in arm among flowers of every colour and a fine view of the city skyline could be seen in the distance.As the man by the window described all this in detail,the man on the other side of the room would close his eyes and imagine the beautiful scene
导航 The window overlooked a park with a lovely lake.Ducks played on the water while children sailed their model boats.Young lovers walked arm in arm among flowers of every colour and a fine view of the city skyline could be seen in the distance.As the man by the window described all this in detail,the man on the other side of the room would close his eyes and imagine the beautiful scene
导航 One warm afternoon the man by the window described a parade passing by.Although the other man couldn't hear the band-he could see it.In his mind's eye as the gentleman by the window described it excitedly
导航 One warm afternoon the man by the window described a parade passing by.Although the other man couldn’t hear the band—he could see it.In his mind’s eye as the gentleman by the window described it excitedly
导 Unexpectedly,a strange thought entered his head:Why should he have all the pleasure of seeing everything while I never get to see anything?It didn't seem fair.As the thought appeared the man felt ashamed at first.But as the days passed and he missed seeing more sights,his envy turned him sour and he found himself unable to sleep.He should be by that window-that thought now controlled his life
导航 Unexpectedly,a strange thought entered his head:Why should he have all the pleasure of seeing everything while I never get to see anything?It didn’t seem fair.As the thought appeared the man felt ashamed at first.But as the days passed and he missed seeing more sights,his envy turned him sour and he found himself unable to sleep.He should be by that window—that thought now controlled his life
导航、 Late one night as he lay staring at the ceiling,the man by the window began to cough
导航 Late one night as he lay staring at the ceiling,the man by the window began to cough
导航、 He struggled to look out of the window beside the bed.Much to his surprise,it faced a blank wall
导航 He struggled to look out of the window beside the bed.Much to his surprise,itfaced a blank wall
写作指导 通读短文可知，故事发生在一所医院的病房里，主要人物是 两位病人。 1理解全文，把握主线 通读短文可知，本文大意是：在一家医院的病房里住着两位 病人。其中一位病人经允许可以在每天下午起身坐上一个小 时。这位病人的病床靠近窗户，而另一位病人则不得不日夜 躺在床上。躺在窗边的病人每天向另一位病人描述他看到的 窗外的风景和故事。可是有一天听故事的病人开始产生嫉妒 心理，希望自己能够有机会看看窗外
导航 写 作 指 导 通读短文可知,故事发生在一所医院的病房里,主要人物是 两位病人。 1.理解全文,把握主线 通读短文可知,本文大意是:在一家医院的病房里住着两位 病人。其中一位病人经允许可以在每天下午起身坐上一个小 时。这位病人的病床靠近窗户,而另一位病人则不得不日夜 躺在床上。躺在窗边的病人每天向另一位病人描述他看到的 窗外的风景和故事。可是有一天听故事的病人开始产生嫉妒 心理,希望自己能够有机会看看窗外
导加 2.分析关键词和所给段落首句，展开想象合理续写 续写第一段首句是：一天深夜，当他躺在床上盯着天花板的 时候，靠窗户的那个人开始咳嗽起来。根据本句及前文所述， 可预测本段应该写靠窗户病人的病情十分危急，这位心生嫉 妒的病人的做法以及由此产生的后果。由于续写第二段开头 提及他看到了窗外的真实景象，因此，本段最后要提到病友去 世，他要求移到窗边病床上
导航 2.分析关键词和所给段落首句,展开想象合理续写 续写第一段首句是:一天深夜,当他躺在床上盯着天花板的 时候,靠窗户的那个人开始咳嗽起来。根据本句及前文所述, 可预测本段应该写靠窗户病人的病情十分危急,这位心生嫉 妒的病人的做法以及由此产生的后果。由于续写第二段开头 提及他看到了窗外的真实景象,因此,本段最后要提到病友去 世,他要求移到窗边病床上