国家开放大学：2015年秋季学期“开放本科”英语专业高级英语写作期末试题（1月）

试卷代号：1359 同撑开放大学（中央广插电视大学）2015年秋不学期“开放本科”期末考试 高级菱语写作试题 2016年1月 注意事项 一，撩你的学芳、牲名及分核〔工作站》名称填写在警题纸的规定栏 内。考斌结来后，把试卷和叁通纸放在桌上。武卷和答题纸均不得带 出考场。监考人收完考卷和答题纸后才可离开考场。 二、仔细阅读题目的说明，并按题目要求答题。答案一定要写在答 题纸的指定位置上，写在试卷上的答案无效。 三、用蓝、黑圆珠笔或钢笔答题，使用铅笔答题无效。 Information for the examinees: O This examination consists of 3 parts.They are: Part 1:Vocabulary and Structure [10 points] Part 2:Paragraph Organization and Development [40 points] Part 3:Writing an Essay [50 points] The total marks for this examination are 100 points.Time allowed for completing this examination is 90 minutes. ● There will be no extra time to transfer answers to the Answer Sheet;therefore,you should write ALL your answers on the Answer Sheet as you do each task. 1431

试卷代号 :1359 国家齐放太学(中共广播电视大学 )2015 年就季学期"开放卒科厅期本考试 高纽蔓$吾葛何进题 20H 注意事嘎 -=s 1 号千平均字于 撂在具分桂(;L-作站}且称基亘在思题策的规吏拦 考试挂末后，北试卷和这题纸放在桌上 试卷和菩 嘎然均不得带 出考场口监考人』氏兄考卷和答题纸后才叮离开考场。 二、仔细阅读题目的说明，并按题目要求答题。答案一定要写在答 题纸的指定位置上，写在试卷上的答案无效。 三、用蓝、黑圆珠笔或钢笔答题，使用铅笔答题无效。 Information for the examinees: • This examination consists of 3 parts. They are: Part 1: Vocabulary and Structure [10 points] Part 2: Paragraph Organization and Development [40 points] Part 3: Writi an Essay [50 points] • The total marks for this examination are 100 points. Time allowed for completing this examination is 90 minutes. • There will be no extra time to transfer answers to the Answer Sheet; therefore , you should write ALL your answers on the Answer Sheet as you do each task. l431

Part 1 Vocabulary and Structure [10 points] Questions 1-5 are based on the following task. Choose the appropriate words or expressions from the box to complete the following paragraphs. There are THREE extra choices that you don't need.Write your answer on the Answer Sheet. A.produces B.However C.just as D.care E.consequences F.Although G.convenient H.responsible Technology surrounds us and is a part of our daily lives.We can find technological innovations at home,our workplace,our schools,and our playgrounds.1. technology has improved our lives in some ways,it has also brought many negative 2. Modern technology has made life very 3. We have everything we need and our inventions take care of so many unpleasant details in our day-to-day lives.Foods from all over the world are available at local supermarkets.International travel is now fast and easy. We can talk to friends on cell phones any time,anywhere,and we can catch a TV show from many countries far away. 4. these conveniences have a price.We consume too much energy and too many resources,and we create too much waste.The world is overflowing with pollution and waste.We cannot continue like this forever.We should be morc 5. about Rrgtesting gur werld while atill snjeying genvenienege.If our notural world ia doatroyed,the conveniences will be useless. Part 2 Paragraph Organization and Derelopment 10 points Qusstions -g are based on the Following task.(15 points) P以rauraph A Read the following paragraph.Chovas the best aner to sach qusatioa.Write your answer A: B or C on the Anewer Shaot. My parents played an imporiant role in my educational devclopment by helping me in both material and spiritual ways to become the person that I am today.They raised my older brothers and sisters in such a way that they would set a good example for me and the other younger children.They bought various books that helped me become a hardworking student 1432

