Course Rhetoric Advanced Grade 13 Level of Undergraduate Name English Writing Specialization Instructor 杨劲松 Professional Professor Size of Class S(30students) Classroom ny Tittle Hours Chapter of Lesson The Motivation of Lexical Rhetoric in English Writing Deviation Main Course Advanced English Writing Book ECNUP Reference Books Objective Requirements: Get the students have the idea of motivation of lexical rhetoric in English: Deviation result from the discrepancy between the language and the physical world Deviation result from the discrepancy between the language and the psychological world Deviation result from the discrepancy between the language and the cultural world Contents of Teaching,Timing of Instruction Teaching Methods Lead in and Deviation For The Lexical World 20 minutes Deviation For The Physical World 20 minutes Deviation For The Psychological World 15 minutes Deviation For The Cultural World 15 minutes Summary and assignments 10 minutes Teaching method:CAJ,Explanation,talking,discussion,demonstration Key Points Difficult Points: Difficult Points Triangle theory for understanding the principle of lexical deviation Important Points: Strategies of Deviation in four world Review Comments of Faculty Director: Signature of Faculty Director: Date Month Year Teaching Plan Lesson No.7 Lecture Schedule:2016-4-13 Content Aids Methods Time Allocation
Course Name Rhetoric & Advanced English Writing Grade 13 Level of Specialization Undergraduate Instructor 杨劲松 Professional Tittle Professor Size of Class S(30students) Classroom Hours 2 Chapter of Lesson The Motivation of Lexical Rhetoric in English Writing : Deviation Main Course Book & Reference Books Advanced English Writing ECNUP Objective & Requirements： Get the students have the idea of motivation of lexical rhetoric in English: Deviation result from the discrepancy between the language and the physical world Deviation result from the discrepancy between the language and the psychological world Deviation result from the discrepancy between the language and the cultural world Contents of Teaching, Timing of Instruction & Teaching Methods Lead in and Deviation For The Lexical World 20 minutes Deviation For The Physical World 20 minutes Deviation For The Psychological World 15 minutes Deviation For The Cultural World 15 minutes Summary and assignments 10 minutes Teaching method: CAJ,Explanation, talking, discussion, demonstration Key Points & Difficult Points： Difficult Points Triangle theory for understanding the principle of lexical deviation Important Points: Strategies of Deviation in four world Review Comments of Faculty Director： Signature of Faculty Director： Date___Month____Year____ Teaching Plan Lesson No.7 Lecture Schedule：2016-4-13 Content Aids & Methods & Time Allocation
Greeting Teaching plan 20m Introduction CAJ What is lexical deviation Stepl:explain what is lexical Lexical deviation is defined as neologism or the coinage of new words, deviation which is invented by breaking rules of word-formation and extends the Step2:summarize the ways rules as well. of deviation What are the ways of deviation Step3:use a humor to explain In most cases,lexical deviation falls into the following the lexical deviation and its categories: rhetorical effects. Coinage Affixation Broken word Blending?拼缀法 Dynamite A TV reporter wanted to find out what people thought of a new film,so she decided to interview people as they came out of the theatre.She asked one woman what she thought of the film."It was excellent."The woman replied."I thought it was the best film I've seen in years."Then she stopped a young man and asked him the same question."It was dynamite!"he said.He was surprised to see the reporter dived to the ground and covered her ears.He bent down to ask her what the trouble was. "Where is it ?"She whispered. Where's what ?"he asked. "The dynamite !"she shouted."Where's the dynamite?" 1.explosive that contains nitroglycerin 2.someone or something very exciting Conclusion: The humor lies in different understanding of the word dynamite. One language sign may convey different implications.Your understanding 20 minutes maybe deviates from his or hers. Use the examples to explain the lexical deviation. Deviation For The Physical World Cousins in Chinese family are classified on both father's and mother's sides..They are堂兄and堂弟(elder and younger cousin,)堂姐and堂 妹(elder and younger sister cousin),on the father's side and表兄，表弟 (elder and younger brother cousin),表姐and表妹(elder and younger sister cousin)on the mother's side. Not every concrete thing can find the language sign. On the other hand,not every language sign can find the right thing in the physical word. He is no angel at school
