专业英文写作(on Professional Writings Using English) 邓治东(Jyh- tong teng) 中原大学机械系教授兼 国际事务中心资深顾问
专业英文写作(On Professional Writings Using English) 1 邓治东 (Jyh-tong Teng) 中原大学机械系教授兼 国际事务中心资深顾问
大纲( Outline) 1引言( Introduction) n2英文的标点符号( Punctuations 3专业的传统表迹( Mechanica Conventions) 4文章的赶转合( Transitions) 5专业论文的写作( Technical article Writing 6文章的常见错误( Common errors) 7结论( Conclusions)
2 大纲 (Outline) ◼ 1.引 言 (Introduction) ◼ 2.英文的标点符号 (Punctuations) ◼ 3.专业的传统表述 (Mechanical Conventions) ◼ 4.文章的起承转合 (Transitions) ◼ 5.专业论文的写作 (Technical Article Writing) ◼ 6.文章的常见错误 (Common Errors) ◼ 7.结 论 (Conclusions)
1引言( Lntroduction ■世界约85%之专业出版物系以英语撰写 ■专业英文系以特定方式撰写 非英语体系作者常因格式与方式不符或 英语欠通顺而被退件 ■若能突破英语撰写上的障碍要在专业出 版物上发表文章并非难事
1.引 言 (Introduction) ◼ 世界约85%之专业出版物系以英语撰写 ◼ 专业英文系以特定方式撰写 ◼ 非英语体系作者常因格式与方式不符或 英语欠通顺而被退件 ◼ 若能突破英语撰写上的障碍要在专业出 版物上发表文章并非难事 3
2英文的标点符号( Punctuations Summarized from Judith S. vanalstyne Professional and Technical Writing Communication in Technology and Science, sixth Edition prentice-Hall international inc. 2004 2-1 Apostrophe(所有格符号) for the plural of letters, numbers symbols and cited words Your rs look like your ns You use too many ands athe2000s(20005
2.英文的标点符号 (Punctuations) ◼ Summarized from Judith S. Vanalstyne, Professional and Technical Writing: Communication in Technology and Science, Sixth Edition, Prentice-Hall International, Inc., 2004 2-1 Apostrophe (所有格符号) ◼ for the plural of letters, numbers, symbols, and cited words ◼ Your r’s look like your n’s. You use too many and’s. ◼ the 2000’s (2000s) 4
2-2 Colon(冒号) for a formal salutation Dear Mr Wang Gentlemen for introducing a phrase or clause which explains or reinforces a proceeding sentence or clause The position sounds attractive: high salary, moderate amount of work, and close to home 5
2-2 Colon (冒号) ◼ for a formal salutation Dear Mr. Wang: Gentlemen: ◼ for introducing a phrase or clause which explains or reinforces a proceeding sentence or clause The position sounds attractive: high salary, moderate amount of work, and close to home. 5
for a clause which contains an anticipatory expression( the following, as follows, thus, these) and directs attention to a series of explanatory words, phrases, or clauses The requirements for the master degree are as follows 1. twenty-four units of class work 2. a master thesis and 3. no more than four years of study
◼ for a clause which contains an anticipatory expression (the following, as follows, thus, these) and directs attention to a series of explanatory words, phrases, or clauses. The requirements for the master degree are as follows: 1.twenty-four units of class work, 2.a master thesis, and 3.no more than four years of study. 6
for expression ratios for separating hours and minutes and for indicating other relationships 5: 1 signal noise A:B10:20P.M 12:50-55(Vo0.12,pp.50-55)
◼ for expression ratios, for separating hours and minutes, and for indicating other relationships 5:1 signal : noise A:B 10:20 P.M. 12:50-55 (Vol. 12, pp. 50-55) 7
23 Comma(逗点) for compound and compound-complex sentence a for separating independent clauses Joined by a coordinating conjunction Nearly everyone has heard of love at first sight but i fell in love at first dance b. after an introductory dependent clause When peter was ready to write his pen ran out of the ink
2-3 Comma (逗点) ◼ for compound and compound-complex sentence ◼ a. for separating independent clauses joined by a coordinating conjunction Nearly everyone has heard of love at first sight, but I fell in love at first dance. ◼ b. after an introductory dependent clause When Peter was ready to write, his pen ran out of the ink. 8
C. after a conjunctive adverb introducing a coordinate clause The system is easy to use however, we suggest that you read the directions carefull
◼ c. after a conjunctive adverb introducing a coordinate clause The system is easy to use; however, we suggest that you read the directions carefully. 9
On coordinate(对等)and Subordinate(从属) Clauses Coordinate clauses 1 a Independent(独立) clause and independent clause a but ■,for nor ■,Or 0 , yet 10
On Coordinate (对等) and Subordinate (从属) Clauses ◼ 1. Coordinate Clauses ◼ 1.a Independent (独立) clause , and independent clause. ◼ , but ◼ , for ◼ , nor ◼ , or ◼ , so ◼ , yet 10