Part 1 V ocabulary and Structure [10 pointsJ Questions 1-5 are based on the following task. Choose the appropriate words or expressions from the box to complete the following paragraphs. There are THREE extra choices that you don' t need. Write your answer on the Answer Sheet. A. produces B. However c. just as D. care E. consequences F. Although G. convenient H. responsible Technology surrounds us and is a part of our daily lives. We can find technological innovations at home , our workplace , our schools, and our playgrounds. 1. 一一一一一­ technology has improved our lives in some ways, it has also brought many negative 2. Modern technology has made life very 3. 一一一一一一. We have everything we need and our inventions take care of so many unpleasant details in our day-to-day lives. Foods from all over the world are available at local supermarkets. International travel is now fast and easy. We can talk to friends on cell phones any time , anywhere , and we can catch a TV show from many countries far away. 4. 一一一一， these conveniences have a price. We con ume too much energy and too m.any rêsourCêS ，且 nd Wê crê tê too m.uch WllStê. Thê world i!l oVêl'flowing with pollution llnd wa!o:Tfi'. Wfi' cal1n01 continul" lik", this forever. We hould be morc 5. nboUl !n'í?1<民主自~ 'í?'d~ "γ lJ yvh!1莹莹兰11 主旦J'?J!!'~ "，"亏哩哇哇雪 Jf ç"'''' 斗口出 vvorld d"" l-r :r ed 可沁 [l0l1UI'111 1'Jl[11'!< wlll bl' 11 豆1' 11) 豆豆 Part 2 Paral:raph Orl:anÎliatÎon ilnd DeYi~löpmGñt [1 Q )l告ìfit昌] 亘古!!!tì-.?!! 号缸专民苦苦~ <m lh PoUo....i.. l.... k. < 1 [; pòinh'Ì F'组 盟在 !l ph A R\löd Lh\l follolY in革Ili& 1.i& llh. Ch""面~ tb~ h~lI 蛐面 宦r \v 姐也写自雷 <l画， Wl"ìh, J?~r ~!!事 wcr Å 1 IJ 3 1' C 3ft ttU.l A.ft!lWI.lI' ~hl.ll.l t. My IJllrent:ol lllllyt'd 1111 irnporläIlt rolt ln rny educnt10nul dl啊:lollrnc llT hy hdnìnζIIIE in both maha.ial í;md õpi.itl.l<ll y~ tQ bCCQInç thç pcr:;;Qn thai 1 am today. Thcy ra;scd =y older brothêr!l 11nd gjgtêrg in gUl"h 11 thllt th~y would spt 1l gòod ~X mpl~ for me :md the oTher younger children. They bought various books that helped rne hecome a hardworking :5tudent 1432

and a good reader.They also exposed me to cxperiences such as vacations and muscum trips that enlarged my perspective on life.In addition,they looked carefully at my cxamination resuits in school in order to motivate me always to do my bcst.In short.I owc all of my positive qualities to the efforts of my parents. 6.Which senrence is the topic scntcncc of the paragraph? A.The first xcntencc of the paragraph B.Thc accond acntence of the paragragh C The lant aentenee ef the paragraghe Paragragh A Roud the iniruduciory garagraph of an Far.Choose the best answer to each quastian.Write your answer A,B or C on the Answer Sheet. Eight Hours a Night (1)In my classes,sleep-deprived students tend to disturb other students,and this can make it hard to learn.(2)No matter what classes they are in,sleep-deprived students are likely to cause problems.(3)For example,they rarely contribute to the classroom topic. (4)If they do something in class,it's usually just to answer a question that was already answered.(5)Such sleepy students can even kill motivation for students who are awake. (6)When I see five people sleeping with their heads on top of their desks,it is possible that I will feel sleepy,too,especially if it is a boring or an early morning class.(7)Another problem with many students who don't get enough sleep is that it is not unusual for them to arrive late to class,interrupting whatever is happening.(8)To solve these problems,I think that teachers should make sleep-8 hour sleep per night-a part of the class requirement. 7.Choose the type of introduction. A.Problem-Solution. B.Definition/Explanation. C.General-to-specific. 8.Choose the thesis statement. A.Sentence 1. B.Sentence 7. C.Sentence 8. 1433

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Question 9 Complete the following paragraph by adding details.(25 points) Make sure your tone and the vocabulary you use are in unity with the relevant paragraph. Write about 60-80 words.Write your answers on the Answer Sheet. Xiao ()-Love for Parents Expressed by Action Xiao is a fundamental concept in Chinese culture.What is Xiao?I think Xiao is love for parents and being good to parents.There are many examples of being Xiao towards parents by a son or a daughter.Xiao is respecting your parents.Xiao is not only supporting your parents materially when they need it;it is also frequently updating parents on our situation,so that they wouldn't worry about us and so that they can help and advise us if they see that we need it.Xiao is not forgetting about your parents'health.Xiao is...(Add supporting details here Part 3 Writing an Essay [50 points] Quection 10.write an exxay on ine following topic. The Internet is hecoming morc ccniral to our livcs as it io uryviding mvrs inlsatstige more conveniencex a3 well ns acting as an interaotive sntertainss hes wasens obviou3 bcncfita but there arc dangers inyvlred in ths sentrel ef he nterneverive. To what entent do you axiss v deegrss? Yuu alipuld atats your opinions. You ahguld eaplain/support your opiniona. Write about 150-180 words. 1434

