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清晰、简洁地写作 （续） 改写下列句子使之更清楚和简洁。 1. The main point of our research was to try and find out who the light beer customer was and why they drank the beer that they drank. 我们研究的 主要目的就是要努力发现淡爽型啤酒的消费者，为什么他们这种啤酒。 1. The main point of our research was to try and find out who the light beer 问题： 你的改写： 2. Students must suffer through the exposure to the cold and the weather. 暴露在寒冷和恶劣天气之下，学生们一定很难受。 2. Students must suffer through the exposure to the cold and the weather. 问题： 你的改写： 3. With the program, “I Can Learn,” classroom teachers are enabled more than ever to help their students on an individual basis. 通过“我能学”节目，课堂教师比以往更能对学生进行个性化辅导。 3. With the program, “I Can Learn,” classroom teachers are enabled more than ever 问题： 你的改写： 4. High turn-over of skilled employees continued to be major problems for employers last year. Moreover, it has become very expensive to use monetary-related methods to retain employees. 熟练工人的高流动性去年仍是雇主面临的主要问题。而且，使用金钱方法留住雇 变得非常昂贵。 4. High turn-over of skilled employees continued to be major problems for employers last year. Moreover, it has become very expensive to use monetary-related methods to retain employees. 熟练工人的高流动性去年仍是雇主面临的主要问题。而且，使用金钱方法留住雇 变得非常昂贵。 问题： 你的改写：
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5. A volunteer basis is most effective, for only those fit to be mentors will volunteer. 志愿者基础是最为有效的，因为只有那些适合作导师的人才会主动去做。 问题： 你的改写： 6. At our company, we pride ourselves on the friendly nature between client and consultant. 在公司，我们以客户和咨询者之间的友好性质而自豪。 问题： 你的改写： 7. We believe that an employee is better equipped to do the job if he does not have to worry about the basics of taking care of himself and his family. 我们认为如果一个雇员不必为照顾他自己和他的家庭这些基本问题而担忧，他就能更 好的准备去完成工作。 问题： 你的改写： 8. We will analyze the retention rate of workers, comparing to previous years and trends, as well as look over the effectiveness of workers. 我们将分析工人的工作 稳定程度，与前几年和当前的趋势进行对比，还要察看工人的工作效率。 问题： 你的改写： 9. Many people have extreme difficulty with the transition between college and corporate life. 很多人在从大学到工作生活的转换中碰到极大的困难。 问题： 你的改写：
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10. Each investment strategy involves time and knowledge in the field of investing. 每一项投资策略都包括时机和投资领域的知识。 10. Each investment strategy involves time and knowledge in the field of investing. 问题： 你的改写： 11. XYZ Consulting also believes that insurance companies would be another strong source of distribution of this information. XYZ咨询公司同样认为保险公司会是这一信息发布的另一强大源头。 11. XYZ Consulting also believes that insurance companies would be another strong 问题： 你的改写： 12. Targeted activities were selected to aim at changing nutritional health behaviors. 选择有针对性地活动改变营养健康行为。 12. Targeted activities were selected to aim at changing nutritional health behaviors. 问题： 你的改写： 评分标准 问题设置将按0、1、2评分，分数主要反映投入精力的多少。 评分，分数主要反映投入精力的多少