Course Rhetoric Advanced Grade 13 Level of Undergraduate Name English Writing Specialization Instructor 杨劲 Professional Professor Size of Class S(30students) Classroom 松 Tittle Hours Chapter of Lesson Zero Theory and Typical Sentence Pattern Main Course Book Advanced English Writing Reference Books ECNUP Objective Requirements: Get the students the idea that the nature of being private of writing is subordinate to the nature of being public and the individuality of writing must give way to the popularization of writing. Contents of Teaching,Timing of Instruction Teaching Methods Contents of Teaching,Timing of Instruction 1 Introduction:(25 minutes) Theoretical interpretation of zero of language Theoretical interpretation of sentence patterning 2 Operation of sentence patterns based on zero theory(50 minutes) Typical patterns patterns for comparison and contrast patterns for reasoning patterns for emphasizing patterns for exemplification patterns of cause and effect 3 Summary and Assignments Teaching method:CAJ,Explanation,talking,discussion,demonstration Key Points Difficult Points: Difficult Points Theoretical interpretation Important Points: Theoretical interpretation Making sentences with Typical patterns Review Comments of Faculty Director: Signature of Faculty Director: Date Month Year Teaching Plan Lesson No.9 Lecture Schedule:2016-4-27 Content Aids Methods Time Allocation
Course Name Rhetoric & Advanced English Writing Grade 13 Level of Specialization Undergraduate Instructor 杨劲 松 Professional Tittle Professor Size of Class S(30students) Classroom Hours 2 Chapter of Lesson Zero Theory and Typical Sentence Pattern Main Course Book & Reference Books Advanced English Writing ECNUP Objective & Requirements： Get the students the idea that the nature of being private of writing is subordinate to the nature of being public and the individuality of writing must give way to the popularization of writing. Contents of Teaching, Timing of Instruction & Teaching Methods Contents of Teaching, Timing of Instruction 1 Introduction: (25 minutes) Theoretical interpretation of zero of language Theoretical interpretation of sentence patterning 2 Operation of sentence patterns based on zero theory (50 minutes) Typical patterns patterns for comparison and contrast patterns for reasoning patterns for emphasizing patterns for exemplification patterns of cause and effect 3 Summary and Assignments Teaching method: CAJ,Explanation, talking, discussion, demonstration Key Points & Difficult Points： Difficult Points Theoretical interpretation Important Points: Theoretical interpretation Making sentences with Typical patterns Review Comments of Faculty Director： Signature of Faculty Director： Date___Month____Year_____ Teaching Plan Lesson No.9 Lecture Schedule：2016-4-27 Content Aids & Methods & Time Allocation
Greeting 20m Lead in CAJ the wheel composed of 30 spokes is Stepl:Explain the meaning In the ancient useful,not in terms of the object wit of Zero in Laozi. philosophy,the spokes,but in terms of the empty part Examples are used meaning of“0”lies within spokes. in the hollow space When we turn clay into vessels used as Step2:Explain the surrounded by containers,and the usefulness lies not in the mode from clay,but in the importance of typical curves instead of empty space in the vessels. patterns in English with the curves themselves idea of Zero .The implication is We pierce doors and windows to make a house;and the usefulness lies notin that the physicalentities,but the spaces where there is nothing. It is evident that"zero"doesn't mean nothing or vacuum,but denote the sense of"having",Types,vessels,windows and walls take various forms as diverse“deviation'forms,.which appeared for the concept of“zero” Example for understanding of zero as 'eme'in The concept of“zero-degree”is like‘eme'in phonology. phonology A young fellow asks a girl: "What sing were you born under?" I was born under what..” Demonstrate the motivation Here "what"can