清晰、简洁地写作 咸写下列句子使之更清楚和简洁， Atlempls were made on the part of the engineering slafT in regiard lo the assessment of the project/有关项目计估方面工程人员作了努力， 得愿：露主酒和动问。将“the engineering地(L界人厅》作为车语。 你的政 They will be given the same trealment as local firms in terms of regulation. 在法理方面，他将得到地公司的待调。 问愿：雪动问。使用动词表示行动。 你的改品： 3. Our report begins with a brief assessment of Norway's key characteristics and macroeconomic climate.The current structure of the Norwegian bottled wate industry is then reviewed,and a profit potential analysis is perfurmed. 我们的拟告以挥城的主共特杠和烈经济趋势开斯。然厉川歧了据减折表水工业的 前结构。对益利潜力选行了分析。 问必：装动语态 你的意予 4. A Pro/Con analysis has found that adding the new machine to our assembly line would mean intcrrupting our opcrations to sct up our testing cquipment to work with that machincry. 正反的况分析表明。在勇有生产线上增如新的机器意味者要中断层转，安装与郑合机器其的利 试装备。 同愿：仙离车语（什名是正反精况升析？》：短话太多（安装设涤。与罩合 祝祥配套)， 你的意 5. XYZ Corporation provides for the running of the plants with its own employees. XY7公可使用他门目己的：工保证工的运打
清晰、简洁地写作 改写下列句子使之更清楚和简洁。 1. Attempts were made on the part of the engineering staff in regard to the assessment of the project/有关项目评估方面工程人员作了努力。 1. Attempts were made on the part of the engineering staff in regard to the assessment of the project/有关项目评估方面工程人员作了努力。 问题：弱主语和动词。将“the engineering staff”（工程人员）作为主语。 你的改写： 2. They will be given the same treatment as local firms in terms of regulation. 在法规方面，他们将得到当地公司的待遇。 2. They will be given the same treatment as local firms in terms of regulation. 问题：弱动词。使用强动词表示行动。 你的改写： 3. Our report begins with a brief assessment of Norway's key characteristics and macroeconomic climate. The current structure of the Norwegian bottled wate industry is then reviewed, and a profit potential analysis is performed. 我们的报告以挪威的主要特征和宏观经济趋势开始。然后回顾了挪威瓶装水工业的 前结构，对盈利潜力进行了分析。 3. Our report begins with a brief assessment of Norway's key characteristics and macroeconomic climate. The current structure of the Norwegian bottled wate industry is then reviewed, and a profit potential analysis is performed. 问题：被动语态。 你的改写： 4. A Pro/Con analysis has found that adding the new machine to our assembly line would mean interrupting our operations to set up our testing equipment to work with that machinery. 正反情况分析表明，在现有生产线上增加新的机器意味着要中断运转，安装与那台机器配套的测 试装备。 4. A Pro/Con analysis has found that adding the new machine to our assembly line would mean 问题：(a)弱主语（什么是正反情况分析？）； (b)短语太多（安装…设备，与那台 机器配套）。 问题：(a)弱主语（什么是正反情况分析？）； (b)短语太多（安装…设备，与那台 机器配套）。 你的改写： 5. XYZ Corporation provides for the running of the plants with its own employees. XYZ公司使用他们自己的员工保证工厂的运行
你细事动原做用露动阿杰示市动。 6. ren me the bnk 7致费的终智被天项不终vD可内部绞致的形 保纸参形布阿人州氨不普网D内家微附度) 7. 纸 nieationinabusinese eaiaor 从纸的以 9. In serving the 在眼务这些消费者时，乐部调解人需要斜足这些旅行者的服务和便利需求 尔产的名河（服务和度利需球
问题：弱动词。使用强动词表示行动。 你的改写： 6. Our engineering group recently encountered a video display terminal (VDT) internal procurement situation which will significantly impact the cost of our bank teller machines.我们的工程部门最近碰到视频显示终端(VDT) 内部获取的情形， internal procurement situation which will significantly impact the cost of our bank teller machines.我们的工程部门最近碰到视频显示终端(VDT) 内部获取的情形， 这对我们银行取款机的成本会有极大的影响。 6. Our engineering group recently encountered a video display terminal (VDT) 问题：堆叠的名词（ 问题：堆叠的名词（…视频显示终端(VDT) 内部获取的情形 内部获取的情形…） 你的改写： 7. This section presents an overview of the construction industry in Spain. The construction industry in Spain, while somewhat different than the U.S. construction industry, offers several favorable conditions for entry. somewhat different than the U.S. 这部分介绍了西班牙建筑行业的总体情况。西班牙的建筑行业，与美国的建 筑行业有所不同，对于进入该行业提供了几项便利的条件。 问题：词的重复。 你的改写： 8. My experience with respect to communication in a business environment has been limited, although I do have some background in communicating in an organizational setting as a result of various positions I held in student government. 尽管我在学生自治会担任过各种职务，对于在组织环境中 进行交流有一些背景，但我对于在商业环境中的交流经验还是有限。 limited, although I do have some background in communicating in an organizational setting as a result of various positions I held in student government. 尽管我在学生自治会担任过各种职务，对于在组织环境中 进行交流有一些背景，但我对于在商业环境中的交流经验还是有限。 8. My experience with respect to communication in a business environment has been 问题：不必要的词。 你的改写： 9. In serving these customers, Club Med needs to meet the service and facility expectations which accompany these travelers. 在服务这些消费者时，俱乐部调解人需要满足这些旅行者的服务和便利需求。 9. In serving these customers, Club Med needs to meet the service and facility 问题：堆叠的名词（… 服务和便利需求） 你的改写：
10. The World Bank hasudasyn thesfrsours The 世界银行研究天资海的成本。北报告表明型时哥的资源是世界上服宜 的中个 原器的 。公可当的 的同 12. 保整少平行的 评分标准 问题设置将按0、1、2评分，分效主发反映找入精力的多少
10. The World Bank has conducted a study on the cost of natural resources. The World Bank report shows that Mexico's resources are one of the cheapest in the world. 世界银行研究天然资源的成本。其报告表明墨西哥的资源是世界上最便宜 的其中一个。 World Bank report shows that Mexico's resources are one of the cheapest in the world. 世界银行研究天然资源的成本。其报告表明墨西哥的资源是世界上最便宜 的其中一个。 10. The World Bank has conducted a study on the cost of natural resources. The 问题：不必要的词。 你的改写： 11. Corporate tax rates in Thailand are currently the sixth lowest in the developing world. Corporate tax is currently 35%, which is low by the standards of the developing world. 泰国的公司税率目前是发展中世界里第六低的。公司当前的税 率是35%，根据发展中国家的标准这是很低的。 world. Corporate tax is currently 35%, which is low by the standards of the developing world. 泰国的公司税率目前是发展中世界里第六低的。公司当前的税 率是35%，根据发展中国家的标准这是很低的。 问题：不必要的词。 你的改写： 12. In addition, the Ningbo area offered additional benefits of being close to the potential market, close to available employee pools, and easy deep-water port access. 此外，宁波地区还有接近潜在市场，靠近可利用的劳动力储备，容易到 达深海港口这些额外的优点。 potential market, close to available employee pools, and easy deep-water port access. 此外，宁波地区还有接近潜在市场，靠近可利用的劳动力储备，容易到 达深海港口这些额外的优点。 问题：缺少平行结构 你的改写： 评分标准 问题设置将按0、1、2评分，分数主要反映投入精力的多少。 评分，分数主要反映投入精力的多少