全程设计 UNIT 5 LAUNCHING YOUR CAREER Section IV Writing
UNIT 5 LAUNCHING YOUR CAREER Section Ⅳ Writing
导期 写作•触类旁通 典题示例 读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。 David is a 22-year-old man.Not having received a college education,he found it difficult to find a job.He worked at a small company and wasn't paid well.He thought life was unfair and often complained
导航 写作•触类旁通 典题示例 读后续写 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。 David is a 22-year-old man.Not having received a college education,he found it difficult to find a job.He worked at a small company and wasn't paid well.He thought life was unfair and often complained
One day,his boss asked him to go to his office.To his sadness,he was told he didn't need to come to work again. That day,David didn't go straight back to the small apartment he shared with another man.He wanted to find a quiet place and sit there quietly for some time.Having lost his job,he had no idea what to do. He walked and walked.Finally he stopped in front of a beautiful house.The house had a very big garden behind it. He saw an old man sitting in the garden
导航 One day,his boss asked him to go to his office.To his sadness,he was told he didn't need to come to work again. That day,David didn't go straight back to the small apartment he shared with another man.He wanted to find a quiet place and sit there quietly for some time.Having lost his job,he had no idea what to do. He walked and walked.Finally he stopped in front of a beautiful house.The house had a very big garden behind it. He saw an old man sitting in the garden
"The old man must be a millionaire."thought David, "How I wish I were him!If I were him,I wouldn't have to work and I'd have a large amount of money.I would be the happiest man in the whole world." Thinking how poor he was,David was even sadder.He hurriedly walked forward and found a place and sat there quietly
导航 “The old man must be a millionaire.” thought David, “How I wish I were him! If I were him,I wouldn't have to work and I'd have a large amount of money.I would be the happiest man in the whole world.” Thinking how poor he was,David was even sadder.He hurriedly walked forward and found a place and sat there quietly
Finally,he became hungry and decided to go back home. On his way back home,he passed the old man's house again. This time the man was sitting in his front yard.When David passed by him,he noticed that the old man was looking at him.The old man looked as if he admired him very much. David was confused.Why would such a rich man admire him? He was so poor while he was so rich. Finally,David decided to have a talk with the old man.So he stopped and walked to the old man
导航 Finally,he became hungry and decided to go back home. On his way back home,he passed the old man's house again. This time the man was sitting in his front yard.When David passed by him,he noticed that the old man was looking at him.The old man looked as if he admired him very much. David was confused.Why would such a rich man admire him? He was so poor while he was so rich. Finally,David decided to have a talk with the old man.So he stopped and walked to the old man
导 Hello,.”he said. “Hello,”said the old man. Then they started talking.David told the old man he really admired him. "You have such a beautiful house.You're so rich!How I wish I were you!"said David. Hearing that,the old man smiled and said,"And I admire you,too!I wish I were you!If I were you,I'd still enjoy my youth.Now I'm so old.Wealth doesn't mean much to me!
导航 “Hello,” he said. “Hello,” said the old man. Then they started talking.David told the old man he really admired him. “You have such a beautiful house.You're so rich! How I wish I were you!” said David. Hearing that,the old man smiled and said,“And I admire you,too! I wish I were you! If I were you,I'd still enjoy my youth.Now I'm so old.Wealth doesn't mean much to me!
导航、 What the old man said struck David. David stopped complaining about his life
导航 What the old man said struck David. David stopped complaining about his life
导航 写作指导 1.通读全文，理解大体故事情节，把握主线。 通过阅读所给文章可知，文章主要讲述了戴维工作不好，收入 不高，总是抱怨，后来还被老板辞掉了。失业后他偶然遇见了 一位富人，戴维很羡慕这位拥有大房子的富裕老人，而通过交 谈得知，这位富人也很羡慕年轻的戴维.…
导航 写作指导 1.通读全文,理解大体故事情节,把握主线。 通过阅读所给文章可知,文章主要讲述了戴维工作不好,收入 不高,总是抱怨,后来还被老板辞掉了。失业后他偶然遇见了 一位富人,戴维很羡慕这位拥有大房子的富裕老人,而通过交 谈得知,这位富人也很羡慕年轻的戴维……
导航 2结合原文分析段首提示，展开想象进行合理推测。 仔细研读所给出的第一段首句，这有助于我们编写后续故事 时与前文叙述的内容高度融合，第二段首句决定着我们续写 的第一段的情节发展
导航 2.结合原文分析段首提示,展开想象进行合理推测。 仔细研读所给出的第一段首句,这有助于我们编写后续故事 时与前文叙述的内容高度融合,第二段首句决定着我们续写 的第一段的情节发展
导 原文最后写道：听到戴维说的话，老人笑着回复说，我也羡慕你， 我希望自己是你。如果我是你的话，我还能享受自己的年轻。 现在我这么老了，财富对我来说不能意味着很多。续写第 段首句说老年人的话打动了戴维，因此接下来应该是戴维内 心的思索。通过这位老人的话戴维明白了：即使财富再多，有 什么用呢？老人羡慕的是自己正拥有的。自己拥有的年轻才 是最有价值的东西，这是不可再生的。他知道，年轻就意味着 可能，自己没必要羡慕有钱的老人了，自己只要年轻就会拥有 获得财富的机会，所以要充分利用年轻的优势去奋斗
导航 原文最后写道:听到戴维说的话,老人笑着回复说,我也羡慕你, 我希望自己是你。如果我是你的话,我还能享受自己的年轻。 现在我这么老了,财富对我来说不能意味着很多。续写第一 段首句说老年人的话打动了戴维,因此接下来应该是戴维内 心的思索。通过这位老人的话戴维明白了:即使财富再多,有 什么用呢?老人羡慕的是自己正拥有的。自己拥有的年轻才 是最有价值的东西,这是不可再生的。他知道,年轻就意味着 可能,自己没必要羡慕有钱的老人了,自己只要年轻就会拥有 获得财富的机会,所以要充分利用年轻的优势去奋斗