试卷代号：1359 国家开放大学（中央广播电视大学）2016年春季学期“开放本科”期末考试 高级英语写作试题 2016年7月 注意事项 一、将你的学号、姓名及分校（工作站）名称填写在答题纸的规定栏 内。考试结束后，把试卷和答题纸放在桌上。试卷和答题纸均不得带 出考场。监考人收完考卷和答题纸后才可离开考场。 二、仔细阅读题目的说明，并按题目要求答题。答案一定要写在答 题纸的指定位置上，写在试卷上的答案无效。 三、用蓝、黑圆珠笔或钢笔答题，使用铅笔答题无效。 Information for the examinees: This examination consists of 3 parts.They are: Part 1:Vocabulary and Structure (10 points) Part 2:Paragraph Organization and Development (40 points) Part 3:Writing an Essay (50 points) The total marks for this examination are 100 points.Time allowed for completing this examination is 90 minutes. ●】 There will be no extra time to transfer answers to the Answer Sheet;therefore,you should write ALL your answers on the An- swer Sheet as you do each task. 1411
试卷代号 :1359 国家开放大学(中央广播电视大学)2016 年春季学期"开放本科"期末考试 高级英语写作试题 2016 注意事项 一、将你的学号、姓名及分校(工作站)名称填写在答题纸的规定栏 内。考试结束后，把试卷和答题纸放在桌上。试卷和答题纸均不得带 出考场。监考人收完考卷和答题纸后才可离开考场。 二、仔细阅读题目的说明，并按题目要求答题。答案一定要写在答 题纸的指定位置上，写在试卷上的答案元效。 三、用蓝、黑圆珠笔或钢笔答题，使用铅笔答题无效。 Information for the examinees: • This examination consists of 3 parts. They are: Part 1: Vocabulary and Structure (10 points) Part 2: Paragraph Organization and Development (40 points) Part 3: Writing an Essay (50 points) • The total marks for this examination are 100 points. Time allowed for completing this examination is 90 minutes. • There will be no extra time to transfer answers to the Answer Sheet; therefore , you should write ALL your answers on the Answer Sheet as you do each task. 1411
Part 1 Vocabulary and Structure [10 points] Questions 1-5 are based on the following task. Choose the appropriate words or expressions from the box to complete the following paragraph. There are THREE extra choices that you don't need.Write your answer on the Answer Sheet. A.keen B.Unless C.just as D.imitates E.difference F.For example G.body language H.however North Americans and South Americans have a few similarities in body language,but most of their nonverbal signals are different.(1),North Americans do not maintain eye contact during a conversation;(2),South Americans do.A North American usually meets the other person's eyes for a few seconds,looks away,and then back again.A South American looks directly into the other person's eyes and considers it impolite not to continue.Another (3)is how they use hand movements while speaking.South Americans use many gestures.North Americans use gestures only occasionally.North and South Americans are similar regarding distance between people speaking to each other.(4)it is a close friendship,North and South American stand about two to three feet apart.It's often possible to know where a person comes from by studying his or her (5) Part 2 Paragraph Organization and Development [40 points] Questions 6-8 are based on the following task.(15 points) Read the following paragraphs.Choose the best answer to each question.Write your answer A, B or C on the Answer Sheet. A new generation of communications technologies is upon us.They have changed workplace communication,providing many options for sending a message.(6) Email is so pervasive in organizations that it has become the default choice for communication.People still call each other at work,but sending an email to someone in the next cubicle is common.It's no surprise that most people believe email is used too often instead of face-to-face communication. (7).For short messages and quick questions,these channels are ideal.Of course,with smart phones,email may give you an instant response as well,but this varies by organizations and people.As you probably know,the real value of IMing is presence 1412
Part 1 Vocabul and Structure [10 poin Questions 1-5 are based on the following task. Choose the appropriate words or expressions from the box to complete the following paragraph. There are THREE extra choices that you don' t need. Write your answer on the Answer Sheet. A. keen B. Unless C. just as D. imitates E. difference F. For example G. body language H. however North Americans and South Americans have a few similarities in body language , but most of their nonverbal signals are different. (1) 一一一一， North Americans do not maintain eye contact during a conversation; (2) 一一一一一， South Americans do. A North American usually meets the other person' s eyes for a few seconds, looks away , and then back again. A South American looks directly into the other person' s eyes and considers it impolite not to continue. Another (3) 一一一一一 is how they use hand movements while speaking. South Americans use many gestures. North Americans use gestures only occasionally. North and South Americans are similar regarding distance between people speaking to each other. ( 4) 一一一一一 it is a close friendship , North and South American stand about two to three feet apart. It' s often possible to know where a person comes from by studying his or her (5) 一一一一一一· Part 2 Paragraph Organization and Development [40 pointsJ Questions 6-8 are based on the following task. (15 points) Read the following paragraphs. Choose the best answer to each question. Write your answer A, B or C on the Answer Sheet. A new generation of communications technologies is upon us. They have changed workplace communication , providing many options for sending a message. (6) 一~一一一一· Email is so pervasive in organizations that it has become the default choice for communication. People still call each other at work , but sending an email to someone in the next cubicle is common. It' s no surprise that most people believe email is used too often instead of face-to-face communication. (7)一一一一. For short messages and quick questions, these channels are ideal. Of course , with smart phones, email may give you an instant response as well , but this varies by organizations and people. As you probably know, the real value of IMing is " presence 1412
