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即用格言、意语成习语总站全文。 Thus,we say work and play are both important in one's life,just as someone said "All work and no play makes jack a dull boy. 活要注意的是，井不是每篇文章都有一个正式的结尾。记叙文和描述文，随着放事讲完和描写详尽，也就白然结束了。但说理性强的说明文、论逃文都应有正式结尾。 Topic Sentence What's a topfc sentence? 主题句反缺段落的中心思想，是整个段落的出发点。结构严谨的段落通常都有主题句，或儿个段落合用一个主题句。段落主题句有助于帮励作者紧扣段落的中心思想，速行充分的扩张。主题句点明段落的内容，同时也限制了内容的范围。一个令人满意的主题句应该能够银好地引静整个段落，起到面龙点睛的作用。所以主题句是者贴切，是整个段落成败的关键，主愿句的构成主题句有两个部分构成：话愿和主题思想：话题蛋的是一段文章要提及的事件、人物等。主导思妇用来说明话思，起限定话墨发展方向的作用。主导思塑可以表达地点，时间、原因、结果，列举等等。 *The position of the topic sentence: it is usually placed at the very beginning.followed by supporting sentences to support the topic sentence.E.g: In recent years,study abroad had flourished.Thousands of scholars and students have gone to foreign countries to study.Many people are sparing no efforts in applying for going abroad. 主题句也可以位于段落的结尾。前面是提供细节的支持句，内容逐渐收拢，最后用一句总结性的主思句加以概括。 Every moming,we hear the shouts of the forest rangers echoing in the mountains, and sce women and young girls washing clothes and vegetables by the river and farmers working with hoes and ploughs in the fields the people in my native town are living a simple and peaceful life. But sometimes it is placed the middle. Califomians and new Englanders are both American.They speak the same language and abide by the same federal laws.But they are very different in their ways of life.Mobility-both physical and psychological-has made a great impression on the culture of Califomians,lack of mobility is the mark of the customs and mortality of new Englanders. 描写文 Description is painting a picture in words of a person,place,objeet,or scene

即用格言、谚语或习语总结全文。 Thus, we say work and play are both important in one’s life, just as someone said “All work and no play makes jack a dull boy.” 需要注意的是，并不是每篇文章都有一个正式的结尾。记叙文和描述文，随着故事讲完和描写详尽，也就自然结束了。但说理性强的说明文、论述文都应有正式结尾。 Topic Sentence What’s a topic sentence? 主题句反映段落的中心思想，是整个段落的出发点。结构严谨的段落通常都有主题句，或几个段落合用一个主题句。段落主题句有助于帮助作者紧扣段落的中心思想，进行充分的扩张。主题句点明段落的内容，同时也限制了内容的范围。一个令人满意的主题句应该能够很好地引导整个段落，起到画龙点睛的作用。所以主题句是否贴切，是整个段落成败的关键。 *主题句的构成主题句有两个部分构成：话题和主题思想。话题指的是一段文章要提及的事件、人物等。主导思想用来说明话题，起限定话题发展方向的作用。主导思想可以表达地点、时间、原因、结果、列举等等。 *The position of the topic sentence: it is usually placed at the very beginning, followed by supporting sentences to support the topic sentence. E.g： In recent years, study abroad had flourished. Thousands of scholars and students have gone to foreign countries to study. Many people are sparing no efforts in applying for going abroad. 主题句也可以位于段落的结尾。前面是提供细节的支持句，内容逐渐收拢，最后用一句总结性的主题句加以概括。 Every morning, we hear the shouts of the forest rangers echoing in the mountains, and see women and young girls washing clothes and vegetables by the river and farmers working with hoes and ploughs in the fields. the people in my native town are living a simple and peaceful life. But sometimes it is placed the middle. Californians and new Englanders are both American. They speak the same language and abide by the same federal laws. But they are very different in their ways of life. Mobility—both physical and psychological—has made a great impression on the culture of Californians, lack of mobility is the mark of the customs and mortality of new Englanders. 描写文 Description is painting a picture in words of a person, place, object, or scene

