202 深圳市初中英语 空中课堂 九年级上册nit3 Writing 授课教师：卓柔君June 南山实验教育集团 园丁学校
2021 深圳市初中英语 空中课堂 九年级上册 Unit 3 授课教师：卓柔君 June 南山实验教育集团 园丁学校 Writing
1 To master some useful expressions about family life; Learning Objectives 2 To know about a Five-star writing process; 3 To write a short article about your own family life following the Five- star writing process
Learning Objectives To master some useful expressions 0 about family life; 1 02 To know about a Five-star writing process; To write a short article about your own family life following the Fivestar writing process. 03
CONTENTS 2 3 Lead-in Pre-writing While-writing Post-writing
CONTENTS 1 2 3 4 Lead-in Pre-writing While-writing Post-writing
01 Lead-in
01 Lead-in
Lead-in Family life in cities Poula interviewed two teenagers for a programme on family life.She asked them some questions.Here are their answers. Emily (aged 15) 5 No,they don't usually set rules for 1 Well,there are just three of us:my me,and since I'm a good daughter, they never punish me. mum,my dad and me. Emily's and Jerry's family life 2 Have I got many possesslons?Yes, 6 Well,I like our new flat.It's much I've got a lot of things:a big TV,a bigger than our last one.But I feel new computer and a mobile phone. lonely when my parents are away from home. 3 No,I'm not expected to do the housework. 4 We go out for dinner together sometimes,but my dad is often Family Family abroad on business,and my mum works too.We usually just do our own personal things. members activities Jerry (aged 14) 1 My mum,dad,grandma and my sister Rosie.Although it sometimes feels crowded in our little flat,we don't mind. 2 No,I haven't got many possessions.I have no interest in things like fashionable clothes.New fashions soon go out of date,don't they?That's what my grandma says. Possessions Rules Yes,I help with the housework.I wash the dishes and even iron my own shirts. My grandma says young people should learn to look after themselves. 4 Yes,we like doing things together.We eat meals together every day,and my family always come to school events. 5 Yes,I suppose they set some rules for me.For example,unless I finish all my Likes most homework,I can't watch TV,and I can't go out with my friends either. Housework about the family 6 I love all my family very much.We have a close relationship,and we always support each other. 35
1 Lead-in Emily’s and Jerry’s family life Family members Possessions Housework Family activities Rules Likes most about the family
Lead-in Task Write a short article about your family life Module 2 Writing My family life AYou are going to write a short article about your family life.Take notes using the ideas below or your own ideas. ccccccccccccccccccccccoccoc 1 the people in my family 2 our possessions 3 housework 4 what my family do together 5 rules 6 what I like and do not like about my family
Write a short article about your family life. 1 Lead-in Task
02 Pre-Writing
02 Pre-Writing
2 Pre-Writing 玄 安 安 玄 玄 Key Topic-related Drafting Editing Beautiful information expressions handwriting
2 Pre-Writing Key information Topic-related expressions Drafting Editing Beautiful handwriting
3 While-Writing
03 While-Writing
While-Writing Key information 玄☆☆☆☆ Step 1 Think about your own family life and fill in the mind map. My mum,my dad,my sister,brother and me Family Likes most members about the family Possessions A mobile phone,a laptop,etc. My family life Rules Housework Family activities
3 While-Writing Key information Family members Possessions Housework Family activities Rules Likes most about the family Step 1 Think about your own family life and fill in the mind map. My family life My mum, my dad, my sister, brother and me A mobile phone, a laptop, etc. …… …… …… ……