awareness"-you know someone is available to respond immediately.Although some people consider IM an annoying interruption at work,people who use IM are at the office report fewer disruptions and believe that IM saves time and provides timely,relevant information. One analyst predicts that in the next few years,a vast majority of the employees will use IM as their primary communications tool. Perhaps the more interesting technologies for communication are social media.Web 2.0, which encourages online interaction,has opened the door for people to participate on the web.This is quite different from the one-way communication of the early Internet,when companies would post brochure-like website for people to consume. The real value of social media for companies is the opportunity to connect with people online.(8).To promote interaction,companies use Web 2.0 technologies,for example,blogs,wikis,video,and social networking sites.These tools are used on the Internet,on a company's intranet and on extranets.The Fortune Global 100 companies are using social media actively.Seventy-nine percent are using at least one of four main social platforms-Twitter,videos,Facebook and blogs to communicate with customers.Of these tools,Twitter is the most frequently used and has proved useful for companies. 6.Choose the thesis statement. A.Depending on the type of messages,you may choose from a variety of communications technologies. B.As business tools,mobile technologies are useful for reporting news and connecting with customers. C.Technology is blurring many forms of communication-oral and written, face-to-face and online. 7.Choose the topic sentence for the paragraph A.Texting has been considered too informal for communicating at work. B.Instant messaging may be considered rude in front of other people. C.Instant messaging (IM)and texting are becoming increasingly popular at work. 8.Choose the bridge sentence. A.Social networking sites are for people who share common interests. B.Multi-communication is said to be an effective way. C.Social media is about the conversation. 1413
awareness"-you know someone is available to respond immediately. Although some people consider 1M an annoying interruption at work , people who use 1M are at the office report fewer disruptions and believe that 1M saves time and provides timely , relevant information. One analyst predicts that in the next few years, a vast majority of the employees will use 1M as their primary communications tool. Perhaps the more interesting technologies for communication are social media. Web 2. 0 , which encourages online interaction, has opened the door for people to participate on the web. This is quite different from the one-way communication of the early Internet, when companies would post brochure-like website for people to consume. The real value of social media for companies is the opportunity to connect with people online. (8) 一一一一一. To promote interaction , companies use Web 2. 0 technologies, for example , blogs, wikis, video , and social networking sites. These tools are used on the Internet , on a company's intranet and on extranets. The Fortune Global100 companies are using social media actively. Seventy-nine percent are using at least one of four main social platforms-Twitter, videos, Facebook and blogs to communicate with customers. Of these tools" Twitter is the most frequently used and has proved useful for companies. 6. Choose the thesis statement. A. Depending on the type of messages, you may choose from a variety of communications technologies. B. As business tools, mobile technologies are useful for reporting news and connecting with customers. C. Technology is blurring many forms of communication-oral and written , face-to-face and online. 7. Choose the topic sentence for the paragraph. A. Texting has been considered too informal for communicating at work. B. Instant messaging may be considered rude in front of other people. C. Instant messaging (1M) and texting are becoming increasingly popular at work. 8. Choose the bridge sentence. A. Social networking sites are for people who share common interests. B. Multi-communication is said to be an effective way. C. Social media is about the conversation. 1413