Greeting Teaching plan Introduction What is lexical deviation ? Lexical deviation is defined as neologism or the coinage of new words, which is invented by breaking rules of word-formation and extends the rules as well. What are the ways of deviation ? • In most cases, lexical deviation falls into the following categories: Coinage Affixation Broken word Blending拼缀法 Dynamite A TV reporter wanted to find out what people thought of a new film, so she decided to interview people as they came out of the theatre. She asked one woman what she thought of the film. “It was excellent.” The woman replied. “I thought it was the best film I’ve seen in years.” Then she stopped a young man and asked him the same question. “It was dynamite!” he said. He was surprised to see the reporter dived to the ground and covered her ears. He bent down to ask her what the trouble was. “Where is it ?” She whispered. “Where’s what ?” he asked. “The dynamite !” she shouted. “Where’s the dynamite?” 1.explosive that contains nitroglycerin 2.someone or something very exciting Conclusion: The humor lies in different understanding of the word dynamite. One language sign may convey different implications. Your understanding maybe deviates from his or hers. Deviation For The Physical World Cousins in Chinese family are classified on both father’s and mother’s sides. They are 堂兄 and 堂弟 (elder and younger cousin), 堂姐 and 堂 妹 (elder and younger sister cousin), on the father’s side and 表兄, 表弟 (elder and younger brother cousin), 表姐 and 表妹(elder and younger sister cousin) on the mother’s side. Not every concrete thing can find the language sign. On the other hand, not every language sign can find the right thing in the physical word. He is no angel at school. 20m CAJ Step1: explain what is lexical deviation Step2: summarize the ways of deviation Step3: use a humor to explain the lexical deviation and its rhetorical effects. 20 minutes Use the examples to explain the lexical deviation
Illustration of triangle theory Reference/Concept (Connotation): Use the triangle theory to desolate,icy,dead,treeless,bitter,barren,snow,cold,chill, explain the motivation of white lexical deviation. Explain the motivation of Referent deviation from the (thing/denotation): relationship between the coldest season of reference,symbol and Symbol word) referent. the year,induding the winter months of December, Compare the use of the word January,and February “went lexical Deviation is unavoidable. around',”nosed'',”negotiated and analyze the principle of deviation. The car went around the corner carefully. The car nosed the corner with ease. The car negotiate the corner carefully. Summary Choosing the appropriate word is essential in expressing your ideas 15 minutes accurately and decently. Explain the idea of deviation Words are appropriate when they suit your subject and the purpose of your for the psychological world. writing,the role you are assuming,the attitude you want to project,and Pair discussion of the the readers you are writing for. rhetorical difference between the normal expression and Diction is the choice and the use of words which convey deviating euphemism implications. Deviation For The Psychological World Question 1 the poor 1 the needy---the culturally deprived---underprivileged Making a conclusion 2 poor nations 2 undeveloped nations/developing nations emerging nations 3 underachievers_ 3 exceptional students/the below average students/students working on his own level /students can do better with help Path of thinking: How does euphemism come Euphemism:is the substitution of a mild or vague expression for a harsh or unpleasant one. Deviation is a kind of rhetorical strategy by deviated expression for saving face
The car went around the corner carefully. The car nosed the corner with ease. The car negotiate the corner carefully. Summary Choosing the appropriate word is essential in expressing your ideas accurately and decently. Words are appropriate when they suit your subject and the purpose of your writing, the role you are assuming, the attitude you want to project, and the readers you are writing for. Diction is the choice and the use of words which convey deviating implications. Deviation For The Psychological World 1 the poor 1 the needy ---the culturally deprived ---underprivileged 2 poor nations 2 undeveloped nations / developing nations emerging nations 3 underachievers 3 exceptional students /the below average students/ students working on his own level /students can do better with help Path of thinking: How does euphemism come ? Euphemism: is the substitution of a mild or vague expression for a harsh or unpleasant one. Deviation is a kind of rhetorical strategy by deviated expression for saving face. Illustration of triangle theory Use the triangle theory to explain the motivation of lexical deviation. Explain the motivation of deviation from the relationship between reference, symbol and referent. Compare the use of the word “went around”,”nosed”,”negotiated” and analyze the principle of deviation. 15 minutes Explain the idea of deviation for the psychological world. Pair discussion of the rhetorical difference between the normal expression and euphemism Question Making a conclusion