Question 9 Complete the following paragraph by adding details. (25 points) • Make sure your tone and the vocabulary you use are in unity with the relevant paragraph. • Write about 60-80 words. Write your answers on the Answer Sheet. Xiao )-Love for Parents Expressed by Action Xiao is a fundamental concept in Chinese culture. What is Xiao? 1 think Xiao is love for parents and being good to parents. There are many examples of being Xiao towards parents by a son or a daughter. Xiao is respecting yo parents. Xiao is not only supporting yo parents materially when they need it; it is a150 frequently updating parents on our 5ituation, 50 that they wouldn't worry about us and so that they can help and advise us if they see that we need it. Xiao is not forgetting about yo parents' health. Xiao i5 . . . (Add SUpporting details here ) P:ut 3 Wdtin~ nn E:JëJilY [50 pointBJ QUPlitíon 1 n. wntl' an nay on lh~ followin! lnDic Th!' lnr!"rn!'T í~ hECOmínl! morc CCInrnLm our lin:tì tlù h ìù UfuyìJìn mm~ ìnI\l 刷斜以H1 mor convτníτncr EI~ wdl [l:J [lcdnl:: nti ilIl ìmnü\.itÌn; úntH~íôi i!l Th".. 宝[旦旦芝 t; ，?"" }，芒 ~e I1Íwiom bcndlt:ì, 1mt thcn: üfl,; dÜ [l豆 H) ìnwh....J !丛生 "i ~'i'!!t:~?仨 占J."， lntcrnct 口 V凹凸口 };V C' ι To what clHtpla;n/ support your op; nìδn虫， • W.itç "J;,Qut 1(;0-180 vvords. 1434

试卷代号：1359 座位■■ 国家开放大学（中央）广播电视大学)2Q15年秋季学期“开效本科”期末考试 高级葵语写作 武题答题纸 2016年1月 题 Bart l Bart 3 PArt 3 g 分 敕 得 分 评卷人 Part 1 Vocabulary and Strueture [10 points.2 points each] Questions 1-5 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 得分 评卷人 Part 2 Paragraph Organization and Development [40 points] Questions 6-8(15 points,5 points each) 6. 7. 8. Question 9(25 points) 1435

试卷代号 :1359 座位号 国家开放大学〔中央 播电现末学)ZQH 年砍季学期"开放丰科"期末考试 高级英语写伍 进题警题组 !1号外 坪苦人| i Questions 1-5 |得分|评卷人| | 2. 201ι Pnpl 1 Voenbulnpy !lßd Stl' uelu~ [10 pOinU:. Z point~ (!!leh] 3. 4. 5. Part 2 Paragraph Organization and Development [40 points] Questiòns 6-8 (15 points, 5 points each) 6. 7. 8. Question 9 (25 points) 1435

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试卷代号：1359 国家开放大学（中央广播电视大学）2015年秋季学期“开放本科"期束考试 高级英语写作试题答亲及评分标准 (供参考) 2016年1月 Part I Vocabulary and structure [10 point.2 points each] 1,P 8,E 3,G 4,B 5.H Part 2 Paragraph Organization and Development [40 points] Questions 6-8 (15points,5 points each) 6.A 7.A 8.C Question 9 25 points. Marking Guidelines(供参考) 21-25 内容切题；连贯性好；语法正确，语言通顺恰当；基本无语法错误；篇幅适当。 16-20 内容切题；连贯性较好；语言较为通顺恰当，有少量语法错误：篇幅适当。 11-15 内容较完整；语句基本连贯；语言基本通顺，有少量语法错误；篇幅适当 6-10 内容不完整；语句欠连贯；语法错误较多。 0-5 内容不完整；语言支离破碎；无法阅读。 Here is a sample. (Given on the test paper:Xiao is a fundamental concept in Chinese culture.What is Xiao?I think Xiao is love for parents and being good to parents.There are many examples of being Xiao towards parents by a son or a daughter.Xiao is respecting your parents.Xiao is not only supporting your parents materially when they need it;it is also frequently updating parents on our situation,so that they wouldn't worry about us and so that they can help and advise us if they see that we need it.Xiao is not forgetting about your parents'health. 1439