A description essay is generally developed through sensory details,or the impression of one's senses-sight,hearing.taste,smell and touch.Not all details are useful.The writer should choose those that help to bring out the dominant characteristic or outstanding quality of the person or thing descnbed,and leave those irrelevant ones,which,if included,would only distract the reader's attention from the main impression the writer wishes to give. *Description of a person In describing a person.the writer should not merely give details of his appearance.He should try to reveal the person's character,thoughts and feelings, which may be shown in what the person does and says or in how he behaves to others And it is important to grasp the characteristic features that distinguish him from all other people.Those features that he shares with others can be omitted.Peculiarities and idiosyncrasies of a person if any.should be included in the description,for they usually impress the reader deeply and give life to the person described. Model The sight of him as he came to the ten-o'clock class was in itself something that had to be recognized as dramatic.In the pleasant autumn or spring.men stood high on the steps or out on the turf in front and watched in the direction of Christ church to see who could catch the first glimpse of him. "There he comes!"somebody called,and then everybody who was in a position to see watched him as he hurried breezily along-a graceful,tallish man in very light gray suit and gray fedora hat,with a full square beard at least as white as his suit,who moved with energy,and smoked passionately at a big cigar.Studerts used to say that he smoked an entire cigar while he walked the short distance along the iron fence of the old burying ground and across the street of Johnston gate.But as he came through the gate he tossed the remnant of his cigar into the shrubbery with a bit of a fourish. and the students still outside hurried in and scrambled up the long stairway in order to be in their places -as he liked-before he himself entered.If any of them were still on the stairway when he came in at the outer door like a gust,they gave way and he pushed up past them,and into the good-sized room down the aisle to the front,threw his hat on the table in the comer,mounted the two steps to the platform,looked about him with a commanding eye,and there was sudden silence and unrestrained cxpectancy. (by rollo walter brown) Description of a place Places may be described for their own sake,as in essays on visits to famous scenic places,but also for the purpose of revealing the personality and character of a person,or creating a feeling or moon.A clean and tidy room,for example,might show that the occupant is an orderly person.The howling of a chilly wind.the falling of autumn leaves,a bouse standing in solitude on a barren mountain,all help to build

A description essay is generally developed through sensory details, or the impression of one’s senses—sight, hearing, taste, smell and touch. Not all details are useful. The writer should choose those that help to bring out the dominant characteristic or outstanding quality of the person or thing described, and leave those irrelevant ones, which, if included, would only distract the reader’s attention from the main impression the writer wishes to give. *Description of a person In describing a person, the writer should not merely give details of his appearance. He should try to reveal the person’s character, thoughts and feelings, which may be shown in what the person does and says or in how he behaves to others. And it is important to grasp the characteristic features that distinguish him from all other people. Those features that he shares with others can be omitted. Peculiarities and idiosyncrasies of a person if any, should be included in the description, for they usually impress the reader deeply and give life to the person described. Model The sight of him as he came to the ten-o’clock class was in itself something that had to be recognized as dramatic. In the pleasant autumn or spring, men stood high on the steps or out on the turf in front and watched in the direction of Christ church to see who could catch the first glimpse of him. “There he comes!” somebody called, and then everybody who was in a position to see watched him as he hurried breezily along—a graceful, tallish man in very light gray suit and gray fedora hat, with a full square beard at least as white as his suit, who moved with energy, and smoked passionately at a big cigar. Students used to say that he smoked an entire cigar while he walked the short distance along the iron fence of the old burying ground and across the street of Johnston gate. But as he came through the gate he tossed the remnant of his cigar into the shrubbery with a bit of a fourish, and the students still outside hurried in and scrambled up the long stairway in order to be in their places ╟ as he liked—before he himself entered. If any of them were still on the stairway when he came in at the outer door like a gust, they gave way and he pushed up past them, and into the good-sized room down the aisle to the front, threw his hat on the table in the corner, mounted the two steps to the platform, looked about him with a commanding eye, and there was sudden silence and unrestrained expectancy. (by rollo walter brown) Description of a place Places may be described for their own sake, as in essays on visits to famous scenic places, but also for the purpose of revealing the personality and character of a person, or creating a feeling or moon. A clean and tidy room, for example, might show that the occupant is an orderly person. The howling of a chilly wind, the falling of autumn leaves, a house standing in solitude on a barren mountain, all help to build