15 minutes Deviation For The Cultural World Explain the idea of deviation for the cultural world. Discussion of the rhetorical differences in Chinese culture 爷爷奶奶 父母 and western culture. 兄妹 夫妻 好 Compare the two different translations 叔叔邓阿姨 開闲開妈 旅客登记时，须提供证明本人身份证。 1:Guests are requested to show their own ID when they check in at the hotel. 5 minutes 译文2：Please help us to speed up your check-in by presenting your ID Summary The usage of lexicons,the understanding of rich lexical connotations and the mastering of different expressions can be attained through the four interactive modules,namely,the linguistic world,physical world, psychological world and the cultural world. Assignments In literary circle,deviation is taken as poetic license or writer's license and it should be noted that deviation could occur at various linguistic level.We can have grammatical lexical,phonological,semantic and textual deviation.Now please give the examples for lexical deviation. Deviation could occur at various linguistic level.We can have grammatical lexical,phonological,semantic and textual deviation. Lexical deviation-At the lexical level,deviation occur when a word is over-use in a line or when there is collocation clash or when a strange lexical item is brought in.for example,the item or lexical item such as "allow""pirate"are peculiar to a particular setting and are used in deviation to the normal use of the word.It Summary could bec oinage,affixation,broken word and blending
Deviation For The Cultural World 旅客登记时，须提供证明本人身份证。 译文1：Guests are requested to show their own ID when they check in at the hotel. 译文2：Please help us to speed up your check-in by presenting your ID. Summary The usage of lexicons, the understanding of rich lexical connotations and the mastering of different expressions can be attained through the four interactive modules, namely, the linguistic world, physical world, psychological world and the cultural world. Assignments In literary circle, deviation is taken as poetic license or writer's license and it should be noted that deviation could occur at various linguistic level. We can have grammatical lexical, phonological, semantic and textual deviation. Now please give the examples for lexical deviation. 15 minutes Explain the idea of deviation for the cultural world. Discussion of the rhetorical differences in Chinese culture and western culture. Compare the two different translations 5 minutes Summary Deviation could occur at various linguistic level. We can have grammatical lexical, phonological, semantic and textual deviation. Lexical deviation – At the lexical level, deviation occur when a word is over-use in a line or when there is collocation clash or when a strange lexical item is brought in. for example, the item or lexical item such as “allow” “pirate” are peculiar to a particular setting and are used in deviation to the normal use of the word. It could bec oinage, affixation, broken word and blending
Assignments In literary circle,deviation is taken as poetic license or writer's license and it should Homework be noted that deviation could occur at various linguistic level.We can have grammatical lexical,phonological,semantic and textual deviation.Now please give the examples for lexical deviation. Writing Effective Sentences Hypotaxis Key Points of Pre- Parataxis studying The classes are well organized. The students are supposed to develop their rhetorical sense of language in English writing. Implementation The students should be encouraged to jot down the key points of the classes. and Analysis
Homework Assignments In literary circle, deviation is taken as poetic license or writer's license and it should be noted that deviation could occur at various linguistic level. We can have grammatical lexical, phonological, semantic and textual deviation. Now please give the examples for lexical deviation. Writing Effective Sentences Key Points of Prestudying Hypotaxis Parataxis Implementation and Analysis The classes are well organized. The students are supposed to develop their rhetorical sense of language in English writing. The students should be encouraged to jot down the key points of the classes