be seen as zero-degree vacancy 12 different animals as of zero the relationship zodiacal signs constitute concrete forms of deviation from zero-degree between zero and typical patterns for the purpose that vacancy. typical patterns work as Learners are not only eme”in syntax just as required with skills of differing modes of eme”in phonology. expression.but also Therefore,in English Just as Wang writes human the knowledge of beings exhibit zero-degree writing,on one hand,people language rules that for everything in this world. should know how to produce keep the language a which is a yardstick for varied sentence expressions knowing.describing. system. from typical patterns analyzing and evaluating Stress is laid on things patterning of sentences,the scaffold for 开inode9 The facts of language present themselves.with universality as fundamental existing form
Greeting Lead in It is evident that “zero” doesn’t mean nothing or vacuum, but denote the sense of “having”, Types, vessels, windows and walls take various forms as diverse “deviation” forms, which appeared for the concept of “zero”. The concept of “zero-degree” is like ‘eme’ in phonology. A young fellow asks a girl: “What sing were you born under?” “I was born under what.” Here “what” can be seen as zero-degree vacancy 12 different animals as zodiacal signs constitute concrete forms of deviation from zero-degree vacancy. 20m CAJ Step1: Explain the meaning of Zero in Laozi. Examples are used Step2: Explain the importance of typical patterns in English with the idea of Zero Example for understanding of zero as ‘eme’ in phonology Demonstrate the motivation of zero the relationship between zero and typical patterns for the purpose that typical patterns work as “eme” in syntax just as “eme” in phonology. Therefore, in English writing, on one hand, people should know how to produce varied sentence expressions from typical patterns
1.Typical patterns for comparisons and contrasts 50 minutes For rose growers,those who distribute roses.and those who sell,this Pattern Drill year's anticipated 7%increase in sales will be sweeter than a 5-pound box of 10 minutes chocolate candy. Typical patterns for 对玫瑰花种植商、分销商及零售商来说，预计今年的销售量将增加 comparisons and contrasts 7%,这个数字比一盒5磅重的巧克力糖还要甜蜜。 Stepl:Demonstrate the For those who,sth.is more.than sth.else.对那些…人来说，某事要 original sentence from a 比别的事更… classic text. 应用：a对那些从事管理工作的专业人士来说，与人共事的能力要比扎 Step2:Translate the sentence 实的专业技术更重要。 Step3:Extract the patterns For those professionals who are engaged in management,the ability to work Step4:Practice with people is more important than the sound professional skill. 应用：b.对那些追求家庭生活温馨的人来说，配偶的内在素质要比外表更 可靠、更可取。 For those who go after the warmth of family life,the spouse's interiors are more reliable and more desirable than his/her exteriors. While discount rose retailers watch their business bloom,U.S.rose growers are going bankrupt amid severe foreign competition. 在折价玫瑰花零售店生意兴隆的同时，美国的玫瑰种植商却在残酷的外 来竞争中濒临破产。 While sb.watches his business/career/study etc. bloom/thrive/boom/prosper etc.,sb.else is undergoing sth. unfortunate/.distressing ete..在某人目睹其生意/事业/学业等兴旺发达 的同时，别人正在经历不幸的事情。 应用：a.在我们看着沿海地区日益繁荣的同时，贫困地区许多失学儿童 却亟需我们的关爱。 While we watch the coastal areas thrive with each passing day,many of the children unable to go to school in the poverty-stricken regions are seriously in need of our love and care. 应用：b.月儿弯弯照九州，几家欢乐几家愁。 With the earth bathed in the rays of the moon,some families are worrying about their life while some watch theirs filled with happiness