Question 9 Complete the following paragraph by adding details.(25 points) ● Make sure your tone and the vocabulary you use are in unity with the relevant paragraph. ●】 Write about 60-80 words.Write your answer on the Answer Sheet. Two Traits of a Successful College Student First-time college students don't realize the reality shock they will receive when they get to college.High school and college atmosphere are extremely different in many ways and college students face many new challenges.To get through college successfully,all first-time college students must be dedicated and independent. Dedication is a primary part of being successful in college.Students must work hard and take action to learn at a college level.Assignments can't be left until the last minute like they might have been in high school.College students must be willing to speak up in class and ask questions when they don't understand.Dedication means setting priorities for success;dedication means putting off going out with friends and caring about producing the best work possible.Dedicated students will do their work and do it well,spending hours reading textbooks,reviewing notes,and revising essays. However,having dedication is not the only trait college students need to survive. College students must also be independent.(Supply the missing details) College students need to know that being independent is a skill to acquire for college success, as well as life-long success. College is hard work.Most first-time college students will struggle with the new experience,yet by being dedicated and independent,they will thrive in the college world. Part 3 Writing an Essay [50 points] Question 10 Write an essay on the following topic. Write an essay about a person/great leader/sports star you admire. ● Do not try to give this person's complete life history. ● Concentrate on why this person is admirable. ● Write about 150-180 words. 1414
Question 9 Complete the following paragraph by adding details. (25 points) • Make sure your tone and the vocabulary you use are in unity with the relevant paragraph. • Write about 60-80 words. Write your answer on the Answer Sheet. Two Traits of a Successful College Student First-time college students don't realize the reality shock they will receive when they get to college. High school and college atmosphere are extremely different in many ways and college students face many new challenges. To get through college successfully , all first-time college students must be dedicated and independent. Dedication is a primary part of being successful in college. Students must work hard and take action to learn at a college level. Assignments can' t be left until the last minute like they might have been in high school. College students must be willing to speak up in class and ask questions when they don' t understand. Dedication means setting priorities for success; dedication means putting off going out with friends and caring about producing the best work possible. Dedicated students will do their work and do it well , spending hours reading textbooks, reviewing notes, and revising essays. However, having dedication is not the only trait college students need to survive. College students must also be independent. (Supply the missing details) College students need to know that being independent is a skill to acquire for college success, as well as life-Iong success. College is hard work. Most first-time college students will struggle with the new experience , yet by being dedicated and independent , they will thrive in the college world. Part 3 Writing an Essay [50 points] Question 10 Write an essay on the following topic. Write an essay about a person / great leader / sports star you admire. • Do not try to give this person' s complete life history. • Concentrate on why this person is admirable. • Write about 150-180 words. 1414
试卷代号：1359 座位号口 国家开放大学（中央广播电视大学）2016年春季学期“开放本科”期末考试 高级英语写作试题答题纸 2016年7月 题 号 Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 总 分 分 数 得分 评卷人 Part 1 Vocabulary and Structure [10 points,2 points each] Questions 1-5 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 得 分 评卷人 Part 2 Paragraph Organization and Development [40 points] Questions 6-8 (15 points,5 points each) 6. 7. 8. Question 9 (25 points) 1415
试卷代号 :1359 座位号rn 国家开放大学(中央广播电视大学)2016 年春季学期"开放本科"期末考试 高级英语写作 试题答题纸 2016 I~ *lnAI Part 1 Vocabulary and Structure [10 points, 2 points each] Questions 1-5 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. I~ *Iwul Part 2 Paragraph Organization and Development [40 points] Questions 6-8 (1 5 points, 5 points each) 6. 7. 8. Question 9 (25 points) 1415
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试卷代号：1359 国家开放大学（中央广播电视大学）2016年春季学期“开放本科”期末考试 高级英语写作试题答案及评分标准 (供参考) 2016年7月 Part 1 Vocabulary and Structure [10 points,2 points each] 1.F 2.H 3.E 4.B 5.G Part 2 Paragraph Organization and Development [40 points] Questions 6-8 (15 points,5 points each) 6.A 7.C 8.C Question 9 (25 points) Marking Guidelines(供参考) 21-25 内容切题；连贯性好：语法正确，语言通顺恰当；基本无语法错误；篇幅适当。 16-20 内容切题；连贯性较好；语言较为通顺恰当，有少量语法错误；篇幅适当。 11-15 内容较完整；语句基本连贯；语言基本通顺，有少量语法错误：篇幅适当。 6-10 内容不完整；语句欠连贯；语法错误较多。 0-5 内容不完整；语言支离破碎；无法阅读。 Here is a sample. (Given on the test paper:First-time college students don't realize the reality shock they will receive when they get to college.High school and college atmosphere are extremely different in many ways and college students face many new challenges.To get through college successfully,all first-time college students must be dedicated and independent. Dedication is a primary part of being successful in college.Students must work hard and take action to learn at a college level.Assignments can't be left until the last minute like they might have been in high school.College students must be willing to speak up in class and ask questions when they don't understand.Dedication means setting priorities for 1417
