读后续写
读后续写
读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使 之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。 It was 8 a.m.,Kathy,a 25-year-old nurse,had just finished a 12-hour night duties at a hospital.She was tired,but glad to be sailing along highway to where she lived.Although the local government had posted a snow warning,the calm gray sky convinced Kathy the drive would be safe."I thought I would be in bed in an hour,"she said
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使 之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。 It was 8 a.m.,Kathy,a 25-year-old nurse,had just finished a 12-hour night duties at a hospital.She was tired,but glad to be sailing along highway to where she lived.Although the local government had posted a snow warning,the calm gray sky convinced Kathy the drive would be safe.“I thought I would be in bed in an hour,”she said. 读 后 续 写
Snow began when she was halfway home.Listening to the radio,Kathy learnt the highway was closed because a bus had slid off the road.She texted some friends and her mom,and tried not to sleep as she waited
Snow began when she was halfway home.Listening to the radio,Kathy learnt the highway was closed because a bus had slid off the road.She texted some friends and her mom,and tried not to sleep as she waited
After a couple of hours,however,conditions worsened. Strong winds began rocking Kathy's car.She couldn't see anything outside,and snow was drifting up her doors.Late in the afternoon a police officer came and asked if she was in any difficulty.She said she was fine.She asked the police officer if there was any way to get past the trucks."No, ma'am,”he answered..“You're not going anywhere
After a couple of hours,however,conditions worsened. Strong winds began rocking Kathy’s car.She couldn’t see anything outside,and snow was drifting up her doors.Late in the afternoon a police officer came and asked if she was in any difficulty.She said she was fine.She asked the police officer if there was any way to get past the trucks.“No, ma’am,”he answered.“You’re not going anywhere
Once as it got dark,Kathy began to worry.She texted her brother Gary,,telling him to drive snowmobile(雪地机s动车)to get to the highway and find her. As Gary rode slowly alongside the rows of cars and trucks,people would roll down their windows and ask for help."Sorry,I am to find my sister and I can't help you,"he explained. Near 10 p.m.Gary reached Kathy.He directed Kathy to pull her car onto the road shoulder and asked her to get into his snowmobile
Once as it got dark,Kathy began to worry.She texted her brother Gary,telling him to drive snowmobile(雪地机动车) to get to the highway and find her. As Gary rode slowly alongside the rows of cars and trucks,people would roll down their windows and ask for help.“Sorry,I am to find my sister and I can’t help you,”he explained. Near 10 p.m.Gary reached Kathy.He directed Kathy to pull her car onto the road shoulder and asked her to get into his snowmobile
As they headed for home,the funny thing happened. About five kilometres into the journey,Gary made a mistake. What he thought was a shallow ditch()turned out to be a deep trough().Instead of coming out from the other side,they just kept going down.They were trapped.And heavy snow was over their heads
As they headed for home,the funny thing happened. About five kilometres into the journey,Gary made a mistake. What he thought was a shallow ditch(浅沟) turned out to be a deep trough(槽谷).Instead of coming out from the other side,they just kept going down.They were trapped.And heavy snow was over their heads
At that moment,they had to take action and get out. When they arrived at home,their mother was waiting for them
At that moment,they had to take action and get out. ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ When they arrived at home,their mother was waiting for them. ______________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________
写作指导 1.短文讲述了Kathy在从医院下班开车回家的路上被大雪 因住的故事。哥哥Gary开雪地汽车去接她，但是由于Gary的 失误，汽车也陷入深槽谷中，他俩再次陷入困境。 2.根据续写第一段的提示语可知，Kathy和Gary想方设法摆 脱困境，续写时可以写他们是怎样脱险的，他们的感受，他们说 了什么，做了什么等
1.短文讲述了Kathy在从医院下班开车回家的路上被大雪 困住的故事。哥哥Gary开雪地汽车去接她,但是由于Gary的 失误,汽车也陷入深槽谷中,他俩再次陷入困境。 2.根据续写第一段的提示语可知,Kathy和Gary想方设法摆 脱困境,续写时可以写他们是怎样脱险的,他们的感受,他们说 了什么,做了什么等。 写 作 指 导
3.根据续写第二段的提示语可知，他们成功到家的时候，母亲 正在等他们，可以写母亲的感受，以及这次事件带给他们什么 感悟。 4.两段续写应是记叙文体裁，人称是第三人称，时态多用一般 过去时
3.根据续写第二段的提示语可知,他们成功到家的时候,母亲 正在等他们,可以写母亲的感受,以及这次事件带给他们什么 感悟。 4.两段续写应是记叙文体裁,人称是第三人称,时态多用一般 过去时
高分范文 At that moment,they had to take action and get out.Gary tried to start the snowmobile again.However,even though it had roared loudly,it still didn't work.After sinking for a long time,they were on the point of losing hope when a truck with several young men passed by.They stopped to go to their rescue.They managed to pull the snowmobile out with all their efforts.Excited and grateful as Kathy and Gary were, the young men had left before they said thanks to them
高 分 范 文 At that moment,they had to take action and get out.Gary tried to start the snowmobile again.However,even though it had roared loudly,itstill didn’t work.After sinking for a long time,they were on the point of losing hope when a truck with several young men passed by.They stopped to go to their rescue.They managed to pull the snowmobile out with all their efforts.Excited and grateful as Kathy and Gary were, the young men had left before they said thanks to them