全程设计 Section IV Writing
Section Ⅳ Writing
写作·触类旁通 典题示例 概要写作 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Parents everywhere praise their kids.Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids,says,"We've gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict."By giving kids a lot of praise,parents think they're building their
典 题 示 例 写作·触类旁通 概要写作 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Parents everywhere praise their kids.Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids,says, “We’ve gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict.” By giving kids a lot of praise,parentsthink they’re building their
children's confidence,when,in fact,it may be just the opposite Too much praise can backfire and,when given in a way that's insincere,make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents' praise has put them
children’s confidence,when,in fact,it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire and,when given in a way that’s insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents’ praise has put them
Still,don't go too far in the other direction.Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much. Kids will feel like they're not good enough or that you don't care and,as a result,may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments
Still,don’t go too far in the other direction.Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much. Kids will feel like they’re not good enough or that you don’t care and,as a result,may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments
So what is the right amount of praise?Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity.If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward."We should especially recognise our children's efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal,"says Donahue,author of Parenting without Fear:Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters."One thing to remember is that it's the process not the end product that matters
So what is the right amount of praise?Expertssay that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity.If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward.“We should especially recognise our children’s efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal,”says Donahue,author of Parenting without Fear:Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters.“One thing to remember is that it’s the process not the end product that matters
Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team.But if he's out there every day and playing hard,you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses.Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognising your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard,cook dinner,or finish a book report.But whatever it is,praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的)to the amount of effort your child has put into it
Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team.But if he’s out there every day and playing hard,you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses.Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognising your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard,cook dinner,or finish a book report.But whatever it is,praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的) to the amount of effort your child has put into it
写作指导 1.细读原文。首先要掌握文章的主旨和结构，明确各段的大 意。 2.概要应包括原文中的主要事实，用较多的文字写重要内容， 略去不必要的细节，不要在写作中表达自己的观点和文中未 出现的信息
写 作 指 导 1.细读原文。首先要掌握文章的主旨和结构,明确各段的大 意。 2.概要应包括原文中的主要事实,用较多的文字写重要内容, 略去不必要的细节,不要在写作中表达自己的观点和文中未 出现的信息
3.注意要点之间的衔接，要用适当的关联词语贯通全文，切忌 只简单地写出一些互不相干的句子，但也不要每两句之间都 加关联词语，以免显得生硬。 4.不排斥用原文的某些词句，但不要照搬原文的句子。如果 不能完全用自己的话语表达至少也要对原文句子做一些同义 词替换，如果结构上也能有一些转换会更好
3.注意要点之间的衔接,要用适当的关联词语贯通全文,切忌 只简单地写出一些互不相干的句子,但也不要每两句之间都 加关联词语,以免显得生硬。 4.不排斥用原文的某些词句,但不要照搬原文的句子。如果 不能完全用自己的话语表达至少也要对原文句子做一些同义 词替换,如果结构上也能有一些转换会更好
高分范文 As parents,you shouldn't praise your kids too much, which can prevent them from trying new things or taking a risk.Meanwhile,praising them too little also does harm to your children's growth.Your praise must be based on your kids'efforts instead of the outcomes.In addition,the quality of your praise is more significant than the quantity,which you should bear in mind
高 分 范 文 As parents,you shouldn’t praise your kids too much, which can prevent them from trying new things or taking a risk.Meanwhile,praising them too little also does harm to your children’s growth.Your praise must be based on your kids’ efforts instead of the outcomes.In addition,the quality of your praise is more significant than the quantity,which you should bear in mind
名师点评 本篇概要概括了文章的中心思想，合理运用了prevent sb from doing sth、take a risk、do harm to、be based on、 bear in mind等大量高级短语，以及动词-ing形式和定语从句 的复杂句式结构，显示了过硬的基本功与灵活的语言运用能 力
名师点评 本篇概要概括了文章的中心思想,合理运用了prevent sb from doing sth、take a risk、do harm to、be based on、 bear in mind等大量高级短语,以及动词-ing形式和定语从句 的复杂句式结构,显示了过硬的基本功与灵活的语言运用能 力