试卷代号 :1359 国家开放大学(中央广播电视大学 )2016 年春季学期"开放本科"期未考试 高级英语写作 试题答案及评分标准 (供参考) 2016 Part 1 Vocabulary and Structure [10 poin钮， 2 points each] 1. F 2. H 3. E 4. B 5.G Part 2 Paragraph Organization and Development [40 poin Questions (1 5 points, 5 points each) 6. A 7. C 8. C Question 9 (25 points) Marking Guidelines( 供参考〉 21-25 内容切题;连贯性好;语法正确，语言通顺恰当;基本元语法错误 篇幅适当。 16-20 内容切题;连贯性较好 语言较为通顺恰当，有少量语法错误;篇幅适当。 11-15 内容较完整;语句基本连贯;语言基本通Jli荫，有少量语法错误;篇幅适当。 6-10 内容不完整 语句欠连贯;语法错误较多。 。一 内容不完整 语言支离破碎 元法阅读。 Here is a sample. (Given on the test paper: First-time col1ege students don't realize the reality shock they will receive when they get to col1ege. High school and col1ege atmosphere are extremely different in many ways and col1ege students face many new challenges. To get through college successfully , all first-time col1ege students must be dedicated and independent. Dedication is a primary part of being successful in col1ege. Students must work hard and take action to learn at a col1ege level. Assignments can' t be left until the last minute like they might have been in high school. College students must be willing to speak up in class and ask questions when they don' t understand. Dedication means setting priorities for 1417
success;dedication means putting off going out with friends and caring about producing the best work possible.Dedicated students will do their work and do it well,spending hours reading textbooks,reviewing notes,and revising essays. However,having dedication is not the only trait college students need to survive. College students must also be independent.)There is a decision they need to make right at the beginning,which is,to devote enough of their energies to independent learning.They need to know that no one can do the learning for them.They need to make independent decisions about when to study,what to study and how to study.They need to do their work without being reminded every day.College teachers will expect students to take notes without assigning them to do so while in high schools,the teachers may give out notes to study from or tell students where and when to take them.College teachers will guide their students in their studies.They are there to help their students understand the class material. yet they will not help them complete their work and/or meet the deadline.(Given on the test paper:College students need to know that being independent is a skill to acquire for college success,as well as life-long success. College is hard work.Most first-time college students will struggle with the new experience,yet by being dedicated and independent,they will thrive in the college world. Part 3 Writing an Essay [50 points] Question 10 Marking Guidelines(供参考) 内容切题，完整；条理清楚，文章结构严谨；语法正确，语言通顺恰当，句式用 46-50分 词富有变化，有“闪光点”；基本无语言错误。 内容切题，完整；条理清楚，文章结构严谨；语法正确，语言通顺恰当：有少量 41-45分 语法错误。 内容基本切题，完整；条理基本清楚，文章结构基本严谨；语法基本正确，语 31-40分 言基本通顺恰当；有少量语言错误。 21-30分 内容基本切题，完整；条理不够清楚；较多语言错误，许多词使用不当。 内容偏题，不完整：思路混乱，语句不完整；只有少数句子可以理解，词汇拼 11-20分 写错误较多。 0-10分 内容偏题，不完整；思路混乱，语句不完整；句子无法理解。 1418
success; dedication means putting off going out with friends and caring about producing the best work possible. Dedicated students will do their work and do it well. spending hours reading textbooks. reviewing notes. and revising essays. However. having dedication is not the only trait college students need to survive. College students must also be independent. ) There is a decision they need to make right at the beginning. which is. to devote enough of their energies to independent learning. They need to know that no one can do the learning for them. They need to make independent decisions about when to study. what to study and how to study. They need to do their work without being reminded every day. College teachers wilI expect students to take notes without assigning them to do so while in high schools. the teachers may give out notes to study from or tell students where and when to take them. College teachers will guide their students in their studies. They are there to help their students understand the class material. yet they will not help them complete their work and /or meet the deadline. (Given on the test paper: College students need to know that being independent is a skiII to acquire for college success. as weIl as life-long success. CoIlege is hard work. Most first-time coIlege students will struggle with the new experience. yet by being dedicated and independent. they will thrive in the college world. ) Part 3 Writing an Essay [50 poin Question 10 Marking Guidelines( 供参考) 46 50 内容切题，完整;条理清楚，文章结构严谨;语法正确，语言通顺恰当，句式用 词富有变化，有"闪光点'气基本无语言错误。 41-45 内容切题，完整;条理清楚，文章结构严谨;语法正确，语言通顺恰当;有少量 语法错误。 31-40 内容基本切题，完整;条理基本清楚，文章结构基本严谨;语法基本正确，语 言基本通顺恰当;有少量语言错误。 21 30 内容基本切题，完整;条理不够清楚 较多语言错误，许多词使用不当。 11-20 内容偏题，不完整;思路混乱，语句不完整;只有少数句子可以理解，词汇拼 写错误较多。 。一10 内容偏题，不完整 思路混乱，语句不完整;句子无法理解。 1418
