4.3 Proper amplification 4.3.1 Semantically and rhetorically:
4.3 Proper amplification 4.3.1 Semantically and rhetorically:
Adding verbs: In the evening,after the banquets, the concerts and the table tennis exhibitions,he would work on the drafting of the final communique
Adding verbs: In the evening, after the banquets, the concerts and the table tennis exhibitions, he would work on the drafting of the final communiqué
In the evening,after the banquets,the concerts and the table tennis exhibitions,he would work on the drafting of the final communique
In the evening, after the banquets, the concerts and the table tennis exhibitions, he would work on the drafting of the final communiqué
There were no speeches,no foreign diplomats,no "Ordinary Chinese"with paper flags and bouquets of flowers
There were no speeches, no foreign diplomats, no “Ordinary Chinese” with paper flags and bouquets of flowers
There were no speeches,no foreign diplomats,no "Ordinary Chinese"with paper flags and bouquets of flowers
There were no speeches, no foreign diplomats, no “Ordinary Chinese” with paper flags and bouquets of flowers
Adding adverbs o The crowd melts away. o As he sat down and began talking, words poured out
Adding adverbs: The crowd melts away. As he sat down and began talking, words poured out
o The crowd melts away. o As he sat down and began talking, words poured out
The crowd melts away. As he sat down and began talking, words poured out
Adding nouns: He allowed the father to be overruled by the judge,and declared his own son guilty
Adding nouns: ◼ He allowed the father to be overruled by the judge, and declared his own son guilty
He allowed the father to be overruled by the judge,and declared his own son guilty
◼ He allowed the father to be overruled by the judge, and declared his own son guilty
This typewriter is indeed cheap and fine. The candidate delivers countless speeches and shakes countless hands
◼ This typewriter is indeed cheap and fine. ◼ The candidate delivers countless speeches and shakes countless hands