试卷代号 :1359 圄牵开放太学(中《广播电视太学 )2015 年秋季学期"开放本科"期末考试 高级英语写作 试题答案及抨分标准 {接参考} Ol FilrL 1 VOCiltmlilry ilml ~lnmlU n~ [lO polnn:. Z polnU: @ilflh] L r 2‘t: ã. n 4. n 5. Parl 2 Parag.叩J. Organizalion and DevelopJnenl [40 poinlsJ Questions 6-8 Cl 5points, 5 points e9ch) 6. A 7. A 8.C Question 9 25 points. Marking Guidelines (供参考) 21-25 内容切题;连贯性好;语法正确，语言通顺恰当;基本无语法错误;篇幅适当。| 16-20 内容切题;连贯性较好;语言较为通顺恰当，有少量语法错误;篇幅适当。 11-15 内容较完整;语句基本连贯;语言基本通 帜，有少量语法错误;篇幅适当。 6-10 内容不完整;语句欠连贯;语法错误较多。 0-5 内容不完整;语言支离破碎;无法阅读。 Here is a sample. (Given on the test paper: X iao is a fundamental concept in Chinese culture. What is X iao? 1 think X iao is love for parents and being good to parents. There are many examples of being Xiao towards parents by a son or a daughter. Xiao is respecting your parents. Xiao is not only supporting your parents materially when they need it; it is also frequently updating parents on our situation , 50 that they wouldn' t worry about us and so that they can help and advise us if they see that we need it. Xiao is not forgetting about your parents' health. ) 1439

Xiao is waking up at two o'clock in the morning to remind your mother to take her medicine.Xiao is not visiting parents only on weekends when you don't have better things to do.Xiao is taking time off work to spend time with your parents.Xiao is not sending your parents away to an old people's apartment,so that they won't ask you to run errands. Xiao is letting your parents live in your house,so that you can be at their service when they need you. Part 3 Writing an Essay [50 points] Question10 Marking Guidelines(供参考) 46-50分 内容切题，完整；条理清楚，文章结构严谨；语法正确，语言通顺恰当，句式用 词富有变化，有“闪光点”，基本无语言错误。 内容切题，完整；条理清楚，文章结构严谨；语法正确，语言通顺恰当；有少量 41-45分 语法错误。 内容基本切题，完整；条理基本清楚，文章结构基本严谨；语法基本正确，语 31一40分 言基本通顺恰当；有少量语言错误。 21-30分 内容基本切题，完整；条理不够清梵：较多语言错误，许多词使用不当。 11-20分 内容偏题，不完整：思路混乱，语句不完整：只有少数句子可以迎解，问汇拼 写错误拉名。 0=10分 内容偏题，不完整思落准乱，语间承完整：间手无独理獬。 1440

Xiao is waking up at two 0' c10ck in the morning to remind your mother to take her medicine. X iao is not visiting parents only on weekends when you don' t have better things to do. Xiao is taking time off work to spend time with your parents. Xiao is not sending your parents away to an old people's apartment , so that they won't ask you to run errands. Xiao is letting your parents live in your house , so that you can be at their service when they need you. Part 3 Writing an Essay [50 points] Question 10 Marking Guidelines (供参考) 46-50 内容切题，完整 条理清楚，文章结构严谨;语法正确，语言通}I阪恰当，句式用 词富有变化，有"闪光点"基本无语言错误。 一- 41-45 内容切题，完整;条理清楚，文章结构严谨;语法正确，语言通顺恰当 有少量 语法错误。 31-40 内容基本切题，完整 条理基本清楚，文章结构基本严谨;语法基本正确，语 言基本通顺恰当;有少量语言错误。 21-30 内容基本切蝠，完整?条理不够清楚?较多语言错误，许多词使用不当@ 11--20 内睿偏踵，示完整:思路混乱，语句京完整;只有少数旬宁可以理解，国扩捞 写错民主主聋。 "一一 oz=10 乡# 肉容铺题，本主翠 思路混乱，语句本主塾， CJ号手无狂，理解 1440