1. Typical patterns for comparisons and contrasts 原句:For rose growers, those who distribute roses, and those who sell, this year’s anticipated 7% increase in sales will be sweeter than a 5-pound box of chocolate candy. 对玫瑰花种植商、分销商及零售商来说，预计今年的销售量将增加 7％，这个数字比一盒5磅重的巧克力糖还要甜蜜。 For those who…, sth. is more…than sth. else. 对那些······人来说，某事要 比别的事更······ 应用：a.对那些从事管理工作的专业人士来说，与人共事的能力要比扎 实的专业技术更重要。 For those professionals who are engaged in management, the ability to work with people is more important than the sound professional skill. 应用：b.对那些追求家庭生活温馨的人来说,配偶的内在素质要比外表更 可靠、更可取。 For those who go after the warmth of family life, the spouse’s interiors are more reliable and more desirable than his / her exteriors. 原句:While discount rose retailers watch their business bloom, U.S. rose growers are going bankrupt amid severe foreign competition. 在折价玫瑰花零售店生意兴隆的同时，美国的玫瑰种植商却在残酷的外 来竞争中濒临破产。 While sb. watches his business/career/study etc. bloom/thrive/boom/prosper etc., sb. else is undergoing sth. unfortunate/distressing etc. 在某人目睹其生意／事业／学业等兴旺发达 的同时，别人正在经历不幸的事情。 应用：a.在我们看着沿海地区日益繁荣的同时，贫困地区许多失学儿童 却亟需我们的关爱。 While we watch the coastal areas thrive with each passing day, many of the children unable to go to school in the poverty-stricken regions are seriously in need of our love and care. 应用：b.月儿弯弯照九州，几家欢乐几家愁。 With the earth bathed in the rays of the moon, some families are worrying about their life while some watch theirs filled with happiness. 50 minutes Pattern Drill 10 minutes Typical patterns for comparisons and contrasts Step1:Demonstrate the original sentence from a classic text. Step2: Translate the sentence Step3:Extract the patterns Step4: Practice
2.Typical patterns for reasoning 10 minutes 原句：After all,most of the people who die in earthquakes are killed by Typical patterns for falling buildings.Therefore,building structures that can withstand the power reasoning of earthquakes is a major concern. Stepl:Demonstrate the 要知道，多数在地震中丧生的人都是被倒塌的建筑物砸死的。所以，建 original sentence from a 造具有抗震能力的楼房结构成为关注的重点。 classic text After all,,..(理由)Therefore,..is a major concern/emphasis.(观点) Step2:Translate the sentence 要知道/毕竟，…所以，…是关注的重点。 Step3:Extract the patterns 应且：a.要知道，我们仍然是一个发展中国家。所以，如何使我们的 Step4:Practice 国民经济保持可持续发展将是关注的重点。 After all,we are still a developing country.Therefore,how to keep our economic development sustainable will be a major concern. 应用：b.要知道，未来社会更看重具备综合素质的人才。所以，对大 学生的全面教育应是大学改革的重点所在。 After all,the future society will attach more weight to those with comprehensive qualities.Therefore,carrying out all-round education on students should be a major emphasis for the college reforms. 10 minutes Typical patterns for 3.Typical patterns for emphasis emphasis 原句：Perhaps most interesting,and most easily measured,is a chemical Stepl:Demonstrate the change in ground water before a quake. original sentence from a 也许最有趣、也最容易测量的，是地震前地下水发生的化学变化。 classic text. Perhaps most Particularly adj./PP,and most adj./PP,is... Step2:Translate the sentence 也许最/尤其…、也最…的，是… Step3:Extract the patterns 应用：a.也许最难能可贵、也最令人钦佩的，是他出污泥而不染的品 Step4:Practice 质。 Perhaps most remarkable,and most admirable,is his virtue of remaining honest in spite of general corruption. 应用：b.尤其令人神往，也最令人难忘的，是这里的美景给我们的心灵 所带来的震撼 Particularly fascinating,and most unforgettable,is the extent to which the beautiful scenery here has shocked our souls. 原句： Also important is an arrangement for family members to communicate if there is an earthquake.同样重要的是安排好家人地震时的 联络方式。 Also十ad.(for sb.)is..(if/when.)(对某人来讲)同样…的是
2. Typical patterns for reasoning 原句: After all, most of the people who die in earthquakes are killed by falling buildings. Therefore, building structures that can withstand the power of earthquakes is a major concern. 要知道，多数在地震中丧生的人都是被倒塌的建筑物砸死的。所以，建 造具有抗震能力的楼房结构成为关注的重点。 After all, …(理由) Therefore, …is a major concern / emphasis. (观点) 要知道／毕竟，······ 所以，······是关注的重点。 应用： a. 要知道，我们仍然是一个发展中国家。所以，如何使我们的 国民经济保持可持续发展将是关注的重点。 After all, we are still a developing country. Therefore, how to keep our economic development sustainable will be a major concern. 应用： b. 要知道，未来社会更看重具备综合素质的人才。所以，对大 学生的全面教育应是大学改革的重点所在。 After all, the future society will attach more weight to those with comprehensive qualities. Therefore, carrying out all-round education on students should be a major emphasis for the college reforms. 3. Typical patterns for emphasis 原句:Perhaps most interesting, and most easily measured, is a chemical change in ground water before a quake. 