up a somber mood and increase the feeling of depression.As in describing a person. in describing a place one should mainly write about the things that make it different from other places. Model 1 A free market With a shopping bag in my hand,I entered the gate of the free market near my home.Suddenly a terrible smell reached my nose and I could not help feeling nauseated.Looking around I found that the foul smell came from the poultry stalls on the left side of the street.There,every small cage was packed with four or five chickens oocasionally,the chickens crowed sadly as if they knew they were going to be cooked.The feed stank under the hot summer sun.I put a handkerchief of my nose and hurried away. "Live fish!Fresh and cheap!"a husky voice of a man was heard.In front of his stall,there stood a big canvas bag Inside,a lot of fish were struggling in the turbid( water.They opened their mouths widely to have their last breath of air.terrified at the price,I left for other stalls.Just then a young fellow stopped me and tried to persuade me to buy a chain of garlic in his hand.He was disappointed to see me shaking my bead. Then I came to the vegetable and fruit stalls which made up the busiest section of the market.A good variety of vegetables and fruits could be found here at summertime.Red tomatoes,green cucumbers and peppers were put at the most conspicuous places.the sweet smell of the fruits-peaches,plums,musk melons,and purple-colored grapes-had drawn many customers.The sellers were praising their produce in strong provineial accents and competing with each other by offering lower prices.Housewives would certainly drive a good bargain with the sellers before they really bought anything. At the far end of the market were the clothing stalls.Colorful clothes were hung up high to attract people's attention.There were quite a number of people but only few bought any clothes.A girl had stood at one of the stalls for a long time.Obviously she desired to have that fashionable skirt which was said to be made in Hong Kong But finally she left,for she was unwilling to pay almost her monthly wage of 80 yuan for it. After hours of shopping-choosing and bargaining.I left the free market. exhausted but quite satisfied,my bag full of'vegetables and fruits. Model 2 China lies on the west coast of the Pacifie Ocean it is surrounded by many neighbors...to the North,south.west,and by the northem sea.east sea and souther sea to the east It consists of about 26 provinces,(autonomy.).The capital is Peking which is located in the center of Hobei province with Tianjin city to the east locating on the coat of the Buo Sea And it is 200 kilometers away from Tianjin China has a total area of about 9.600.000 square kilometers. The land in the east is covered by improved agricultural land.the west regions are comprised mostly of mountains,plateau and desert in the center--high lands,Tibet Generally speaking.in

up a somber mood and increase the feeling of depression. As in describing a person, in describing a place one should mainly write about the things that make it different from other places. Model 1 A free market With a shopping bag in my hand, I entered the gate of the free market near my home. Suddenly a terrible smell reached my nose and I could not help feeling nauseated. Looking around I found that the foul smell came from the poultry stalls on the left side of the street. There, every small cage was packed with four or five chickens. occasionally, the chickens crowed sadly as if they knew they were going to be cooked. The feed stank under the hot summer sun. I put a handkerchief of my nose and hurried away. “Live fish! Fresh and cheap!” a husky voice of a man was heard. In front of his stall, there stood a big canvas bag. Inside, a lot of fish were struggling in the turbid(混浊的) water. They opened their mouths widely to have their last breath of air. terrified at the price, I left for other stalls. Just then a young fellow stopped me and tried to persuade me to buy a chain of garlic in his hand. He was disappointed to see me shaking my head. Then I came to the vegetable and fruit stalls which made up the busiest section of the market. A good variety of vegetables and fruits could be found here at summertime. Red tomatoes, green cucumbers and peppers were put at the most conspicuous places. the sweet smell of the fruits—peaches, plums, muskmelons, and purple-colored grapes—had drawn many customers. The sellers were praising their produce in strong provincial accents and competing with each other by offering lower prices. Housewives would certainly drive a good bargain with the sellers before they really bought anything. At the far end of the market were the clothing stalls. Colorful clothes were hung up high to attract people’s attention. There were quite a number of people but only few bought any clothes. A girl had stood at one of the stalls for a long time. Obviously she desired to have that fashionable skirt which was said to be made in Hong Kong. But finally she left, for she was unwilling to pay almost her monthly wage of 80 yuan for it. After hours of shopping—choosing and bargaining, I left the free market, exhausted but quite satisfied, my bag full of vegetables and fruits. Model 2 China lies on the west coast of the Pacific Ocean. it is surrounded by many neighbors… to the North, south, west, and by the northern sea, east sea and southern sea to the east. It consists of about 26 provinces, (autonomy.). The capital is Peking which is located in the center of Hobei province with Tianjin city to the east locating on the coast of the Buo Sea. And it is 200 kilometers away from Tianjin. China has a total area of about 9,600,000 square kilometers. The land in the east is covered by improved agricultural land, the west regions are comprised mostly of mountains, plateau and desert in the center--- high lands, Tibet. Generally speaking, in

浙江广播电视大学 文本 教学辅导3_高级英语写作

浙江广播电视大学文本教学辅导3_高级英语写作