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Chapter 5 Revise (Cohesive)
objective Be able to revise your paragraphs and make them cohesive NEU Schoolof Business&Administration 3/Chapter 5
NEU School of Business & Administration 3/Chapter 5 Objective • Be able to revise your paragraphs and make them cohesive
Cohesive? What does cohesive mean Cohesive: when all parts are related to form a Whole NEU Schoolof Business&Administration 4/Chapter 5
NEU School of Business & Administration 4/Chapter 5 Cohesive? • What does cohesive mean? Cohesive: when all parts are related to form a whole
Make paragraphs cohesive by learning two things define a cohesive paragraph write a cohesive paragraph using a topic sentence supporting sentences transitions NEU Schoolof Business&Administration 5/Chapter 5
NEU School of Business & Administration 5/Chapter 5 • Make paragraphs cohesive by learning two things: – define a cohesive paragraph – write a cohesive paragraph using • a topic sentence • supporting sentences • transitions
Define a cohesive paragraph Being Cohesive: What Is a Cohesive Paragraph? Look at the following letter In Chapter 4, you revised it to make it complete But something is still wrong NEU Schoolof Business&Administration 6/Chapter 5
NEU School of Business & Administration 6/Chapter 5 • Being Cohesive: What Is a Cohesive Paragraph? – Look at the following letter. – In Chapter 4, you revised it to make it complete. – But something is still wrong. Define a cohesive paragraph
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NEU School of Business & Administration 7/Chapter 5 Dear Ms Green PPS I refer to your recent communication, and for your information please be advised that the PPS details and application form were sent to you at an earlier date. If you complete and return the form to us, we can process your application immediately. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely Clever Man
What is a cohesive paragraph? It only has one paragraph The paragraph is very long There are several unrelated ideas in the paragraph The paragraph in this letter is not cohesive NEU Schoolof Business&Administration 8/Chapter 5
NEU School of Business & Administration 8/Chapter 5 • It only has one paragraph • The paragraph is very long • There are several unrelated ideas in the paragraph The paragraph in this letter is not cohesive. What is a cohesive paragraph?
What is a cohesive paragraph? A conesⅳ e paragraph is 1one long sentence containing many unrelated ideas or subjects 2)a group of unrelated sentences containing many unrelated ideas or subjects 3a group of sentences related to one another by a single idea or subject 4)one long sentence containing one idea or subject NEU Schoolof Business&Administration 9/Chapter 5
NEU School of Business & Administration 9/Chapter 5 • A cohesive paragraph is: 1) one long sentence containing many unrelated ideas or subjects. 2) a group of unrelated sentences containing many unrelated ideas or subjects. 3) a group of sentences related to one another by a single idea or subject. 4) one long sentence containing one idea or subject. What is a cohesive paragraph?
What is a cohesive paragraph? A paragraph is a group of sentences related to one another by a single subject or idea .Remember One paragraph, one idea Begin a new paragraph each time you introduce a new idea NEU Schoolof Business&Administration 10/Chapter 5
NEU School of Business & Administration 10/Chapter 5 A paragraph is a group of sentences related to one another by a single subject or idea. •Remember: – One paragraph, one idea. – Begin a new paragraph each time you introduce a new idea. What is a cohesive paragraph?
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NEU School of Business & Administration 11/Chapter 5 Dear Ms Green PPS I refer to your recent communication, and for your information please be advised that the PPS details and application form were sent to you at an earlier date. If you complete and return the form to us, we can process your application immediately. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely Clever Man