也许最有趣、也最容易测量的，是地震前地下水发生的化学变化。 Perhaps most / Particularly + adj. / PP, and most + adj. / PP, is… 也许最／尤其······、 也最······的，是······ 应用：a. 也许最难能可贵、也最令人钦佩的，是他出污泥而不染的品 质。 Perhaps most remarkable, and most admirable, is his virtue of remaining honest in spite of general corruption. 应用：b. 尤其令人神往，也最令人难忘的，是这里的美景给我们的心灵 所带来的震撼 Particularly fascinating, and most unforgettable, is the extent to which the beautiful scenery here has shocked our souls. 原句: Also important is an arrangement for family members to communicate if there is an earthquake. 同样重要的是安排好家人地震时的 联络方式。 Also ＋ adj. (for sb.) is …(if / when…) (对某人来讲)同样······的是······ 10 minutes Typical patterns for reasoning Step1:Demonstrate the original sentence from a classic text. Step2: Translate the sentence Step3:Extract the patterns Step4: Practice 10 minutes Typical patterns for emphasis Step1:Demonstrate the original sentence from a classic text. Step2: Translate the sentence Step3:Extract the patterns Step4: Practice
应用：a.目前对政府来讲同样紧迫的是如何广开就业门路 Also pressing for the government at present is how to open all available channels for employment. 应用：b.对于家长同样要紧的是教会孩子在遇到危险的时候如何保护自 己。 Also urgent for the parents is to teach their child how to protect himself/ herself when in danger. 4.Transitional patterns for offering examples: 10 minutes 原句：The following are a few examples of countries undertaking new Typical patterns for offering environmental initiatives. examples Stepl:Demonstrate 下面就是几个正在采取环境保护新举措的国家的例子。 the original sentence from a The following Here are a few some typical examples of sth.or sb. classic text. doing sth.下面就是几个/一些/典型的某事或某人做某事的例子。 Step2:Translate the sentence 应用：a.下面是几个在自己的事业中表现出了强烈兴趣并做出不懈努力 Step3:Extract the patterns 的人们的典型例子。强烈的兴趣和不懈努力是人类一切活动成功的关键 Step4:Practice 因素。 Here are some typical examples of people showing in their careers intense interest plus persistent effort,which is the key factor to the success in every human activity. 应里：b.下面是几个人的例子，这些人常常把看上去可浪费的时间充分 利用起来，使之产生效率。 The following are a few examples of men who tend to make the normally wasted hours useful and productive. 10 minutes Typical patterns for showing results 5.Typical patterns for showing results: Stepl:Demonstrate the 原句：What happens is that the hotter people get,physiologically,.with original sentence from a mental stress,the more likely they are to blow apart with some heart problem. classic text. 此时就会发生这种情况一人们由王心理上的压力在生理上变得越激动， Step2:Translate the sentence 他们的身体就越可能因为某种心脏病而垮下来。 Step3:Extract the patterns What happens is that the more sb or sth....with...,the more likely sh.or Step4:Practice sth.is to...with... 此时就会发生这种情况一某人或某事由于…变得越…， 某人 或某事就越可能因为…而… 应用：a.随着高考临近，会发生这样的情况一由于父母过高的期望孩 子越发焦虑，他们就越可能因为压力太大而发挥差。 With the college entrance exams drawing nearer,what happens is that the more anxious the children get with their parents'high expectations,the more likely they are to perform poorly with the excessive stress
应用：a. 目前对政府来讲同样紧迫的是如何广开就业门路 Also pressing for the government at present is how to open all available channels for employment. 应用：b. 对于家长同样要紧的是教会孩子在遇到危险的时候如何保护自 己。 Also urgent for the parents is to teach their child how to protect himself / herself when in danger. 4. Transitional patterns for offering examples： 原句: The following are a few examples of countries undertaking new environmental initiatives. 下面就是几个正在采取环境保护新举措的国家的例子。 The following / Here are a few / some / typical examples of sth. or sb. doing sth. 下面就是几个/ 一些/ 典型的某事或某人做某事的例子。 应用：a. 下面是几个在自己的事业中表现出了强烈兴趣并做出不懈努力 的人们的典型例子。强烈的兴趣和不懈努力是人类一切活动成功的关键 因素。 Here are some typical examples of people showing in their careers intense interest plus persistent effort, which is the key factor to the success in every human activity. 应用：b. 下面是几个人的例子，这些人常常把看上去可浪费的时间充分 利用起来，使之产生效率。 The following are a few examples of men who tend to make the normally wasted hours useful and productive. 5. Typical patterns for showing results: 原句: What happens is that the hotter people get, physiologically, with mental stress, the more likely they are to blow apart with some heart problem. 