9B Unit 6 Caring for your heath Writing 深圳市福田区莲花中学英语科组范玲玲
深圳市福田区莲花中学英语科组 范玲玲
writin g 通过本课学习，你将会 了解英语中“"建议类回信”的写作结构并能够合理组织书 信语言 为了达到目标，你需要 认真听讲、仔细思考、仿写一篇作文 达到这个目标，你能够 写出一篇结构合理、语言丰满的”建议类回信” A
通过本课学习，你将会 为了达到目标，你需要 达到这个目标，你能够 了解英语中“建议类回信”的写作结构并能够合理组织书 信语言 认真听讲、仔细思考、仿写一篇作文 写出一篇结构合理、语言丰满的”建议类回信” w r i t i n g
Where is he He is in hospital. What happened to him He hurt his leg. An email to a sick classmate
Where is he？ What happened to him？ He is in hospital. He hurt his leg. An email to a sick classmate
save time Structure logical cohesive the way that paragraphs are put together or organized
the way that paragraphs are put together or organized save time logical cohesive
To: Andy From: im Hi Andy, I'm so sorry to hear that you fell down some stairs and hurt yourself show sympathy yesterday.That sounds terrible.I hope you're feeling better now. I understand that you will have to stay in hospital for more than two weeks,but don't worry about your studies.I will take notes for you and help you with your studies when you come back to school.While you're in hospital,it's good to read some books or listen to some music.This will help you relax and stay positive. I wish you all the best for a rapid recovery. Cheers, Jim
show sympathy
show your s sympathy 1.I'm (deeply)sorry to hearabout.... 2.We are filled with (deep sorrow)... 3.Please acceptmy deepestsympathy... 4.I couldw'tbelievethat... 5.I'm writingto express my deep care for you. 6.I'm so upsetto hearthat... A
1. I’m （deeply）sorry to hear about.... 2. We are filled with (deep sorrow)... 3. Please accept my deepest sympathy… 4. I couldn’t believe that… 5. I’m writing to express my deep care for you. 6. I’m so upset to hear that ... show your sympathy
To: Andy From: im Hi Andy, I'm so sorry to hear that you fell down some stairs and hurt yourself show sympathy yesterday.That sounds terrible.I hope you're feeling better now. I understand that you will have to stay in hospital for more than two list problems and weeks,but don't worry about your studies.I will take notes for you comfort him and help you with your studies when you come back to school.While you're in hospital,it's good to read some books or listen to some music.This will help you relax and stay positive. I wish you all the best for a rapid recovery. Cheers, Jim
show sympathy list problems and comfort him
list the difficulties 1.You may havetroublein doing... 2.You may sufferfrom... 3.You may facedifficultiessuchas... 4.You may havea hardtime... A
list the difficulties 1. You may have trouble in doing ... 2. You may suffer from... 3. You may face difficulties such as... 4. You may have a hard time
To: Andy From: im Hi Andy, I'm so sorry to hear that you fell down some stairs and hurt yourself show sympathy yesterday.That sounds terrible.I hope you're feeling better now. I understand that you will have to stay in hospital for more than two list problems and weeks,but don't worry about your studies.I will take notes for you comfort him and help you with your studies when you come back to school.While give suggestions you're in hospital,it's good to read some books or listen to some music.This will help you relax and stay positive. I wish you all the best for a rapid recovery. Cheers, Jim
show sympathy give suggestions list problems and comfort him
give advice 1.Youshould/could do... 2.You weed to/oughtto/had betterdo... 3.You are supposed/expected to do... 4.Youmustw't... 5.Remenberto do... 6.Don't do.......Dow'tforgetto do... 子.itis good./wiseto do.… 8.why wot do...? 9.why don't you do...? 10.What/How about doing...? A
1. You should/could do... 2. You need to/ought to/ had better do... 3.You are supposed/expected to do... 4.You mustn't … 5. Remember to do... 6. Don’t do……/Don't forget to do... 7.It is good/ wise to do… 8. Why not do...? 9. Why don’t you do…? 10. What/How about doing...? give advice