此时就会发生这种情况—人们由于心理上的压力在生理上变得越激动， 他们的身体就越可能因为某种心脏病而垮下来。 What happens is that the more sb. or sth.… with…, the more likely sb. or sth. is to… with… 此时就会发生这种情况 — 某人或某事由于 ······ 变得越 ······， 某人 或某事就越可能因为 ······ 而 ······ 应用：a. 随着高考临近，会发生这样的情况—由于父母过高的期望孩 子越发焦虑，他们就越可能因为压力太大而发挥差。 With the college entrance exams drawing nearer, what happens is that the more anxious the children get with their parents’ high expectations, the more likely they are to perform poorly with the excessive stress. 10 minutes Typical patterns for offering examples Step1:Demonstrate the original sentence from a classic text. Step2: Translate the sentence Step3:Extract the patterns Step4: Practice 10 minutes Typical patterns for showing results Step1:Demonstrate the original sentence from a classic text. Step2: Translate the sentence Step3:Extract the patterns Step4: Practice
应用：b.在健康的家庭生活氛围里，常常会出现这样的情况一孩子由 于父母恰如其分的表扬变得越自信，从而他们很可能会因为这种自信而 做得更好。 In a healthy atmosphere of family life,what often happens is that the more self-confident children get with parents'proper praises,the more likely they are to do even better with such self-confidence. Summary and Assignments 5 minutes The nature of being private of writing is subordinate to the nature of being public and the individuality of writing must give way to the popularization of writing. The facts of language present themselves,with universality as fundamental existing form. The nature of writing implies that writing is phatic and social. As a way of thinking,Laozi's idea of"Tao and "name reflects his ceaseless pursuit of the significance of“zero” In this course stress is laid on the zero concept of sentence that is the patterning of sentences. The nature of being private of writing is subordinate to the nature of being public and Summary the individuality of writing must give way to the popularization of writing.The facts of language present themselves,with universality as fundamental existing form.The nature of writing implies that writing is phatic and social
应用：b. 在健康的家庭生活氛围里，常常会出现这样的情况 — 孩子由 于父母恰如其分的表扬变得越自信，从而他们很可能会因为这种自信而 做得更好。 In a healthy atmosphere of family life, what often happens is that the more self-confident children get with parents’ proper praises, the more likely they are to do even better with such self-confidence. Summary and Assignments The nature of being private of writing is subordinate to the nature of being public and the individuality of writing must give way to the popularization of writing. The facts of language present themselves, with universality as fundamental existing form. The nature of writing implies that writing is phatic and social. 5 minutes Summary As a way of thinking, Laozi’s idea of “Tao and “name reflects his ceaseless pursuit of the significance of “zero”. In this course stress is laid on the zero concept of sentence that is the patterning of sentences. The nature of being private of writing is subordinate to the nature of being public and the individuality of writing must give way to the popularization of writing. The facts of language present themselves, with universality as fundamental existing form. The nature of writing implies that writing is phatic and social
Typical patterns 1 patterns of reasoning Homework 2 patterns of emphasizing 3 patterns of comparing and contrasting 4 patterns of exemplification 5 patterns of cause and effect Find more than two sentences containing the typical patterns everyday Writing Effective Sentences Operation of Positive Deviation Addition Key Points of Pre- Tightening studying Substitution Implementation and Analysis
Homework Typical patterns 1 patterns of reasoning 2 patterns of emphasizing 3 patterns of comparing and contrasting 4 patterns of exemplification 5 patterns of cause and effect Find more than two sentences containing the typical patterns everyday. Writing Effective Sentences Key Points of Prestudying Operation of Positive Deviation Addition Tightening Substitution Implementation and Analysis